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THIS MARKS PAYMENT FOR THE WEEK OF 3/25-3/31.

And an extra third script for March because there were five Saturdays this month, for page 416. Considering these two are technically the 'focus' of this arc either directly or indirectly, it was important that it led to this sort of really grounded, focused-yet-simple scene on this page and in the rest of the pages for this arc of them of them just sitting and talking. Starting with a sort of small-talk to distract from the issue helps ground it a bit as the conversation and seriousness/emotion continues.

Also I dunno if the doppelganger running joke is actually funny or not, it seemed funny to me when I was writing out the general outline for the story arc that people would keep looking at Bruce funny and asking if he was a clone because he wanted to actually do a nice thing for somebody he wasn't wooing romantically. Maybe it's just me staring at all these scripts together, cause there'll be plenty of real life time between the pages where the joke appears.

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