Week 202! (Patreon)

Script update 3, for page 422.

I'm probably going to go over and rewrite this outpouring of Campy's current anxieties by the time I get to actually drawing the page. It's supposed to be a bit of a stream of consciousness, Campy slipping and letting all his stress kind boil over a little unintentionally. Nothing concrete or deliberate, more a flow of emotions without too much order.

ALSO, I would like to state for the record that during the writing of this, for the first time, I realized that the son in this is Chris and the 'father' is Peter? And I didn't intend that to be a reference to certain shows in the slightest ever, Peter was supposed to be a generic Peter Rabbit thing. I simultaneously realized that I named Campy's mom (a rabbit) Judy, years before Zootopia was ever a thing, so Disney absolutely stole that from me for sure.