Week 213! (Patreon)

Alright, as promised, page 414 is done and here for you patrons to see in its completed form on Sunday. It'll go up publicly on the 2nd.

To comment on this page, I'm satisfied with the art more or less (I think Gus looks pretty cute mostly, and I like Bruce's snarl), but as time went on and as I worked on it more, I'm not wholly satisfied with the pacing. Bruce sort of jumps to furious outrage a bit too quickly here. He's supposed to be getting more and more irritated at simultaneously being unable to figure out what he wants to figure out and being bombarded by people trying to give him advice against his wishes, but I think the tiny bit of joke at the end of the previous page may have disrupted that flow. It's not quite the same problem as the ending of the last arc with the sudden jump to the end, and maybe it's just me having to think about it more than anyone else, but oh well. Hopefully the emotion still comes across alright, that's more the important bit, especially with the facial expressions.

Also hope you enjoyed Gus like you enjoyed Ashley and Eve cause like them he's gonna be sitting out again for a while.