Week 224! (Patreon)

And the second script preview update, the scrpt for page 433.

Corrupt capitalism, am I right? Anyway, this page has the important allusion I mentioned last month in the Week 220 update, and I suppose I decided to go very subtle, brief, and vague with it. It's specifically about WHO has robbed Connor of his reservation, which you won't get to see or find out who they are yet, but it's not incredibly hard to extrapolate and theorize some things from the script. That's about all I'll say about it for now.

As for Connor, these last two pages are supposed to be him showing the first signs of cracking, raising his voice in frustration/confusion and then pleading for things to work out, basically. He took the duplicate gift, lack of arcade, and skating injuries pretty well, but it's here where his slide down the slope is becoming apparent. Campy's still kind of taking things in stride, and he'll continue to, from a combination of him still probably quietly obsessing over his own problems and automatically falling into the 'rock' role for Connor as the date progresses.