Week 282! (Page 464 Script) (Patreon)

THIS MARKS PAYMENT FOR THE WEEK OF 12/29-1/4.

Okay, now, I'm gonna have to do this out of order this month where I put up the script updates and the monthly drawings first, but I'll get to that in a few posts. For now, this is the script for page 464.

I had to think for a while about who should be fighting who here for the sparring/training/whatever match. Could've been Kale vs. Lucy, Fox Kale vs. Lucy, or both Kales vs. Lucy, but ultimately I decided to do Kale vs. Fox Kale with Lucy observing. I think it makes the most sense that Lucy, who is supposed to be the teacher here, would first want to set a baseline by watching these two spar rather than just having the two of them go at her. Meta-wise it also avoids just making the fight sequence Lucy being sort of OP by having her dominate either Kale more than she already has. 

Additionally, this allows Kale and Fox Kale to fight each other again after hundreds of pages. Fox Kale at this point has maybe threatened Kale a few times but it's never been likely that he'd actually go through with trying to do the same thing he did back around page 100, trying to actually go after Kale again. At the same time, it's been brought up in this very story arc so far that Fox Kale "lost" to Kale, so the opportunity to have a rematch, even if it's not deadly stakes this time, would probably be very appealing and fresh on his mind.

So I decided this would be the best road to go down for this fight. And we get to see a fight again after so long! Which is something that was always supposed to be a thing in this concerning the mindscape stuff.