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I'm finally done with ep 2. It's taking me so much longer than I expected OTL

Anyway some of you requested for a side by side comparison so here's one. My initial idea was to have Tora only reveal his face during the photo scene, but in the revamp he's no longer a faceless dude. In this way I'm hoping that more people will get into the story right off the bat, since now they have a completely clear picture of who Tora is right from the get go.

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Elena Guerra

I am loving the color! Can't wait until these are published! You are amazing! You are my first and only patreon. 😊

Shania Nowhere

Honestly, I thought it was a different dude in the original comic. XD this is much clearer haha!

midoripickle

I mean, he's hot AF, so if that don't draw people into the story then I dunno what- XD

AlriRayne

Yas, girl. Lure the new readers in with that THIRST, lmao

Emily Basso

You’ve mentioned that this revamp was like getting a new lease on life and I have to agree 100%! You took an already beautiful story and have turned it into a even more breathtaking one! I actually gasped when I saw this update 😍❤️ if this new featured version doesn’t become an instant hit I’ll eat my shoe.

WickedEgg

It’s so beautiful! I’m looking forward to seeing the finished chapters!

HazelGreene

You're artwork is so amazing!

Lilydusk

Oh and I forgot to mention one of you guys (thank you so much!) commented about tora looking tanner than usual which made me go back and check the colour, and make some adjustments and I like it much better now. Thank you for pointing that out 😊😊

Lilith

Your artwork has improved so much. Even the background images look amazing. Well done 👏🏻

Felicia Gomez

You know, I really dislike the whole “discover squad” post on Webtoons...but I’m so gonna strive to do that for you. If you have a preference for a hashtag or a name for your followers...please tell me now. I’m gonna make it a thing!

Michelle Esquivel

The more I see Tora's face, the more I'm attracted to him. So this is a win for me 😍

Janfu

OMG I am loving the sneak peeks and new artwork! <3

Stephanie L Hawk

Damn, Lily, this looks phenomenal. Your art has improved in leaps and bounds. I am so damn excited to read the revamp!!!!

LadyVondergeist

Oh wow! This is incredible! I really love how your art has evolved yet it's still si 100% you. Love it! Also Tora.... Urgh 😍 *swoons and faints*

Schkaka

Love it! Poppy and Tora look amazing. 👏👏👏😍

Irene A

Absolutely loving the side by sides. And you are killing it! Your improvement is mind-blowing.

draatiinii

This is amazing. I’m so happy to have seen you grow this much.

Nlinz

She thicccc

Michelle N.

Ooh, all the colors and refined artwork makes your work seem so much more rich. It's so cool to see the improvements!

Sarah T

Wooo! That’s phenomenal! I’m so excited to see the whole thing!!

Penstemmon

Newest edition of Tora is very handsome but I am missing that image of a brute about him that made him a bit intimidating at first. Through the original it was very exciting/captivating to find out about his vulnerable and sensitive side after first being introduced to him as a somewhat obnoxious sexy brute. I think that conflict made him more attractive to me. The “discover squad” will still have that relationship to him but will new readers miss something important if he is just another strong and handsome man in a gang? (Maybe its irrelevant to your story.) Make him a brute again dammit! or maybe you’re doing that in panels we’ll see when actually published? Warehouse scene? I’m ever the party pooper, sorry.

Smol_dragon?

I love this side by side just to see the growth from the original to the revamp! Lily your work is amazing!!

Rachel Akau

This looks amazing!! I can't wait!!

Marissa DeLeon

Your art has really improved and become even better! It’s soo beautiful! 😍

Tia Ledvina

I LOVE the side by sides! It’s so cool to see not only how you’ve grown but the changes you’re making to the comic we know and love! So excited to read the revamped version!!

meimei

Love these side by sides! Before I thought it couldn’t be better but this really lets you see how much you have improved. So excited to reread this all again.

Emily Rosenbaum

Stunning! So proud to see your growth <3

Princess Nini

Wow ! These side by side panels are getting me pumped up !!! poppy is soo cute haha . Her personality shows more so it’s super easy to fall in love right away ! That last panel of Tora is just perfection . I like his build as well?? If that makes sense ... can’t wait to see how you revamp MPL!

LenaAlex

I love your artwork so much, it’s amazing to see the progress and how it’s all grown and changed.

Novicity

I'm in love with this

NurseAmethyst

Gah! I just can't get over how fricking gorgeous Tora is here! 💚👌💯

PBz

I love all the flowy hair it’s beautiful 😍