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The last few and next couple episodes will transition into a new major arc of the story, and I'm super excited to get the story going again! But...I feel like I've reached a part of the story that runs the risk of turning into a 'saggy middle'. So please bear with me if the pacing feels off, or if there are many plot threads you're dying to have answers to, but are still unresolved. This being a long-running series, some of the arcs have been written to run the whole length of the story, or at least a good portion of it. And because MPL is produced weekly, I sometimes get stuck, unknowingly, with a very 'micro' view of the story. And sadly, unlike a traditional novel or book series, I'm not able to go back and correct any missteps I might have taken. Thankfully I have the whole thing plotted out (at least, all the major plot points and the main story outline), which keeps me from straying too far from the main point 😅Anyway, just some random thoughts I've been having (and I guess a heads up). Thank you guys so much for having faith in me, and for being here with me every step of the way 💜This is my first long-running comic, and though it has been challenging, it's also been very fulfiling and a great learning experience, and I have no ragrets <3Have any thoughts, opinions or theories on this episode? Any burning, or non-spoiler questions you’d like to ask? Leave them down in the comments below. Let's discuss! <33  

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Shprinze

Poppy is going to defend him

Nordorr

Happy 50th episode!

Felicia Gomez

I like saggy middles? 😏 errr, prolly didn’t work out as well as I thought in my head! 😂 this is so great!

Nikole

Erdene is treating our Pops like a child and Tora is there to see her so uncomfortable 😭

Shay

Omg🥵🥵👏👏😍😍😍 and congrats on 50th episode!!! 🥳🥳🥳

Sakura Jane

Damnit erdene. Like tbh, erdene is now misunderstanding tora. That gives me an idea that poppy doesn’t have a mother figure in her life so she might felt like she has some trust issues. Erdene is being overprotected with poppy and trying to relate tora for her ex. We totally understand that he’s totally intimidating towards everyone but to poppy, he’s a sweetheart

Alison

Lol! Poor Jacob! Love it!

TanyaC9

I hope Poppy will stand up to Erdene. She doesn't know Tora. Just this first impression of him in his bodyguard mode. Poppy knows the sweetness in him. Erdene be here trying to put holes in the ship. No girl sit down and get to know him!!

Berner

I have to say congrats on this being your first long running comic because my god it’s is AMAZING. I can’t wait to watch the story unfold. I’m sure whatever you put in your episodes will keep up entertained. You haven’t failed me yet. I’m secured into this fandom. 💛

Christina Agan

Tora just walking around the office devouring any and all food that appears.

SOPHIA A

First thought Tora looks hot in a turtle neck! 😍 Second, I wonder if he's still looking for the book.

Girl Wonder Podcast

I feel like seeing Tora in the office is like spotting an actual tiger in the wild. He’s dangerous and beautiful. He’s mesmerizing and people don’t know how to react to him. Should they run away? Should they stand there in awe? I understand Erdene’s reaction. So excited to see what Poppy’s response will be! ALSO GIL DIDN’T SHOW UP, HUH? I’m putting my detective hat back on! I remain extremely suspicious of him.

Ele_Smiles

“What happens in Tora’s house, stays in Tora’s house?!”...Is this foreshadowing ? 😃

TicklemeAli

The BEST *cackles in feline* 🐅

Sighn00

Does anyone think that Tora would have heard that all (whispering between Poppy and Erdene)? As he does seem to have good hearing skills and can also pick up on body language very well too

Andy Salcedo

We're all grateful for your work!!

Ms Scorpia

I knew there would be someone who would throw a wrench in Tora and Poppy coming together but I never suspected Erdene! Et tu?

Andy Salcedo

My prediction is Poppy's going to kiss him and he'll go full tsundere on everybody and they'll laugh

Maja Guduras-Tyler

Erdene needs to stop with her toxic nonsense...don’t judge someone if you don’t know them!!!

razabbm1982

Saggy middles? But belly rolls are cute

Amber

Yaaas welcome back, babes!! Turtle neck Tora is so sexy 💗

CoCoPuff_BB

I dont like people judging other people and then trying to force the people around them to have negative thoughts about that person Like Tora is not a bad person and Poppy coworkers don't even know him. They shouldn't be so quick to judge n that strikes hard because done it to me and it is frustrating

Iwona Stanek

Truly I just need a Tora, please whatever God is out there: Send me a Tora

PetitLikeMe

I understand where Erdene comes from. Tora's first impressions are not the best, but I hope she will change that, when she sees that there is more to Tora. Can't wait to see if Poppy will say something to Erdene to defend Tora next episode 🐹💕.

Sandi C

So happy to have you back!! And Oh my GOSH I hope Poppy stands up for Tora!!

EmeryDiLoncrete

My heart! 💔 Erdene girl you're judging too fast and based on Quincey's dramatic words. I hope Poppy doesn't let that bother her, she knows how sweet, gentle and caring Tora is with her. Tora's face when he told Jacob...the BEST 😂😂😂😂 And.....what happened in Tora's house beside those passionate kisses??? 👀👀👀 And!!!!! Who's excited for the birthday party???? Will they claim each other as presents 🙃🙃🙃 I imagine Tora feeling uncomfortable with all the people, loud music and noise and craving a cigarette, but, he remembers that his reward system is standing right in front of him. He puts his hand on the small of her back and guides her to a dark corner and pins her to the wall while he slowly claims her mouth and this time is pure tongue action. 😌

Yolanda Miguez

He's totally low-key searching for that notebook. Also, I will NEVER get tired of seeing Tora stuffing his face. Who's really the hamster here, eh?

Sarkara 11

I sincerely hope Poppy stands up for Tora or at least reassures him that others opinions of him don't mean anything to her

A. Paz Díaz

Sweet baby Jesus Toras face when he said “the best”. I hate that Erdene is so judgmental. I hope she’d give him a chance since she seems to be so close to Poppy. Ps. I believe that Tora will definitely know something’s up with the shady boss. Maybe they know each other? Ps. Oh Tora ARE YOU A PUPPY (to be read with Janice from friends voice). THANK U LILY for today’s chapter ✨🙌🏼✨

Elizabeth

Erdene... Honey... Baby... C'mere... we need to have a chat.

Mariana Mahe

I Wonder if Jacob still got the "empty" notebook on his table...

Andrea

I KNEW AN EVENT HAS BEEN COMING!!! Black tie? Black eye!!!!?? Tora gets forced to watch people, DIRTY people hit on Poppy? People hitting on Tora? SEXY DRESS FOR POPPY NEEDED!!! Omg.

Lee4992

I felt shook for Jacob.....I was thinking if Tora is going to give Jacob a hard time the Julri doesn’t have a prayer.

Alex

I get the feeling that this birthday club thing is not gonna go well and the two are gonna sneak out and go to Regina peak together. That’s my thought at least (:

Sighn00

Also huge Congratulations @Lilydust on Episode 50 (milestone)!!!

Julia G

Erdene! You’re supposed to be Captain Quincey’s first mate on the MPL Toppy ship, get your shit together! Also, “What happens in Tora’s house, stays in Tora’s house.” 😏 I need directions...🤔 Hey, Quincey?! 😏

M M

So happy to have you back! Can’t wait to see what happens to all these great characters and story line you’ve hooked us on!

caseyjarryn

Congrats on 50 (amazing) episodes!! To be honest I love all the characters so much I'm happy just read on about them going about their days and probably wouldn't even notice if nothing 'major plot related' happened in an episode! 😂

Leslie

-cracks knuckles- Do I remember how to do this? Guess we’ll find out! AHHHHH Poppy over here lusting so hard she doesn’t know what to do with herself but she sure as HELL knows what she wants to do with Tora amiright ? Honnnneyyyy you know that ain’t gonna stay in Tora’s house, y’all are gonna be making out in a supply closet like this is a Shonda Rhimes drama in no time. But in the meantime, you go be your superstar editor corporate self. Personally I see Jacob as just the office-friend who teases a little too hard but OH man his lil squeaky terror of Tora is just the. most. satisfying. thing. Ever. DAMN Lily how did you get the creepysmile/scary-eyes so well? HOW? What sorcery is this? That’s the scariest damn panel I’ve ever seen you draw no wonder Jacob spends the next two panels wishing he could yeet himself straight out of this strip and into a different comic!! Ok, I don’t know if Quincey is putting on the innocent act to make Poppy feel more secure in their business partnership or if that’s just his genuine sunny self but either way I LOVE him for it. Gah. Wholesome Quincey is the sunshine we all need, fight me. And Poppy doing everything to make him feel welcome I just love these two nuggets uwu PERO LIKE WHERE THE HECK IS GIL He’s fishy. This dad joke is the hill I will die on, don’t @ me. Aaaaand it’s Lily with the distraction to get us all to stop fixating on Gil bein’ fishy! But like Y’all You forgot Bobby’s birthday. Ahem. -cracks knuckles- Ooooooh girl that deadpan “Yep.” She ain’t playin’ y’all. She miffed. When you tell people and they don’t remember?? A special kind of flat annoyance. I’ve been there girl. You go right ahead and be pissed….even as you try and justify it to make your friends feel better. POPS, put. Yourself. First. Please! God I love Erdene though for immediately thinking of how to fix it and for going to straight to what Poppy has previously expressed interest in doing – rather than immediately coming up with some sort of over-the-top, performative suggestion. QUINCEY sETTING uP PoPPy and ToRA foR their ShaRED BirtHDaAY ParTY this is going to go SO WRONG but right now I can’t see past the FLUFF AHHHHH (Poppy looks slightly terrified by this suggestion y’all that is FORESHADOWING right there, you know Vince is going to fuck this party all the way up I’m calling it now) -Jacob screams from offstage left- Me: oh no Tora honey what is you doin Cheesy scalloped zucchini and pecan-nut chips? I mean….there’s no accounting for taste? Jacob: -chaos, masculine panic, fear- Tora: -munch- The way Jacob shriveled up when Poppy walked up, you just KNOW Tora was stringing him up about those weight comments he made hehehehehe serves him right Please give me 58 straight episodes of just Quincey and Tora bein lil’ shits together, their banter is everything, “I would never” Tora you little asshole you Quince: -suspicion- Jacob: - terror- Tora: -munch- Oh. Oh, Erdene…whatchu doin? Tora got that spooky black aura goin on now, uh oh, oh no, we’ve only seen it like 5 times in 50 episodes and it means Tora ain’t playing now I’m ~nervous~. ….I kind of wonder why that particular comment set him off and why he’s showing that side in front of Poppy? Erdene, you’re showing your own baggage….there’s some serious Alpha-ing going on between Tora and Erdene right now over Poppy….. Not that Poppy is going to take it too seriously, but I find it really illuminating how Erdene sees Poppy as naive and just talks over her....another really interesting relationship to explore in the next episodes. Ok, I'm rusty at this, don't judge my incoherence too harshly, my analysis ain't as sharp as it used to be.

Embo

The pacing is feeling totally natural! Of course with big arcs and plot points there’s some time in between to transition- and that’s totally okay! I think these kinds of episodes help us get to know and explore the nuances of the characters we’ve grown to love. Also plenty of Tora and Poppy eye candy so I can’t complain 😜😍 keep it up Lily- we are as grateful and supportive as ever. 💜

BookDragon

No ragrets huh.. really, not even a single letter.. 🤣😂🤣😂🤣😂 love that movie!!

Sighn00

So at the joint Birthday party you know that Tora is going to get Poppy to cut the cake right, just so she has to kiss the nearest boy (Tora)!!!

Caslpk

Erdene. Why so judgey.

Keisha

I hope poppy doesn't listen to her friend she knows tora that apology speaks for the kind of person he is!

KimJungFun

❤❤❤Queen Lily!!!

Olga Kolusenko

Erdene, you know nothing! Poppy is smarter then taking Erdene’s words for truth without personally verifying right?!? Tora is obviously messing and Quincey is obviously drama queen. Dunno what pace slowdown Lily threatened with. It was plenty development by me!

TicklemeAli

Poppylan get ready bitch WE GOIN’ SHOPPING!!!!!

Emily Basso

So: “*first* long-running comic” made me so happy because I can cling to the notion that when MPL comes to a close, hopefully a long while from now, I can have more Lilydusk Magic to look forward to 😍 😍 😍 I can’t imagine life without stories this good, and I hope our lovely creator can deal with us diehards who are going to cling to her like spider monkeys for the rest of her existence 😂. I’m going to be 75 years old, removing my denchers to properly thirst over 2D men, which will then be in hologram form because… it’s the future and it has to get better than this right?? 2020 owes us the future promise of touchable webtoon characters drawn by Lily 🤣 🤣 🤣 (and no, she's not allowed to retire. She'll just have the ability to be cloned by then and can have them do all the work while she sips daiquiris by the beach and supervises) Anywho… Tora is a whole mood for this week. All I want to do is eat nonstop, radiate my little dark aura in peace, and maybe start a fight just for funsies. But while I could stare at the glorious panel of Tora’s terrifyingly sexy smirk, there was so much in this episode. 1. First off, Poppy ma girl, Tora is the opposite of nonchalant. I’ll take your inner daydreams of that kiss alllll episode, but don’t for one second think Tora’s not stressing about the same thoughts this whole time. If you turned around you’d see that look of death as you walk away. Homeboy ain’t chill. It might have seemed no-strings attached, but let’s be honest, that’s just a pretty little bed time story to help make things seem less awkward than they obviously are. Y’all are cute. Deal with it 😉 2. Look at Tora acting all “I’ve never been here before... Definitely didn’t search the place high and low already. Imma just lean on this desk all sexy and look menacing.” And poor Jacob is cast in the roll of “unnamed victim” in a Jaws spin off as Tora creeps up behind him. I can practically hear the dramatic music in my head. And let’s not pretend we all didn’t stop and ogle when Tora squatted down 👀 Why is that angle so hot? Why are they all so hot? Can you get hot flashes at 30? What are my hormones doing to me?? 3. And Tora sizing Jacob up? I like to imagine he’s trying to see Jacob through Poppy’s eyes as he does that little side glance. Just who is this little nerdy runt? (and I’ll be honest... Jacob is looking adorable here ❤️ IDK if it’s the giant eyes behind thick magnifying glasses or what but I kind of want to hug him and hide him in a closet until Tora leaves??). 4. But that smile…. GOD that smile. “The BEST”. Dead. How can such an angelic face look so menacing at the smile time? Flash back to “But people scream when I smile too, Fuck my face.” Yes, sir. Fuck your face. But it’s not your smile that’s the issue. It’s that your eyes are a gateway to your inner most thoughts. They’re intense with Poppy, withering with Quincey, lackluster with Vincent, and apparently murderous toward Jacob? Maybe start wearing sunglasses 😎 It’ll give Lily a break from working her Artistic Magic on those portals to the soul you call eyes. 5. Poppy’s birthday! So this was how our sneaky boy knew the date! Here we were, blaming Gyu for being a creeper. I’m sorry Gyu. Tora might not have found the notebook that night, but that break-in wasn’t a total waste. Why was it smudged though?? I’m missing something… 🤔 6. Poppy’s matter of fact attitude is a mood as well. “Yep”. I feel that so hard. Realistic approach to birthdays – sure, if they remembered it would have been sweet, but people have lives and it’s no big deal. No need for drama. But if Dene wants to celebrate belatedly? Awesome! 7. Quincey. Oh… my handsome little cupcake of oblivion. I might be wrong, sir, but I think that party is more your style than theirs. Dene is the clubbing type. But Poppy? And Tora?? Yeah, I’m not seeing it? “Large” party doesn’t exactly seem to fit them, but then again, I might be wrong. I know everyone’s mind went right to Secret Garden #79-80 right? Because I would be more than happy to see those two in a club. Maybe they’re not digging it? Maybe they sneak off and have a party of their own?? I mean… Okay. I take it back. Quincey, you are the best wingman of all time. 8. Andddddddd enter Nuisance Tora stage left. “It’s not what you think”… Okay, what have we got here? Webcam spy? Unsolicited diet coach? Night-from-hell-shoulder-to-lean-on phone call from Quincey’s? Which of these offenses triggered poor little Jacob’s panic attack? Or is it something new? DYING to know. Need the tea. Give me all the drama, please and thank you. 9. Poppy is the only one fully out there investigating while Quincey hides behind an equally reluctant Erdene? *Ma vaillante fille* 10. Freaking love Quincey and Tora together. Maybe more than Tora and Poppy?? Bromance for the win. And in my mind, Quincey is the embodiment of all webtoon creators 😂 Stuck dealing with well meaning, but overly passionate fans, clearly exasperated with having to baby sit while the reader (hi Tora) just munches on their snacks pretending everything is fine, and just wants to bitch and moan once and a while because it’s cathartic but then in comes the protective reader (hi there Dene) who is having NONE of whoever is hurting our beloved creator and is ready to pitchfork, tar, and feather… but really, these characters are just so damn relatable 🤣 11. But really… Poor Poppy. My husband is a bit of a rough diamond, and at the beginning of our relationship I got a few of those concerned comments. I’m a fan of “the grumpy one falling for the sunshine one” because quite frankly, sometimes I just wanna be grumpy with someone too, but the friends of the “sunshine one” tend to worry. Tora is a rough diamond as well. And this theme of “judging people before you know them” is continuing strong! Erdene is a fierce friend, and that’s an amazing quality, but Imma need her to back it the heck up, because she’s giving Poppy all kinds of panic, and my anxiety is sky rocking right with her. 12. And on that topic… “Get bored” MY ASS. Like, way to pick the one comment that will do the most damage here. Flash back to episode one with Poppy driving away from Julri. We just had that amazing revelation after she left Tora’s the other day, and now she might be thinking back to those previous thoughts of “What is this was all because of me? Did he get lonely?” or even Mimi’s comments about “the one who wasn’t ready”. I might be jumping the gun here, they’ve only kissed twice in very – as Poppy puts it – no strings attached situations, but she’s already confused about what Tora might want. Or what she might want. And Dene throwing in that “he’ll get bored and leave soon” comment just seems like the worst possible thing for Poppy to hear right now, even if she doesn’t believe it… So… Yeah. Another kick ass episode?? Not even a little surprised. If this is an example of a “saggy middle” then I hope any content I ever create in my life hits “saggy middle” status 🤣 That being said…. This reminder that it’s Lily’s first full length Comic really hit me. I mean….we know this…. But she makes it all seem so effortless I tend to forget. I’m blown away every week, and as always, I can’t wait to see what comes next. Both in MPL and the future series to come!

Cindy

Erdene does come off judgy but I think its coming from a good place cus she wants to protect Poppy. Erdene is only judging Tora from the outside and his lil remarks, in which I think maybe that’s why Poppy looks a bit uncomfortable at the end cus she knows how people can so easily judge Tora based on his looks when he’s really a sweetheart. I dont think Poppy will listen to her though bc she knows how Tora really is. Plus the girl already got a crush on him sooo 😂

larosamorada

Okay...so analysis in a few hours (yeah, they take me a while 😅)... But favorite line that made me laugh until I cried? "I would never" 🤣🤣🤣 oh I bet Tora....gah, that whole sequence killed me! Also, I fucking knew it that Erdene wouldn't like Tora! 🤣🤣🤣 Shit's about to get real interesting with their relationships, and IDGAF if anyone says it's the "saggy middle" you can have ALL my coins Lily! 😘😘😘💰💰💰

caseyjarryn

⁃ Oh Pops, there is no way Tora is actually completely nonchalant about this situation either.... His mind is right there in his apartment with you!! ⁃ bahaha, Tora’s doing a very good job intimidation Jacob! Lily, you do such an amazing job capturing characters facial expressions!! The insincerity in that smile when he said “the best” 👌 ⁃ So Quincey has seen Gil on a video call and presumably didn’t recognise him... this is a good tidbit for all the Shady Gil theories going around. ⁃ Oh Poppy - I had thought you just didn’t tell anyone about your birthday, not that you told them and they forgot!! Shame on them. 😭 ⁃ Yes Quincey! Tora and Poppy absolutely need a joint birthday party... though something tells me Tora won’t be too thrilled about Poppy being at club miracle around his friends and acquaintances who are all presumably in the mafia too... ⁃ Did Tora hide those chips somewhere when he searched the office for the notebook? 😂 What on earth were he and Jacob talking about anyway? 😆 ⁃ Oh no, Erdene ... don’t make Poppy doubt herself and her instincts about Tora... we know she’s already got a lot of self doubt given what happened with Julri but Poppy... you’re not wrong this time! Erdene has seen Tora for all of two seconds... she doesn’t know him like you do!!! Thanks for another amazing episode as always Lily!! I hope your arm is feeling better! ❤️

Cleide Sousa

Lily, I'm totally here for the middle episodes too... they're also very nice! About today, I confess I was a little annoyed by Erdene telling what Poppy should feel or think... but I've notice a little thing, Erdene sometimes acts a little motherly towards Poppy, and we know Poppy aparently have less experience in mother-daugter relationship. When we grow from teenager to adult, sometimes we need to rebel against the parents figures (authorities figures too) to affirm our real individuality. Until now, Poppy has always let Erdene do this: say what she should think, how she shoud dress (to work, to "get laid"), but now she has something she desires, very deeply (she's trying to convince herself she doesn't and Tora doesn't have something) but Poppy wants Tora (it's crystal clear!), and just like a teen stands for what she wants to became a grown person, she will have to decide for herself and choose Tora, because she knows who he is and how people use to judge him.

Asia Neal-Allen

We don't need Erdene negativity!! Dont even overthink it Poppy! Also...TORA!! I was digging this side of him. LOVIN IT!!!! & joint party....i can't wait to see how it plays out. If my MPL senses are right....something will not go as planned so the real question is how will it be handled 🤔

ladylibris

Happy 50th, Lily! So glad you’re back! 🧡🧡🧡

Gizemdrawssometimes

Ngl the club Quincy is talking about for their joint birthday is lowkey giving me the Club Miracle strip from the secret gardens vibes 🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚🌚

Court❤

I have a bad feeling about that joint Birthday party. I hope Vincent doesn't show up. I'm glad you're back. Great way to end my Birthday 🎂.

Matcha_Cakes

Erdene don’t know our boy like we and Pops do. I’m not worried. For one Tora remembered her Birthday and has been very sweet to her. Living for the banter between Q and T and also. Quincess. I see you boo. Tora is going to flip his fudging lid. I picture this << “Let’s go Bobby.” “But I’m having fun Dancin” *throws pops over shoulder* “did I stutter sweetheart, besides I need a cigarette “ >> I’m living for it. Also GIL you in the mob son. You keep avoiding important things.

Samantha Raszeja

I 👏🏼 am👏🏼 here👏🏼 for 👏🏼 it! I cannot wait to see how you unfold this beautiful story, I think you are doing an amazing job so far! It is captivating and well written, the characters are easy to fall in love with , there is a lovely balance of humor, drama, romance! All of it is just *mwa* chefs kiss.

MollzJJ

Tora was tooooo cute munching those snacks! 🐹 Poor Jacob. I think he’s going to be on the Tora radar for a while. Gil was out of town, which is disappointing but Tora’s inspection was interesting because I didn’t realize he would be sweeping for cameras and mics at all. I thought he was specifically searching for the notebook, but it’s a perfect coverup. Didn’t Gyu & crew already search the office? I’m sure Tora was still double checking - I know I would. Control freaks always check others work because we all know you’re the only one who can do it right. 😂 Quincey’s scheming! I’d expect nothing less from our #1 meddler. 🏅 Please don’t let Erdene be someone I thought she wasn’t. 😟 I can see protective friend mode here, but she judged & sized up Tora with one look, which is disappointing. I hope she doesn’t turn out to be the kind of person to trash talk your man to drive a wedge in & then make a move on him. I don’t think that’s Erdene, so I’m not going to believe that’s where this is heading. I know Tora would see through that immediately. I do think Poppy will stand up to her - she’s shared to much emotional intimacy with Tora to believe quick superficial judgements. Love this chapter ❤️ Any chance to see bodyguard Tora and adorable Tora in same chapter is the best!

Diana Scarry

You guys. Jacob totally had those chips stashed in his workstation!!!!!!! I see you snack hoarder.

Andrea Chen

WELCOME BACK LILY <3 and happy 50th episode!! The restlessness of the week has been satiated. Erdene's comment definitely made me feel a little annoyed... ESPECIALLY when she told Poppy to be smarter about these things as if she didn't have any common sense!! I understand that Erdene might see Tora as scary but to judge his character AND Poppy's judgment is a big blow in the face. Definitely an interesting insight into Erdene and Poppy's relationship. I can see how people might think that Erdene is very motherly towards Poppy! I also have full faith Poppy won't let Erdene's comments get to her and I hope she defends Tora in the next ep!! Also... we all know Tora is also thinking about last Friday too... 😏

LouCas27

Welcome back and happy to hear you’re feeling much better 🎉💕 Now back to the topic at hand! 😬Admittedly, I was disappointed with Erdene’s reaction. But I don’t blame her if her experience with her ex-partners made her think that way. Also, I am confident that Poppy will defend Tora since by now, she know the guy behind the intense golden stare. Also, she empathize with him. 💕🍓✌🏻Speaking of which, gurl, did you say “no strings attached”? Well, we shall see about that Bobby 😘🔥. Am I correct in saying that this is the most number of people Tora has interacted outside of the mafia? And in an atmosphere not threatening at all. With Quincey working with Poppy, Erdene and Jacob, there’s a chance Tora will have more “normal” interactions. By the way, what did Tora and Jacob talked about? Heheh, might be that night when Poppy made him dinner at her place. 🐯🐯🐯♥️ In any case, if a hot guy (Le Greek God levels) smiles at me like that I guess I would be nervous too. 🤯 A joint birthday party for our heroes seems fun, but I can’t help but feel nervous about it. Is it going to be in Club Miracle? 💥😰 Perhaps Quincey should hire a professional to organize it. We love our Quincess, but the last time he arranged something for Tora and Poppy it wasn’t a resounding success 😳 Although, it did led to a sweet reconciliation, (and more 😘) so maybe it wasn’t a total failure 💕✌🏻 Looking forward to where you’ll take us, @Lilydusk 🙌🏼🎉. If Gil does meet Quincey face to face, will there be any unusual reaction (granting Gil did took the notebook and is aware of its contents)? 🤔🤔🤔 The plot thickens!

TeHeeJones

Tora might I say your outfit is apparently a great disguise. Neither Erdene nor Jacob have noticed you were the Greek God from Poppy apartment. Well played Tora, well played 😉. A joint birthday party... This could either be a fabulous idea with a spectacular outcome or a complete disaster 😅. Q-Bear you better plan this out well otherwise Tora is going to be livid and unamused. Of course I am hoping for the best for our sweet couple to have a nice time together... Hopefully they even ditch the party early and go spend some quality time together 💜. Erdene I would have to say just because you have crappy taste in men, don't be sending your negative view of our boy Tora to Poppy. Poppy knows what she has, and she better well defend him 👊.

Keyziahah Long

okay i see erdene’s side. she’s met tora a handful of times and each time he’s been tora (moody, standoffish, intimidating). as an audience WE know tora to be different but she wouldn’t. poppy just got out of a bad relationship so erdene would naturally be protective over her when someone who looks to be a grade a ass walks in. also there’s no guarantee she’s ever going to like him because tora is an ass to even quincy who’s he’s known basically his whole life. poppy is the only one who gets to see the real tora and he probably will keep it that way. now the problem is while erdene has a right to be sus poppy already doesn’t think tora is interested and this is not going to be a smooth road to hea especially when you have to characters who don’t communicate well to each other. anyways i am buckled in and ready for this roller coaster 🎢

CopyPastel

Oh my God I just realized that Poppy's name was erased from the board... Tora and gyu and his guys were in the office maybe Tora erased her name from the board so the guys he was with didn't connect her name to what they were looking for. And that's how he knew it was her birthday

Bly

I have a theory that's honestly kinda scaring me lol. At this "large" party Quincey is now planning in his head, I am SUPER nervous that Mr. Scharch will be there and will recognize Poppy from her first meeting with Mr. Lam at Chevy's and will start connecting the dots. I hope I'm way off here but ever since I reread it, my mind is officially in freak out mode 😬🤪

kluebcke

I feel this sentiment. I've been writing a fanfic for almost eight years, and I feel possessed to finish it. I totally feel the drive to finish it, the opinions on it, and and satisfying your readers as much as yourself.

Reeree

Well shit, Erdene got me so tight!!! I came here to unwind by looking at some nsfw to cool down my heart . Lol

Vic Y

Honestly, I'm here for the flufffffff

Blanca Elizalde

I can just imagine Poppy dressed up in a red dress like the one in the Secret Garden strip! Blowing Tora’s mind for his Birthday! 🤯🔥😍

Tori Hopps

Congratulations on 50 episodes Lily! No sagginess for me – I'm dying for these looks that Tora is serving and pray that we get a flashback to the conversation that went down between Jacob and Tora! And okay, I may be in the less-popular camp, but I really don't think Erdene deserves ALL of the hate she's getting. Do I think she was condescending and judgmental? Absolutely. I'm not defending her, but I am saying that their (Tora and Erdene) characters were never going to truly jive in the first place. Erdene is a very emotive person, and says the first thing she thinks. While she has moments where she sees through Poppy's innocence, she still feels a need – though misguided – to protect Poppy. And when big burly Tora walks in and disrupts the publishing dream team that Erdene has in her mind, of course she's going to balk. It was exactly the response I expected. Honestly, the thing that made me the most nervous about this episode was the whole "what happens in Tora's house stays in Tora's house" thought by Poppy. Why was it in quotation marks like that? I took that to mean someone else said it. Either way, it's crushing because to me, it means there's going to be a long road of waffling before they DTR because Poppy is still of the mind that Tora isn't really interested in who she is. Which KILLS ME. I hate that she thinks she's the weaker of the two just because she can't fake a blush over a steamy makeout session like he can. The biggest thing I have to keep reminding myself is that Tora wants to keep Poppy safe and a Poppy with no relation to Tora is a safe Poppy, in his head. So of course he's not going to really interact with her. I think it speaks volumes that he said something to Jacob about Poppy because if he didn't care or feel any jealousy, he would have let that slide. This is also why I don't think Poppy will outright defend Tora. She has to keep it on the DL too, so she'll probably just say some nice things about him or say how Erdene shouldn't be so quick to judge, but I don't think she's going to be all up in arms. Her biting down on her mouth tells me she wants to, but to keep the peace and the secrecy, she won't. And THANK GOD FOR QUINCETON BALTHUMAN can I get an amen?! Constantly pushing this reluctant Tiger and his hamster together. I agree they won't like it, which to me, means they can go hide together in a closet and a CANON SECRET GARDEN SCENE CAN ENSUE. I am here for the shenanigans. Final thoughts are that Lily makes a creeptastic Tora even creepier. My heart leaped at that "THE BEST" panel because I was like omg don't kill Jacob at work Tora! Down boy! I did lose a little respect for Erdene and something about seeing Tora satisfied and chomping on some chips made my heart so happy. I LOVED the panels with him stuffing his face! And Gil? He's Poppy's uncle-cousin-or-something and you can't tell me different right now. Thank you Lilydusk for another amazing week. I'll be re-reading everyday until next Friday!

SioPao

Uuuggh. Tora’s lashes are ILLEGAL 😍😍😍

Tatiana Eletzky

Even transitionnal, this chapter was actually good! Thank you Lily we're happy to see you feel better by now! By the way I must say I don't really like Erdene's estimate of Tora, just judging him all on then look and the first line he got with her. I mean, on what moment on Earth he should have taken the "toxic beta reader" in a good way?! What a great way to introduce yourself thank you Erdene.. He could have been judgmental too just by this statement. He doesn't, so Erdene disappoints me at the moment. He didn't say she doesn't look like an art director but a hooker dressed like this, he doesn't judge Poppy because she dress like a college broke girl, he let people be what they want to be without any overthinking. Plus Erdene going on the "overly protective mother" with Poppy, I know we as spectators have an overall look on the hole story, but the "trust me you shouldn't be so naive" annoys me a bit. That's the big difference between Tora and Erdene : Tora let's Poppy feel and reacted how she wants and Erdene TELLS Poppy how to feel and react... Good thing Poppy isn't so easily influenced and learnt to know who Tora is beside the "thug" look. The moment Erdene will learn about the painting delivery, the Mr Lam chase, the muffin he bought and got to her after the sedated rats event, the midnight birthday.. I hope she will get the whole Tora story from Poppy, so she could understand. Anyway thank you Lily, you tell us a story where people are not all black or white, where grey exists in their personnality! If transitionnal chapter means painting character's developpment like this, I'm here for it!

mabarigroomer88

Eredene got on my nerves but from her perspective Tora comes off as a jerk. She’ll come around. It’s just scary for me as a reader when potentially a character tries to pull the other character “off course” so to speak. I feel like Quincy is going to do something stupid with the “birthday party” thing.

Shay Barnett

So I think Jacob has a secret work food stash and he’s been hiding people’s snacks in there! Tora found it and now he’s blackmailing Jacob to get the best treats! 😅

Haley Webb

I think Erdene was expecting Tora to be immediately interested in her. She’s obviously a very beautiful woman and is probably used to men being attracted to her right away. See how she puts her hand on her hip in a “power pose”? Poppy looks at her stance as well. As soon as Tora didn’t show any interest in her she instantly decided he was a bad person. I think Erdene is a good friend to Poppy but she’s maybe a little self-centered? Also, Poppy doesn’t yet understand how deeply Tora’s feelings for her go. Those kisses they shared were not just passing the time.

Mahirah Sattar

TBH we all would have been in Erdene's position if we didn't know the details of Tora's and Poppy's relationship as well as Tora's and Quincy's relationship. That's the truth. But since we do know the details, we shouldn't get mad at Erdene for wanting to protect both Quincy and Poppy.

Blueberrycat Chocolatecookie

I hope this misunderstanding is cleared up WAY before the party or I'm going to have to drop Erdene as my mermaid since apparently she has CLAWS and NO ONE accuses OUR Tiger of anything #ToraSquadForever 😟😤😡

Rachel B.

And just like that Erdene is on my nerves. I understand that she is trying to be helpful but, her help is not warranted here. Tora is just a straight shooter and if Quinceton didn't value his opinion he would NOT have asked. Also, he's a got a teddy bear heart 😍🧸, so better leave him ALONE! 😡

Brittney Cruz

I just know Tora is going to be PISSED about the party the same way he was pissed when Quincy called Poppy out for dinner 🤦🏻Maybe we'll get a really cute birthday kiss between Poppy and Tora

M00nchild721

Funny, I didn’t think Erdene was gonna have that reaction to Tora. I pictured her getting heart eyes and asking who the hottie is.

noonanoonayay

I sat this chapter down with a good glass of Syrah named "Boom! Boom!" So here goes my bubbly buzzed thoughts: I looove Tora teasing Jacob!! Poor Jacob being the bean that he is 😂 Also Tora and Quincey SO KNOW what's up with Gil and they do so well playing it off... Well more Quincey haha 😂 Erdene, I know you're looking out for our Poppy but it pains me for Poppy to sit idly by and hear what Erdene "knows" from her own experience only to project on her thoughts about Tora 🥺 It will be interesting to see how this arc unfolds! AS I MENTIONED BEFORE LILY, this is all new to us! You've been doing so phenomenally and I have to say every story I've read has, in a way, a "saggy middle". And THAT'S OKAY. It's your story and we are all living for it, BECAUSE it's yours. ❤️ It's like how John Mulaney (I love this gentleman btw( said about telling how the audience should hang in there energy-wise during his "Comeback Kid" special; it's like writing "HAPPY BIRTHDAY" on a banner without planning how the letters should fit. Starting with a BIG ASS 'H', followed by a BIG ASS 'A' and-- oh no! I already have used up half the banner! Time to use a skinny P with a high hump and another skinny P with a low hump, followed by a very squiggly Y that barely fits at the end. And surely he would learn his lesson for the word 'birthday' right? WRONG. It's not the steamy, sexually tense episode we would all love to see every time, but if you were to do that, that spice would become bland. There would no longer be a POW! to each moment if it's there all the time. We'd expect it and there's no fun in that! You already keep us spoiled with the Secret Gardens anyway 😉 Keep doing you Lily and we'll experience this journey with you however you want us to! We're just happy to know you are looking after yourself and ensuring your health is put as a priority before your work and am happy that you took last week to recuperate! Thank you for this update and looking forward to this month of updates you have for us! ❤️

Zlata Kelembet

Lets be honest. If it wasn't Erdene, there would be someone else eventually telling Poppy that Tora is just trouble and nothing else (for example, Cordelia). Tora does his best for people to think that. However Poppy has shown that she is a very smart person. I don't think she will change her mind about Tora just because some people told her to.

Kayla

Congrats Lily!!!! MPL is legit my favorite Webtoon and has made Fridays the day I look forward to!!! One I am for the plots bc I could sense we were building towards something and a joint birthday party seems like the perfect catalyst.😏 Also Poppy getting hot thinking about that picture and Tora smiling which is oddly scary and arousing at the SAME DAMN TIME, TGIF! 🥰😍

Darla (Tora’s THOT)

This will be short- I gots a HEADACHE (repost due to patreon deletion) 😒 Yes poppy I see him- standing there with his FOINE ASS with his sexy hat and skin tight turtleneck. Girl I fucking dare you to JUMP HIM! TRIPLE DOG DARE YA!!! Do ppl still say that??? Urgh kids im old give me a break 🤷🏻‍♀️ What happens in Tora’s house stays in Tora’s house: OH YEAH???? Same can be said whatever happens in the giant goldfish janitors closet, bathroom, under the desk, conference room, break room, creepy gils office (shiiiitttttt he ain’t never there- break it in babe) Jacob: I’m straight up jealous of Jacob! I wish I was him!! 😭😭😭 I want tora standing behind me, breathing down my neck watching me intensely with his smoldering eyes!! *inner thoughts as Jacob- JUST GRAB ME BY THE NECK DADDY- you know you want to 😏😏😏* (yes future meme most likely) damn I just - JUST- need that smooth bad boy 🍆 there I said it throw me down on the table (cause I’m Jacob in my head rn 🤣🤣🤣) Quincey’s bright idea birthday bash; LORDT!! God help me. This- this might be a damn disaster! Candy best not be there! Urghhhhhhhh if she be rubbing up on tora- that’s it, I’m sharpening these nails… 9 daggers who!? 10 DAGGERS BITCH! 🗡 🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡🗡!!!! NUT CHIPS: MOOD. He is me, I am him, no fucks given. I love it so much! Erdene- calm your ass down- Quincey will buy you palettes of them chips!! Let tora munch on them thangs… fuckkkkk calm that hangry man!!! His oral fixation needs to be appeased!!! SNAP: “Snap me like a glow stick” is no longer- it’s “snap me like a bag of zucchini nut chips” there I said it Erdene: 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑 me BTW I love when tora is squatting/crouching… I call it the “CROUCHING TORA 🐅 HIDDEN EGGPLANT 🍆 “ pose 😍😍😍

Tara Taylor

50 episodes is a HUGE milestone, congratulations Lily 🥰 so glad you are back and giving us our weekly Poppy and Tora fix 💜

Bri

I think people are misunderstanding Erdene‘s reaction to Tora. We (the readers) know Tora, Erdene doesn’t know this man from a can of paint. Tora’s first impressions are not the best. Could you imagine some “Bodyguard” coming into your office workplace searching around, asking questions, and eating your expensive snacks! I wouldn’t be to happy with him either. Also, I don’t think Erdene is trying to get Tora’s attention (romantically). Erdene Is a beautiful woman who already has tons of ex’s like Tora. So he is nothing special to her. I can’t wait until Jacob and Erdene piece together that the guy that they saw in Poppy’s apartment is Quincey’s Bodyguard 🤯

KaitlynA

I feel like Poppy totally saw Erdenes reaction coming which is why she had Jacob watch through her Webcam not Erdene. And mostly because Erdene wants to protect Poppy from getting hurt again and finding out about it after the fact.

Dyane Rodriguez

Okay tbh erdene kinda pissed me off but I get why she spoke that way towards Tora.. Any who, i love how Quincey is appearing more!! Love him! Literally my fave

Patricia @MyRomanceHasNoLimits

It kind of broke my heart when Erdene lights up like a lighthouse with the idea of a clubhouse birthday party. That’s not what Bobby wants 😣 I know, Erdene can’t help herself .... and then Poppy gets told who to love and trust.... the love from girlfriends can be toxic too 😞 I don’t blame the Erdenes of this world, we overthinkers need them and love them, but it hurts sometimes. It’s part of growing up Bobby 😌 And Erdene is going to learn from Poppy not to judge someone, you only loose in life 🤗 a big hug to Erdene because that lesson is going to hurt! And can’t wait for Bobby to take a stand in front of all the clubhouse thirsty girls (me?) with a 💋 on the tiger... I know, it’s wishful thinking ☺️ Glad Lilly ‘s better and well rested. And this calm point in the story is just to distract us before the hammer comes down! I see it! It’s working 😂

Raquel

I kinda think for her face, and really, really hope that I’m right, that Poppy is not liking the way Erdene is talking about Tora! Is something that really bothers him since the beginning, that people take a look at him and just assume things like is just a big and scary tug! And poppy knows that that isn’t true, his sweet and gentle and kind, and make her feel good about herself! I’m really hoping that Poppy is gonna take a stand for him 🖤

Seazar

No Erdene! I thought she might be someone to not immediately judge Tora. Was so excited for her to hype Poppy up. Also, is this the first time we’ve had this kind of inner monologue of Poppy’s? Thinking about Tora in a romantic way explicitly? So cute ♥️

Seazar

Also what was Poppy gonna say... “actually we’re” ? What... dating? Or friends? 😏

Jaclyn

To be fair, my friends had the same reaction as Erdene when I first introduced them to my husband (when we first started dating). He comes off as an ass sometimes, but once you get to know him and he’s comfortable around you, he’s totally a puppy dog.

LoopyJ

Dear Lily, your story is an amazing 50-episode-old body of work with a head, mind, heart, and gut, so, as I understand it, the aforementioned "saggy middle" equals lovely belly rolls! They are an important part and I will happily give them an affectionate raspberry. 😊 

Robyn Morris

I love the fact that Tora is now the ex beta reader. Maybe this will teach Quincy a lesson about being so dramatic ( not a chance). I also just really realized Quincy and Tora are almost the same height, and Quincy clothes make him seem less muscular. I loved that Quincy looked so annoyed with Tors like he wanted to pop him upside his head. I wish we had more Quincy, Gyu, and Tora scenes. I’m still holding out for a Tora and Quincy sparing match 🥵🤤 sad. I’m not feeling this joint birthday party idea Quincy Tora is going to be upset. Let hope this party is not a one of Vincent clubs( I can always dream). Can wait to see what happens.

Evenstar

I can see why some may feel not so happy about Erdene’s reaction in this episode. It stems from wanting a little bit of happiness for our dear Tora and Poppy. I think Dene was being true to herself. She cares for and is protective of her friends. She doesn’t know that Poppy told Tora about Jacob’s weight shaming, or that Quincey misremembers Tora’s feedback - she just sees this offstandish hulk of a man picking on her people. We know Tora, we love Tora, Dene doesn’t yet. If anything, she is not giving Poppy’s sense of self preservation enough credit, but it makes sense to me that she would want to protect Poppy from him. She and Tora both have alpha personalities - I would’t be surprised if, like Cordy, they clash a little at first.

ObstinateHeadstrongGirl

1. I thought bodyguards were supposed to lurk in the background and not cause any trouble. 🤦🏾‍♀️ 2. Jacob, just say yes to everything. 3. How expensive can bag of chips be that multiple people outwardly hate a stranger for eating them?? I ask this as a person who has bought imported chips more than once. Or twice... and may be expecting a shipment in the coming week... 4. Poppy, my advice is to put Erdene on a need-to-know basis and pull a Pride and Prejudice. Everyone thinks you hate each other until “Just kidding we love each other and we’re getting married,” and everyone’s like 😵but it’s too late because he secretly saved your sister’s reputation, you’re both in love and he’s loaded. And you’ll say “He’s so good. He has no improper pride. If you only knew his true good nature...” No harm to foul. Boom! Happily ever after! 5. WHERE IS GIL BECAUSE IF I GOT A POPULAR NOVELIST TO WORK ON AN INSANELY LUCRATIVE PROJECT FOR MY LITTLE PUBLISHING COMPANY I WOULD BE FIRST IN LINE TO ROLL OUT THE RED CARPET AND GROVEL TOUT DE SUITE. Shady.

Vita

Unpopular opinion: Tora is too used to subtly using mannerisms to intimidate people. Erdene is picking up on that and calls him out cause she is not one to put up with bs. We know our tiger 🐯 is no social butterfly 🦋 and needs to learn a new way to interact with people. Which just goes to show our man still has room to grow!! 💕💕

Sarai Villalobos

Lily I’m happy to hear you are feeling better 😊 and no worries about there being a ‘saggy middle’ all great stories have them, it’s part of the story and I don’t think any of us will mind, at least I won’t, I can’t wait to see what happens I’m in it for the long run Lily you stuck with me lol 😋 so please take care and keep blessing us with your amazing work 🥰😘 Omg “What happens in Tora’s house stays in Tora’s house” yeah alright Poppy lol and Tora smirking my head went there too Poppy 🥵😈 I love the Quincey and Tora BFF moments need more please 😋 and did anyone see Quincey’s legs 🤤 Ok so I really want this joint birthday party to happen but I’m kinda scared about it at the same time 😬 and Erdene what are you doing you are breaking my heart, I get it first impression and looking out for a friend and she don’t know everything that’s goin on but still... it’s ok I believe in Poppy she got this 🙌 can’t wait to see her stand up for Tora Thank you Lily for all you do 😘🥰

brgerqueen

Question: is Quincy’s hair a bit pink?

Myosotis

Your story is Amazing and you might be one of the few persons I truly admire for being so true to the readers. And i'm.being emotional right now writing this ahaha Apart from the fangirl moment, I was like "Erdene stop you are going to make Poppy cry. She doubts already a lot. Don't make her doubt more please. Please" It's so weird talking to characters. But you made this story real and it feels like Tora and Poppy are old buddies to me. It's a weird feeling.

Mari

Erdene God don't like ugly and sis yours is showing 😐

Green Eyed Soul

Chillax everyone! There’s nothing a party can’t fix to smoothen things between Tora and Erdene ✌️

Lisa

I find it interesting that Poppy is in the same situation Julri was in with his friends being judgmental - will she hide Tora or speak out? 🤫

Jennifer

I can't wait for when they do the merge party! I wanna see if Mr. Tora is gonna get tipsy and be all hands with poppy!

RainBird

Alright, I understand the whole being a little uneasy about Tora thing. He’s literally in intimidating body guard mode. That’s not what erks me. What erks me is that ONCE AGAIN Poppylan is getting railroaded by someone else who is she is close to, who won’t listen when she is speaking and puts words in her mouth for her. That makes me so mad for Poppy! Like shut your pie-hole Erdene! Let Poppy finish what she has to say! THEN you can put in your two cents. Didn’t your momma teach you that interrupting is rude?

Patricia @MyRomanceHasNoLimits

Can we call an episode saggy middle when it creates so many reactions? 😂Can’t wait for the podcast! (posting too much... stopping 😊)

Christina Agan

Also, can we all take a moment to appreciate Tora’s chubby cheeks when he’s eating? Because that’s adorable and I am here for this.

Sahar

I know everyone thinks tora is gonna be disappointed when he figures out that him and poppy are having a joint party and that Quincy is setting them up again lol. But I dont think Quincy would invite people from the mafia or "their world" because he is trying to impress his new co workers aswell and set up tora and poppy. also tora at this point knows that poppy is working as an editor for a mob boss and he isnt trying to push her away but instead is going to protect her and see how things go for them ( romantically) but even if he does get mad it wouldnt be as bad as last time. I have a slight feeling poppy and tora wouldnt stay tho bc they dont really seem like party people lol

Nicole Vogt

You dun messed up, Quincey!! This birthday party is going to be a fiasco AND I AM HERE FOR IT!!! 🥳😜😈🧁🍰🎉🎂🎈

Nicole

I’m kind of hoping that Tora and poppy show up to the party, spot each other, flirt, and ditch to go to the beach. leaving all their friends wondering where they went.

BumbleBlueBee

Tiger on the prowl!!! Checking for anything shady! Gotta make sure its all good for his hamster and Quincess. I'm sure he's also looking out for that book... and to bother Jacob :) Hmmm.... his shoulders look bigger than usual. I'm glad I was eating popcorn during this read. Just seeing him chomping on those munchies made me have a craving. Poor Poppy she looked so upset. I understand that people like to keep their friends safe.... but that was harsh quick judgment by Erdene. Maybe in the next chapter Poppy will pipe up and give her 2 cents about Tora. Hmmm Erdene really had a quick reaction to Tora. I wonder what her history was. Oh Quincy... why did you have to be all dramatic. But I guess thats your deal. I'm nervous about this party. I think Tora will get upset. Quincy will probably invite a lot of clan people etc. People that Tora doesn't care for. He won't want Poppy surrounded by them. I wonder where Quincy's scar went. Did he cover it up with make up? Well I have to hit post. Gotta do something and maybe I'll say more later. Thank you so much Lily!!! Congrats on #50!!!

Kelee Parker

Ugh he could wear a potato sack and still look like fucking Adonis 🤤🤤

Sharni

I cannot wait to get more into the storyline and see what happens next, but tbh, I'm also completely happy to have more chapters of Tora and Poppy being the adorable dorks they are together. I know when the story gets serious again we might get less of that, and I'm afraid of what's going to happen next. (I've got some ideas, but of course I could be way off.)

JoAn

2020 has handed us all enough crazy! MPL CREATOR(S) for the love of all the tigers, poppies, and hamsters! Let Poppy hold true to her new found confidence and determination and not allow Erdnes snap judgment of a man she (Poppy) has grown to trust. PLEASE PLEASE allow Poppy to trust herself and faith/trust in Toras actions, which speak volumes louder than his appearance. Poppy can certainly appreciate Erdenes concern, misplaced as it is, but Poppy al ready knows what a sentimental kitten Tora truly is. I feel that Poppies confidence and determination despite the two being difficult and new for her are what Tora admire and respect about her. ❤

Tiffany Krug

I loved this episode, as I love all of them haha ❤ and I am so glad your arm is feeling better! I have two questions and I'm not sure if its a spoiler or not 🙈 one, i was wondering if Quincey covered up his scar? And I am also wondering if the flowers on Tora's arms are carnations? I have another question too 🙈 have you talked about the meaning behind his different tattoos? If so, I'd hate to ask you to repeat so can you (or anybody) direct me to wear i may find the answers 😁😁 thank you!

Megan Curtis

I apologize if I missed it somewhere, but with everything (mostly) lined out, how many seasons do you think it’ll go towards?

Lesley Ann Boucaud

Just wanna say I can totally see Tora as being the annoying boyfriend & best friend lol but you just got to love him. I hope poppy speaks on behalf of tora because she knows he’s more than just what he looks like. Omg Jacob face had me crying 😂😂 through out the whole episode poor guy scared

Afton Jennings

I'm real relieved sleazebag Gil hasn't made another appearance yet, boi greasy asf.

Mishmonster

WooHoo! Fifty episodes, 5.0.! Congrats! Although, with MPL 1.0 it's many more. But what an incredible accomplishment. 🤩

Blueberry

Tora acting like he ain’t been all up in that office

Zoe

So Jacob has seen this man before at poppy’s apartment on the video call (to make sure she was safe... called him a Greek god...). Does he REALLY NOT RECOGNIZE!? Like, son! How many handsome men like Tora do you think are out there walking around!!!? Alternatively... can I visit Narin city of this is just standard.....?????

Spare Time Savvy Nerd

Hi Lilydusk! I just wanted to say that you are an amazing storyteller and a fantastic artist. Your commitment to quality is astounding and has inspired me ever since I read the first episode. When I hear that this is your first long-running comic, I am shocked! You're so gifted and a natural at this, I never would have guessed it was your first. The way you tackle the build of each character with each episode is what I appreciate the most, the pace will never feel off. Do whatever you got to do, to do what you do, I'll be here excited for each new chapter. And I cannot wait for the new arc, that is always my favorite thing when into a story. Take care!

Krystal

FYI...I'm delayed on the fanfic because I somehow lost 4 pages and I was too devastated to pick it up again.

Poppy's Stepstool

Im just looking at the outfits on these cuties.. The way he's dressed in this episode seems every combat ready or Is its just to hide tattoos? turtle neck=ass kicking outfit. But Poppy OMFG is sooo cute/sexy with splash of confidence. Quincy fine af as always will never catch him slipping.......🤔 do Quincy now pay a little more attention to they interact now?

Lisa

Has anyone else considered that a Erdene’s strong reaction to Tora has more to do with Tora finding the chips in her work area not Jacob’s? Tora didn’t come up with the chips until he moved on. And maybe Erdene is attempting to discredit him before the truth comes out? Either way brilliant writing! Totally sucks us into the situation and keeps us going until next week. And your two main characters have stolen our hearts! Can’t wait to see what’s next.

Lydia Renard

Theory for the next few episodes: Tora won't be pleased about the joint birthday party because it will mean a lot of people observing his interactions with Poppy, which are definitely sweet and intimate. He's going to be standoffish to Poppy and focus on Candy to throw people off. Tora will likely warn Poppy but she'll still struggle with her own feelings about it and with Erdene's comments, which will be scathing.

priscilla dl

Great episode! Thanks, Lily! I don’t understand Erdene’s facial expression and posture when addressing Tora... was she trying to flirt or assert dominance?

Sahar

Watch tora just buy more of those chips for the office lol that would be cute😂😂

Jamie LaMoreaux

I've been enjoying the story very much, it's a delightful romance and keeps me spending my coin for a fast pass as I CANNOT wait 27 days! But that said, I'm wondering if Goliath has entered the witness protection program and his "death" verified by Tora will allow him to exit the mafia and live. and what upset Ronzo so much he breaks down and sobs apologizing to Tora? this also upsets Quincy as well? it's VERY interesting and curious! I'm very glad you've recovered and are able to publish again!

Christina Agan

Just coming back to add a few comments. First and foremost, I feel like Erdene is getting a lot of fan hate right now, and I’ve seen so many angry comments about her. But, remember folks: Erdene doesn’t know Tora in the same way we, as viewers, do. She only knows what she’s heard from Quincey and his dramatic storytelling. Erdene has always struck me as a well meaning lady and she genuinely likes Poppy as her friend. She’s also lived in Narin longer, it seems, and it’s possible she’s actually had run ins with guys from Ares Street. I think it’s totally possible she had no other alternative motives other than to keep Poppy, a younger lady who hasn’t lived in Narin very long, Safe. Honestly, we should all be so lucky to have friends as concerned as Erdene. Secondly, I’m actually....upon reading the episode again, feeling bad for Tora. He seems like a fish out of water a bit here. In Clan situations he might not be happy, but he sorta gets where he ranks. He’s even smart enough and intimidating enough to keep Vincent in check. To a degree. Here, in this setting, he’s seen as nothing more than a nuisance, someone that is scary and folks want him to leave. And honestly, how much do we think he’s just going to open up to Jacob, Erdene or Gil? Probably not a hell of a lot. So now he’s going to be spending time in a place he’s absolutely not welcome. There’s a lot more to unpack, but I mostly just want to point out how much a change of pace this is going to be for Tora. And to remind folks that the characters often times don’t know as much as we, the readers, do. We have the privilege of seeing things from multiple viewpoints. They don’t. Don’t hate Erdene too much. 😉

LauraPianoHands

New story arc???? I AM HERE FOR IT. I am SO excited Lily, what a tease!!! Although, honestly, I love everything about MPL. There's nothing saggy about it except Aniki's middle.

ObstinateHeadstrongGirl

Ok can I say how I love all the takes on Erdene and all the reasons why she may be responding the way she is. Whether she’s overprotective of Poppy, jumping to conclusions, being over-assertive or possibly her own negative traits and/or experiences. Idk I think the diversity of analyses and theories are valid and kind of cool. Ok bye.

Antonia Korn

The joint birthday party is going to STRESS TF out of Tora. The whole time having poppy there, he’s gonna act like a major dick trying to keep her safe and out of everyone’s way so that no one gets any ideas- think back to that guy who offered to “handle her” for Tora before he broke his face. Like haram, the poor guy is gonna be a mess that night 😂

HappyCamper

MMMM Tora looking so fine as always

Helen Brito

I'm already your fan!! And your artstyle is BEAUTIFUL!!! Kisses from Brazil! ;*

Maria

All I’m saying is if bobbies friend and co worker dates a guy like toda she’d be broken in two. So her ex’s could possibly or come close. And poppy well she needs to ignore it and look deep into his eyes and remember what happens as todas stays there hehe

Lee4992

I wanted to hear Poppy say actually Erdene it’s too late for me to stay away because we are dating, lol.

Christina Cuellar

I wonder what Tora's thought process was when he was picking his clothes for this day knowing he was going to see Poppy. I request a Tora changing montage! Lol

Payton Rivers

Is it just me or Is there not a dialogue to read? I just have pictures

Payton Rivers

Okay. Thank you so much for making that clear

TottyB

I am tempted to make that same top that Poppy is wearing!! I know its Autumn over here in the UK, but there is always room for a girl to wear a sleeveless tie waist, cropped shirt!!! 😂😂😂 It's time to make a yellow, floral sleeveless version of the Gilbert top, by helenscloset patterns!! Yay!!! Any fellow sewists here?

Michelle W

Tora's outfit in the next 3 episodes is 1500% my type (particularly the pants style) and 👏I 👏AM 👏LOVING👏IT👏 If I saw a human close to Tora in this irl, panties would be on the floor involuntarily

Celia Mitchell

I feel like so much toxic crap happens when friends get involved in your relationships. I hope Poppy ignores her comments and just realized that she understands him better than her friend ever will.

Heather F

what happened to Quincy's scar? have I missed something?

JRS

Here for ALL of it ❤️ I look forward to MPL every week. Thank you SO much for blessing us 🥰🙏 Sending you & your loved ones love & healing ✨✨

OneAndOnlyTako

Is Tora getting hotter or is it just me? *fan self*

Irene A

Thanks for all your hard work, Lily. I always love every episode and all the intricacies and developments that you do. All the fun, humor, drama, complexities, hotness, and humanness make MPL genius literary art. I believe you are Divinely guided.

Makeila Bernard

Are there men who can have the look that Tora has in the thumbnail? It is so fierce but subtle. You have to hold your breath when you see it. Soooo HAWT!!