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UPDATE (22th Nov): Hey loves! I'm still working on the revision for this episode, and the scene below is still tragic 🤧🤧....but it looks so much better with lighting and background now, and I wanted to share the WIP with y'all! 💖

UPDATE (18th Nov): I'll be reworking this episode, and especially the last Poppy/Tora scene -- I had to rush to meet the deadline and couldn't capture the full emotional range from my og script, and I'm (a little) embarrassed at how soulless it turned out lol! Buuuut better late than never! And now I can work on this scene to my heart's content, so yay! If the changes are too extensive to be published on  Webtoon or whatevs, I might post it as a Patreon exclusive instead. Either way, keep your eyes peeled y'all!

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Happy season finale and happy holidays, loves! This is my first, real break since I had that mental health hoo-ha and took a 1 year sabbatical in the middle of Season 2, lol. Hope I can make some author-chat posts, haven't done those in a while! This episode wrecked me too, I'm sorry loves 🥺💜💜 (I lied -- I'm not sorry lol). I didn't have time to finish the backgrounds so I'll finish that up, but my brain went on vacation a couple days ago so I'm on my own now 🤣🤣 No more MPL episodes for the time being, and I can't wait to work on Secret Garden stuff and other projects!! 🎉🎉🎉🥰🥰🥰

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Jazz_The_Writer

SoMETHING ESLE!??? IM READY ! 😭😭😭😭

Krimshaw

Can’t wait!

LemonTendie

That better have been happening after she saw her man naked. Please let us I mean her see him naked

Niche Bryant

Looks like Poppy’s face done beat up somebody’s hands.

Evenstar

She got a glimpse of Tora’s hot bod 🤤

Aubribri

🥴🥴 im not ready for this rollercoaster

Lilydusk

Lol not in the best way 🥹🥹

Joan Marie

What!!!😵😬OMG!!😂😂😂😂 Can wait IM READY!!🙌😎

Lilydusk

Usually that's me 🤣🤣👏👏👏

Jazz_The_Writer

I’m still ready ! 😭😭😭😭😭😭💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜

Pallada

I don't think I can handle another cliffhanger 😭😵😢😔😭

Cristina Wong

🤔🤔🤔 or did she run into something??

Cristina Wong

Great angle on the chin and boobs by the way looks tricky

Allie Bee

I’ve given up trying to predict what’s going to happen in the episodes because you always get us (in the best way) with the unexpected twists! Waiting on tenterhooks to see what you’ve got in store for us with the season finale!!

Allyssa

Just wanted to say THANK YOU Lilydusk for all your (and your teams) hard work that you have put in this season. I'm not ready to say goodbye if you are taking a break after the season. We love you and hope for an update of when the next season will return. SO SO SO excited for this episode!

LuckieCharm86

Please, please, PLEASE tell me that there's a delay because they put you in horny jail because of what happens in the bed and not the too-violent jail because of Goliath

LyricWitch

I've come to the conclusion that after going over several possible scenarios in my head, that I'll inevitably be way off track, and love every anxiety-inducing minute. Trying to steel my heart for the fallout...and frantically hitting refresh like an addict

Mochi

Oh goodness what does that meannnnn

lezkapd

looks like something that caught her off guard so much that she got a nosebleed 🤣

larkspur

I'm not ready for the season to be over! But I'll console myself during the break in my normal fashion: rereading the series over and over because I can't get enough of it!

Julianne McDorman

Um I’m gonna need y’all to read the episode and then tell me without telling me how painful it’s gonna be to read it 😫 because I’m feeling like it’s gonna be a doozy and idk if I can cope 😫😫😫

Anja

Oh I can't wait!

xXAllieXx

Ready for another cliffhanger 🤟🏼 Amazed and always love your work!!

Emily Basso

A confident Lily SLAYS US every time!!! I’m gonna need a nosebleed emoji too.

Natalia

When is the episode? 😭😭

Minimouette

Looking forward to it! I never worry about delay because I know it's gonna be good! ^^ Also just realised i've been reading MPL for like.... 3 years now? Man time pass by fast.

Fernyx

I keep refreshing to see if the episode is out, but I’m also afraid to get my heart broken. I might need a support group

(d_b)

It’s up!

Victoria

Have a box of tissues ready. You’ll need them.

(d_b)

I’m screaming internally. Thank you Lily! 😭

Jo Aspen

Lily, I would like to fight you for making me cry in the middle of a comic book shop 😭. how dare you make me feel my feelings! I thought maybe I'd be okay. I am NOT. I HAVE FEELINGS AND QUESTIONS. I NEED A HUG. 😢

eliana ౨ৎ

LILY THIS IS INSANE!! i’m so excited to see where this goes! you are so good at what u do🤍🤍🤍

Keely

Is he getting beat up again or is Goliath really dead 😥

Mangaread

Lilydusk... you make me cry... I really do like you, but, i feel so bad right now. Take care Lily, i cant wait to see them till next time... Im going to read it from ep.1

CatW

Holy shit! What an ending!!

LyricWitch

I'm gonna need some time to process this...and a good cry...and maybe a stiff drink 😭😭😭

Ruby_Solstice27

I’m dying in so many ways. No way you’re leaving us like this for however long😭😭 I’m crying and so overwhelmed I can’t figure out what to focus on! This episode is packed full and so juicy and also TWINSSSSS

Kirsten

Tora admitted that Gyu mainly did a background check on her mom and said the majority of her family were farmers . NO RESEARCH WAS DONE ON HER DAD AND HIS FAMILY THO ! So who know who he was before he died

Joan Marie

I my heart breake when they say they are twins and at the same time i was so happy😍😢 and then he is dead.... Like thats it he dies... Goliath is dead 😞For fuck sake, and CORDILIA YOU BITCH WHAT THE FUCK 😵 I want to strangel her 🤬!!! TORA IS INJURED BECAUSE OF YOU! 😭😭😭😭 Like this episode breake me Lilly i love it and then i hate it !! Goliath is dead why why i need a hug🥺

Cheesy

This chapter 129 is so sad 😭😭Tora cried and me too , Lilly there will be another chapter?S3?? Thank you for this Story, it always made my day, and I hope there will be another chapter 🤞🏻

Sara B.

What a season finale! 💔❤️🤯👏

Marsprinz

Im in SHOCK ! Omg ❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥❤️‍🔥

Jenny Wooten

Wow! *bows to queen Lilly!* You madam are amazing! What a way to end the season! 😭😭😭😭😭

Corinne Kalet

Wow…. So many questions but my biggest one is how long til season 3 begins?? Thank you Lily for such an amazing story that continues to pull me in. I’ll be rereading the whole thing over and over until season 3!

BegoniaRex

😭😭😭😭 I AM NOT OKAY RIGHT NOW 😭😭😭😭

Fernyx

No puedo con esto…. 😫 When is the next season???? And are we at least getting some SG to soothe our aching souls??

GulMuna

So Goliath isn't dead-dead is he 😭?

GulMuna

And was it just me, or when Cordy called Poppy "mistress" - it was in extension of her being with Tora (the guy is basically a king in his own right)? I don't know, Poppy being a mafia princess would just be cliché. But that's just me.

GulMuna

I'm hoping it's the former 😭

eliana ౨ৎ

well, they didn’t act like they knew Tora was Tora (if that makes sense, lol) and wanted to kill him, so i don’t think it’s about tora. i think it’s about poppy.

GulMuna

But they are lovers with Quincey, and I'm pretty sure Quincey filled the deets about his bodyguard on them

Fernyx

Huh… I got the same feeling. That Poppy is being called a mistress because of Tora. But now, who knows. All I know is that Tora doesn’t trust her…

(d_b)

Twins! Young Mistress Poppy! Baby Quinceton’s floofy hair! Tora’s spider trauma!

Layne K.Os

OH MA GAAAAAD Cordelia ?!!! Poppy, young mistress ?? Such a wonderful season finale, so sad and beautiful and so much answers to so many questions!! So many feelings and emotions... How am i gonna sleep 😭

Maria E.

I literally gasped at the twins reveal. Good job! And omg, I'm so glad I was right on the young mistress suspicion. I've been wondering ever since someone at the hospital referred to Granny as "Madame" something. Waiting for next season is going to be rough, but this season has been SO GOOD.

CatW

So...were the masked people at her apartment and Quincey's apartment trying to kill Poppy, or kidnap her? Also, we are piecing together that dad's side is mafia related somehow. How could Poppy be young mistress unless Dad was an elite or leader? And, we don't know anything about Poppy's paternal grandmother...is she in the story you think?

Love

😰

Alex

This episode was the saddest one so far! And omg did Goliath really lose his whole arm?!? I’m so sad for him, tora poppy! 😭😭😭💔💔💔 I hope he is still alive🤞. as they say no body means they aren’t really dead…. Right ??? Omg I need season 3 now! Happy holidays to everyone! Especially you lily dusk! I can’t wait to see what else you have in store for us with next season! I can tell it’s gonna be even more wild than this one!

Keely

No I don’t want to believe it 😭 I really hope he was just getting beat on again.

CINTHIA V

Omg nooo, I'm crying so bad poor Goliath and Tora, my heart is aching 💔 😢

Nissa

My heart. My soul. My twins. Nooooo 🥺 There’s so many things I can tell… - How is it possible to play that hard with our feelings? Seeing Tora & Goliath smile just before his death had me sobbing so hard, and then seeing Tora cry with Poppy in his arm = cherry on the cake. - Then, if David is Goliath’s real name, is Tora not his real one ? - How are we supposed to get through this bomb ? Lily, what did we do to deserve that? - Tora didn’t trust Cordelia since the beginning, he was so right. Such a liar. I’m a little bit confused about her intention as the previous panel showed someone in the helic with a gun machine about to blown pops up… so what does she/he want ? Kill or kidnap her ? - Poppy ? 👸 I’ve always believed that Tora was Goliath’s relative, but them being twins and him being the oldest… you fooled me well. I am heartbroken, really. Lily, you’re a genius.

Kristy Hine

It was something else, ooohhhh!!! 😮 😊

GenX

Twins?! Little Mistress?! Cliffhanger! 😭😭😭

Icca

I was bawling before the swoosh…. I saw the writing on the wall and screamed out loud nooooooooooo - Istg my husband thinks I’m crazy cuz I’m bawling at a comic… 😂😭 that was brutal… and Tora’s tears killed me … Lily you destroyed me with your beautiful story! I can’t wait to see where this is headed! Thank you so much for giving me something to look forward to! 🖤

Icca

Big same

Anne m

Oi...WTF Cordelia, you were totally vibing with Poppy a few weeks ago at the restaurant - this could have been a phone call. And WTF Goliath why would you have gathered dirt on your TWIN brother after he helped whipe your record clean. And WTF tora - you said at breakfast you had told poppy everything about your self. Ehhh except Goliath being your twin brother. And Yesss - that's a Courtney. Good naming. Amazing work Lilydusk.

Julianne McDorman

One question - HOW DARE YOU. But really, holy crap lady. What a wild wild ride. I don’t even know what to say, cannot compute. Like, Poppy is safe with TORA ya big hoebags!! I am very bewildered and I can’t wait til next season for my millions of questions and theories to be answered, haha.i am so thrown with Cordy. Like, wasn’t she hooking up with Quincey before Poppy was in the picture? And I remember her not liking Tora during that hilarious dinner. But for her to be having hit men trying to kidnap Poppy and kill Tora???? What???? So I’m assuming Pops IS mafia. Interesting. Very interesting.

Bekah615

BUT DID THE SECRET GARDEN FROM 77 (or maybe 79 lol) HAPPEN IN THE BREAK

Jazz_The_Writer

YOU WERENT LYING TO ME BUT LILY WHY!!?!!?!??!???😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔

Alex

Happy holidays to you as well lily! 🦃🎄Sending good vibes to you and everyone else and wishing you all a happy holidays and a prosperous new year! Cant wait to see what 2024 MPL will bring! I just know it’s gonna be epic! 😁👏🙇‍♀️

Keely

I hope somehow Goliath isn’t dead and that they were just beating him again

Baybeeblue

When I said my mouth DROPPED, holy shit!! Time for any other re-read 💜💛 happy holidays!!

AEGAST

I think we should all just have a moment of silence for Goliath. That was such a sucker punch right in the heart. And the fact that he was unalived on face x was just so hard to see/read. Like just DAMN. My friend called me after she read the episode and for the first two minutes it was just us yelling “what the fuck” lol. It was a lot to take in. This was such a brutal but amazing episode and even though I have a plethora of questions, I cannot wait for the next season to see what bread crumbs you give us. You should be proud of yourself, Lily because even though it has been a rough year, you continue to make this amazing story that make us laugh, cry and come together. Job well done and I can’t wait until the next season, sis ❤️👏

Joan Marie

Lillydusk first, congratulations on this incredible and remarcable story that has made us laugh, cry even curse ( i curse but not this much🤣) well this roller couster of emotions reading this i have enjoyed every second off it. I just read the last episode like 10 times because i did'nt belive what i was seeing. I cryed i laught i enjoy it and hated it at the same time😂😂 i hope and pray that mister David is Ok and he is alive (pretty please!?🥹) Anyways miss Lilly !🫶🤗Enjoy your break the holydays with the family and friends you deserve that and more happy new year if we don't see you wich it's ok! Take all the time you need😎🙌 Thanks for your time doing this wonderfull story to us. #happyholydays🫂 #merrychristmas🥳 #happynewyear!🥳🫂🫶

Love

I'd suggest Lily doesn't announce when the next season will start... and everyone can be pleasantly surprised. Any delays, no matter the fault, could be scrutinized by a few "fans"... those types of comments made me sad and frustrated to read.

Love

Perhaps Gyu couldn't find any information about Poppy's dad... mysterious as the mixed up addresses

Reeree

I’m not crying . You are!! Dang Lily killing off the twin we just met is pretty cold 🥺🫥 Also how did Poppy and Tora get over Goliaths death this quickly and become horny mfers . Thank you Lily but also how can you shoot us in the face for the last episode? 😭 I can’t get over Goliath. Bring him back please please please I’m freaking bawliiingg

Reeree

Fans: yayyy season finale! Lily: let me butcher them for the next hiatus so they can stop talking smack. Fans:….. ☹️😖😭⚰️🤕

Anja

I'm so impressed by your story-telling, Lilly, thank you for taking us on this amazing rollercoaster ride! There's no helping it: I will have to reread everything after these revelations! Take care and take time to relax and unwind!

Allyssa

When you say "no more MLP episodes for the time being" you are still coming back eventually, right?

Layne K.Os

Tora and Goliath are so cute together, I mean, the complicity between those two! Twins 😱😱😱😱😱? I totally understand Poppy's reaction, I had the exact same 🤣 Young Mistress?! YOUNG MISTRESS???!!! Soooo... Poppy's dad, cute little Robert, was not (as I thought) a Gyu but a Quincey ?!!! Like, he was the heir of a mafia family but didn't want the responsibility and then ran off? We know Granny Kim Fleur/Pearl is her maternal grandmother. So, does this mean that Poppy's paternal grandfather or grandmother were clan leaders, maybe who just died and now they are looking for the heir, I mean heiress, Poppy?! It's just... WOW And CORDELIA is the right hand !? Ohlalaaaaaa (yes, I'm french 🤣) This episode was something else. So much emotions (I mean, a rollercoaster of all possible emotions) and the beauty and the intelligence of the story. LILY!!!!! You evil mastermind, genius writer! This is even better than I could ever imagine! Thank you, thank you, thank you, for such a rich and beautiful amazing story 💜 Can't wait to re read this a million times!

Layne K.Os

And Happy Holidays for you Lily and everyone in the US ! Not for me, I'm french but Thanksgiving weekend is my birthday actually Enjoy your first real rest and take care 😚😚

Minimouette

Grief make you search for comfort in all sorts of ways.

Mangaread

Ohh my, i was just reading the episode...again, and the David and Goliath thing, i mean 🤣🤣🤣 he is a genius.

Lola M

I have to go back and read everything from the beginning in the break to fully absorb the story all over again it’s that good. Goddamnit I wish I could shoehorn in the adult scenes

Zana

My poor heart💔 not sure i will recover from this😭 Wasn't ready for that yet🥺😭

Lilydusk

Also I don't recommend anyone listen to "heaven" by three doors down while reading this episode lol 🫣

CaramelBombshell

That universe couldn’t handle two men that look like Tora thats how ima take that lol

Layne K.Os

MPL sponsored by 3 Doors Down 🤩

Lilydusk

And nickleback but don't tell anyone 😂😂

Layne K.Os

You made my day 🤣 That's so true !!

SOPHIA A

There's no way I would describe this episode as soulless. I wasn't expecting something so emotional. ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Nicole Vogt

Yeah… the red herring of the ONE BED was an especially evil touch this time, Lily haha 😘

Crystal Colon

Incredible work as always! You truly outdid yourself on this one. Enjoy your break and come back when YOU are ready. True lovers of the comic and patreon will always be here to support your creative talents regardless of the breaks and time off. You are human and deserve all the grace imaginable. Thank you for all your hard work! Now go get yourself a snack and a comfy blanket!

Fernyx

Most definitely a real thing

Corinne Kalet

I agree 100%. Those “fans” frustrate me too. I hope my post didn’t come across like I’m demanding a date - just excited for the story to continue.

Penny Koligas

Lily-dear, thank you again for this wonderful story. I wish you the best of holidays. Take care of your precious self and enjoy some quality time with your loved ones. 🎄☃️🎄

JaxStarGazer

Lily I am so sorry I have been so absent for so long. I’ve been lurking in the background using this as my little escapism. Then I had to hold off on FP episodes for a while. But with the season finale I’ve just smashed through my last coins to read them. Lily, when I tell you you’ve had me in an emotional chokehold with all of these incredible episodes leading up to this finale…I cried. I am shaking, my hearts racing, it HURTS! My heart hurts so so bad for Goliath and that wrenching phone call. 😭 I’m not going to get past this anytime soon. And Poppy and Tora crying - and that triggers me again, here comes the water works! His twin, he’s just had to see something terrible (I presume deadly) happen to his twin and I’m not ok, ok? I am. Not. Ok. I just smashed through a big bag of malteasers to help me. And I’ve been soooo good! 🙃 I’ll never recover. I love Tora, I’m so protective of him. But this hurts. Mafia princess Poppy, step up to claim your throne with freaking Cordelia! I mean, I live for the shocks, and you do then so so Damn well! It just makes me fall more madly in love with the series. And will always hope it comes to print. (Praying, please, please!) So I’m curioussss, but patient enough and happy enough to wait and hope you enjoy your break. And Congratulations on season finale!! I’m so proud of being here throughout. ♥️ But Goliath?? I mean David. I’m going to be crying on and off all night. 😔 Kudos, Lily. Kudos for evoking so much emotion every single time! 🥰✨

ZQ

I think I’m about to pass out. Twins!

Alex

Yes! I’m even more curious about who she is now than I was before! I was wondering when we would see cordy again! I wonder why she is going about this route to get to poppy instead of sitting with Quincey and telling her everything. Unless poppy is meant to stay a secret until time is right or something to protect her from all the clans. I’m not sure 🤔

JenInK

Lily! A roller coaster of emotions...! Thank you for a great season. My holiday tradition (year 2!) will be to snuggle up with a cozy blanket, a hot beverage and reread MPL from the beginning! Thank you for this great story and grateful for this community 🐯🍓❤️

MCAM

I too.

GulMuna

Manifesting ✨️

GulMuna

Or not, I'm still hoping the swoosh of his body was him being carried some place else.

GulMuna

Take your time 🙌🏼

Kee Craig

I love this chapter even with my runny nose and teary face. Thanks Lily again for another great season! Please take your time and rest and self care!❤️❤️❤️❤️

Melissa Williams

This may be one of my favorite webtoon season finales. The emotion, the storytelling, THE REVEALS. We could always tell those two were close, but I never expected TWINS. And the cut away to reveal that not only did Goliath lose part of his arm, but it’s the arm that had the spade tattoo on the hand?? Ugh, the symbolism. This wrecked me in the best way, and I just want our Tora to be okay ❤️

Melissa Williams

And I’m not trying to soil this emotional post with some horny bonks buuuut can I suggest a secret garden where poppy gets some twin lovin’? Pretty please with dimples on top?

Lilydusk

Missed your comments girl! Glad to have you back 🥰🥰

Liz M

It's stunning

Darla (Tora’s THOT)

Really loving the revisions lily! It definitely drives the tone of sadness much more! I hope I will cry lololol 🥲

Lilydusk

It's ok dude I can't cry too 🤣🤣🤣

Jo Aspen

Oh no all of my feelings again 😭😭😭😭

Lilydusk

*stabs you in the eye to elicit some tears*

Slyreader

That was an AXE?!?!

Lilydusk

I guess it's more tragic now huh 🥲

Darla (Tora’s THOT)

I try hard to FEEL lol but it’s like mannnnn if it ain’t a dog video or sum- I’m like a psychopath with no feelings lololol I will hope to garnish one sad lil tear I HOPE 🤞🏻!!!

Lilydusk

Mr lily cried twice in 10 years, you're good lol ❤️❤️🫂😂😂

Slyreader

I thought maybe it was the butt of a gun and they were just dragging him off someplace to kill him off screen. I wasn’t expecting an axe, although given the state of his arm, I guess I should have

Darla (Tora’s THOT)

😆😆😆 damn he’s tough lol—i think I just need to be a week before cycle- then I will cry at the littlest things!

Lilydusk

Yeah, didn't wanna make it too explicit

Mangaread

The scene is even more touching and sad than before, if your goal was to make us cry even more, you did a great job 😭😭

LuckieCharm86

Beautifully written and drawn... But this broke me - so many bombs dropped.

Allie Bee

Omg Lily. Just rip all our hearts out and stomp all over them why don’t you?! 😭😭😭 these new panels make it even more heart-wrenching! You’re a pro at making us feel all the emotions. Brb gotta go wipe my tears now 😭

Alyssa Perrone

I am balling! This is tragic and beautiful 😭😭 I hope Poppy supports Tora in finding the assholes that did this.

federica calvert

OMG... It's tragic that's true but it's also so intense ...i feel, looking those pictures likes i'm able to touch all Tora and Poppy's mixer emotions....🥺🥺...it's really wonderful 🥹🥹

NotWickedWitch

😭 we find out Goliath is Tora's twin brother and lose him in the same episode!

GulMuna

So he really is dead 😥😢😭

Alex

Love it! So sad and beautiful at the same time! ❤️❤️❤️ absolutely adore! Have a happy thanksgiving lilydusk and everyone! Hope it is a great one! 🦃❤️

Joan Marie

First we found out that he is Tora's TWIN and at the same episode he dies in the moust brutal way a human can die😢. And watching all the images the moust wonderfull art work as always , they look so intense and sad and well all the emotions they are having and seeing Tora and Poppy and Goliath crying i cried re watching it😭😭. But in the end i love it i love everything about the episode even tho they couldnt save him he left happy to know that his bother is doing well🙌🥹 thanks Lilly for this wonderfull story and have a blast with the fam. Happy holydays❤️🫂🦃🥳

Hannah Hailey

I’m not crying…. Someone is cutting onions. Nooooooo

jordan swanson

The added details are amazing. But my poor heart wasn't ready for the brutal truth 😢

Layne K.Os

The new lightning and background are STUNNING Thanks for the share 🥰

Camille A.D.

Yep I'm crying. Reading it again is hitting even harder than the first time. Damn. 💛 GG Lily! It's so good.

Teru_K

Man... what a story.. I have no words. And yeah.. I cried a little.. I was happy to know Giliath was alive in the previous episode.. and now he's a twin and we lost him.. Happy holidays, Lilly. Enjoy your break! And I'll go re-read the whole series..

Fernyx

This new update broke my heart all over again

Corinne Kalet

Wow what was already heartbreaking is now even more so. Lily, you truly are talented with portraying feelings visually through your work. Outstanding finale. Have a relaxing, wonderful break and happy holidays!

BlueCaty

Yeah, like I didn't struggle to pick up the pieces of my heart over the last four days, let's shatter it again.

Nikole

I knew it was a damn axe 😭 the chapter is all I can think about for days! You’re such a fantastic storyteller, Lily 💗

Jessie Hwang

Long time listener, first time caller. Thanks for breaking my heart all over again, in the best way possible, Lily.

Maria E.

My face was too dry today anyway...

Nissa

Girls, are you all okay ? ‘Cause I’m not

LyricWitch

How is it even sadder now??! 😭😭😭 Beautiful, but devastating 💔💔💔

Reeree

What did Goliath do to experience this kind of death? Dang!! If it were Gil I would’ve taken it with wine!! I’m crying my insides out :(

Cherie

As many have said, the revisions provide more clarity and make the scenes so much more tragic and devastating! Great work, Lily. 😭😭😭

Blossom Scarboro

I knew it had to be something 😭 but the axe just 😭😭😭

Tilli

I am looking forward to seeing these revisions included into the full episode! It provides so much more depth...

Strawberry Cole

I wonder if this is all a misunderstanding. Like, if they are trying to kill Tora bc they think he kidnapped Poppy and they need her for clan stuff? OR bc she’s mafia royalty, she has a target on her head

Nikole

I knoooow 😭 this story has me in a chokehold lol

Minimouette

Omg the revisions look so good!! 🤩. I'm really looking forward to see those in the full episode.

Minimouette

Me neither 😢. It just occurred to me now that Tora probably have no family left. Unless his mom is still alive.

Minimouette

Wait, i just realised the previous episode was modified too! :O

Keely

Love the new details! I knew they had to be related but twins took me by surprise. I can’t imagine what it must be like to loose your twin. Especially like that. At least they made peace before Goliath died and he went knowing he did right by his twin.

Diana

aaaaaaahhh nooo. this isss too good

Francie Harville

I knew you'd update the episode, as I could see there were spots where you'd intended more content, but the revision is great-- it clarifies things that were a little ambiguous in the first version. The tragedy is heightened, and Tora's feelings better revealed. Poppy's care for him also reveals her true strength as a character, and her empathy brings them closer. Enjoy a well-deserved break, and I look forward to season three!

LouCas27

At the very last minute, I was hoping for a miracle that would allow a reunion for the twins…😭😭😭. Though this is fiction, such is the fate of people who get tangled in dangerous situations.

Sara B.

Lily stomping all over our hearts. Magnificent season finale. 😭💔

Sara B.

My best friends are twins and Goliath using his last hour of life to tell Poppy an embarrassing story about Tora is strong twin energy.

Sara B.

I thought machete? I am reading with a cracked screen, though.

Lily Gardner

i just caught up and this finale had me 😭😭😭😭 i wasn’t expecting twins and that revelation with the ending was so 💔

Eliena Leoiki

I recently became a Twin mom and that made this even more heart wrenching for me 😭😭😭

Helen M

“Suns up. Gotta go.” (Cue my heart being obliterated in a billion pieces)

Tonya White

I know writing this kind of content can get really dark for both writers and readers. I hope you’re doing better. I can’t wait to read more MPL. I feel like this is a weird place to just leave it. But all in due time! I sincerely hope this finds you well and in high spirits.

Anastasiya Prokofyeva

Please finish this story. You still have many fans and many people who are ready to support you. This story has not been forgotten even after two years. People know about it even in countries you may not know about and in languages you may not speak. We love you, and we love Poppy and Tora. Мы любим Вас ♥️