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Edit: added the deleted chapters in epub and pdf in case someone wants them.

Been rewriting some stuff. It's nothing groundbreaking or anything, so no need to reread, just some things that bugged me for quite a while.

I'll be leaving the PDF and Epub with all the chapters and the changes in here: 

Ch1:

-defined Amy's personality a little better

-changed some paragraphs at the beginning

-extended a little bit the goddess small opsie

Ch2:

-Some changes to the start

-Libris' personality at the beginning and their meeting

-Shifted Amy’s personality slightly

Deleted chapters 24 and 25

Ch 25 (27 previously):

-Lain now cleans blood

And other very small stuff

Comments

Napalm078

What was in chapters 24 and 25, again?

Napalm078

""Crist," Amy whispered. "It's actually Eldoria…"" Chapter 2, probably needs an h. "Before your opportunity walk out that door." *Before your opportunity walks out that door. Also chapter 2 I do like the changes to the first two chapters. Interesting how the goddess can seem so happy at times. Libris showed up with the goddess to give her the lines. And Libris was sarcastic, then decided to be a butt *and* sarcastic.

Nord

Can I ask why you deleted chapter 24 and 25. I don't think they were bad

Gunstolfo

Guess i'll read it again :^)

Rose Bouquet

Instead of deleting 24/25, you could have them as "bonus chapters" that can be skipped if people want or something.

Love$

Mm, dunno how that would actually work, because at that point might as well not delete them at all. But if what you want is having them, they still in this patreon, below. Actually, imma just edit the post to include them