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..i just realized i have not done the bg here ^^; imagine a background in some of these panels lol

im not sure what to do with the text here yet, is this annoying that we dont get to see what they say? XD maybe i should add a little more? or do you get the vibe im going for? :3

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Zardrastra

My read of this is that he's emotionally manipulative. I am not quite sure if that's what you are going for here? By structuring the conversation like this, what can Seki say? It's preemptively trying to save himself from a more emotionally charged conversation by dismissing Seki's emotions before he has a chance to speak. Were he to push back here or even attempt to raise the fact he'd been hurt... it would be socially "unreasonable" His emotions and him being hurt is being structured so they are less important. Keisuke is confessing to absolve himself of consequences. Keisuke framed the conversation so that any response other than compliance from Seki would frame Seki as the bad guy. It also strokes his ego, if Seki cries or shows vulnerability, Keisuke gets the validation of being desperately loved, while still getting to walk away playing the noble martyr. Granted if that's what you are aiming for it gives Seki opportunity to finally call Keisuke out on his bullshit in a "Are you telling me this to make me feel better, or to make yourself feel better?" kind of way and could get very interesting, refusing to play the weaponized passivity game 👀

rukan kawayama

that is not exactly what im going for but interesting! im gonna rewrite it a little, i should be just a tad more sympathetic to Keisuke..just a tad lol thank you so much for your feedback!

gehrminator

oh, wow, was not expecting that, good luck with your rewrite, you got this 👍