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 edit/ i changed a few things and it looks better now i think ? :3 ///

why do these pages look kinda bad? ugh.. i need to step up my game if im gonna redraw this shhit ;a;

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Andie

I think it looks good! I’m enjoying these redraws! ❤️

Yourew3lcome

I love seki so much I don't 5hink it could even look bad ever lol. Don't Don't too hard on yourself. You do amazing work!

Sandra

Well the can isn't exactly positioned right for him to be drinking out of? Like his mouth is in the middle, not where the opening would be.... and Seki's position on the couch in the 1st panel is awkward, but he just kinda got knocked/pulled down right? So that should be fine. The art itself is lovely 💖

Cora Kent

The only thing I noticed was Seki not having a hand in the last panel! Your art is beautiful! And I am enjoying the retelling of the story.

Jamie Giessen

I don't think it looks bad at all! You are talented!

Robert

I think two persons raised valid points re: position of drinking can and a missing hand. You can always rework on that, otherwise you are did very well with redrawing this page! Please do not be too hard on yourself or shall I say critical of yourself! Thank YOU for your hard work! 🙏💚🙏💚🙏💚