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next morning :3

i feel like this pages looks messy af... ack i might need to re do the tone later D:

btw im going on my sketch week now because this is the end of the scene and there only 8 pages left of this chapter :D so i hope i can finish next month 

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Heliodor

Not messy, it fits well in my opinion. Especially the different angles for the second half of the conversation in the first panel and the lack of speach bubbles give a good feeling of how they are talking (feels a bit like a mumbling / not directly facing each other kind of thing). The "ah right..." might be a little easily overlooked. If it was shifted slightly to the right side to be above the following texts it would be easier to read. But then again it would loose it's connecting role in between the speach bubbles and the following texts... All in all, I love this page for the full-size image and the background alone. And the Yuusuke/Seki relationship is going so well, no harsh feelings , no disappointment (for now). Calms my brain waves. So nice! Thank you.

Robert

Naw, it is not messy. I like how you set the layout of the building and everything for us to see. I was hoping to see Yuusuke and Seki falling sleeping together. 🫢 🫣 That would be most definitely cute thing to see, doesn’t it? Keep up doing the great art works and storytelling, please! Thank you for your hard work! 🙏💚🙏💚🙏💚

Sandra

It doesn't look messy to me either. I'd also love to see how they slept last night, maybe as an extra sketch at some point? (We can hope....)

Andie

I hope they’re still cool and everything 🥹

Olyver Thew

FUCKKKKK I’ve been binging this series for about a week now I’m finally CAUGHT UP😭 I love your series tho fantastic work can’t wait to see how Seki-Chan goes thru his summer break😁