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Greetings all,

This is the working description for the digestion alternate ending.  It will take place after the original girls are gulped down by the worms, but before Ghrolath can "rescue" them.  The last 2 pages will have a pg13 nom bloody version, and also a horrifically gory r rated version.  I hope you all enjoy what I came up with, but please let me know what you think.  The 1st 3 pages or so I am pretty set on, as I really want to see the new babes get eaten, but you folks that like blood and guts may see room for improvement in the last few.  I want to add that if you bump your pledge up to 10 bucks just to see and comment on this, and then go back down to 5 or 1, I won't even consider your opinion lol.



Page1
 1. Shara and Amala are watching as the worms crawl into the muddy swamp.
 2. A very thin worm is stretching down above Shara from a tree branch.  It's mouth is stretching open, and drool is beginning to drip.
 3. Shara looks up into it's funnel mouth in surprise as drool drips all over her head, boobs, and shoulders.  
 4. Amala turns around as the worm engulfs Sharas head.  She is beginning to walk towards her.  
 5. Another worm that already ate cocooned catsuit girl engulfs Amalas right leg up to her ankle as she walks towards Shara.  Shara is holding the worms neck as it sucks on her head.  
 6. Amala is pulled to the ground by the worm.  Her spear is knocked from her hands.

Page2.
 1. Amala kicks at her worm, and is trying to reach her spear.
 2. The worm engulfs her other foot as she kicks at it.  
 3. It sucks her legs in up to her knees as it drags her backwards.  Her arms grasp uselessly as she is pulled further from her weapon and dragged through the mud.
 4. The mouth stretches up to her upper thighs, and she is trying to grab it's lips.
 5. The mouth sucks her hands in, and passes up to her hips.  In the background, Shara has been swallowed down to her chest.  Her arms are flailing wildly.
 6. Amala is swallowed up to her stomach, and is trying to squirm free.

Page3.
 1. Amala is sitting up as the worm sucks her in up to her chest.  She is gritting her teeth and closing her eyes.
 2. It sucks her in up to her neck, and she cries out.
3. The mouth stretches over her head.  Just her face is peaking out of the worms closing mouth.
4. The mouth closes over her face.  Drool sprays out.
 5. Amala travels towards the worms midsection as Shara starts to really lose to her worm.  It has swallowed her down to her stomach, and is still hanging from the tree.
 6. The worm swallows her down to her hips.  Her legs kick in the air as she is lifted upwards.  Below her, the worm that ate catsuit girl and Amala is lifting it's head up to help Amala travel to it's stomach.  Inside, she is being squeezed next to the still cocooned catsuit girl.

Page4.
 1. The worm swallows her down to her thighs.  Amalas worm is slithering below, both girls stuffed together.
 2. Shara is swallowed down to her knees.  Furious kicking of her legs.
 3. Shara is swallowed down to her ankles.
 4. The worm swallows her entirely.  Her shape is clearly visible.
 5. The worms front half swings as she travels upwards towards the tree branches.
 6. The worm burps(mouth open again) as she travels even further.

Page5.
 1. The worms are slithering into some mud.
 2. They slither up out of the mud fairly far away.  It is a dark, secret cave filled with slime, and parts of mostly digested stuff (people and animals).  There are piles of bloody, meaty bones, and pieces of armor lying around.
 3. The worms are slithering into piles of muck to prepare digesting their prey.  Internal shot of Shireen inside her worm.  She is being squeezed by it's guts and is fighting for air.
 4. The worms that Ate Cassandra (mace girl), Amala, and catsuit girl are piled on top of eachother.  They are visible with an internal view.  Cassandra is fighting for her life.  Catsuit girl is almost unconscious, and weakly struggling.  Her cocoon is partially dissolved. Amala is very awake and fighting hard against the stomach walls.
 5. The first girl who was cocooned, Sword girl (shireen) and the barbarian are visible inside their worms.  Shireen is struggling and trying to curl up as her worm slithers across the slimy floor.  Barbarian girl is unconscious, and her cocoon is almost completely dissolved.  The first girl who was cocooned is screaming as her cocoon dissolves.  Her mouth, part of her chest, and her butt are poking through the silk.

Page6
 1. Purely internal shot: Shara is pulled deep into her worms innards.  Her skirt has been dissolved, leaving just her top and a thong(nude version as well).  A thick drool is lathering up her body.
 2. Sheila is screaming as her clothes dissolve.  
 3. Cassandra (mace girl) is unconscious, totally naked, with just bits of slime and tatters covering her privates and nipples (nude version as well.
 4. The 1st girl who had her arms wrapped egyptian style  (light brown hair and green eyes) is going unconscious, and her cocoon is half dissolved.  Her feet, top of her head (from the nose up), and her belly are uncovered.
 5. Amala and Catsuit girl squeezed together inside their worm.  They are both unconscious, and Catsuit girls cocoon is almost totally dissolved.

Page6 (Brutal)
 1. Cassandras skin is melting.  She has woken up, and is screaming.
 2. Catsuit girl and Amala squeezed together.  Catsuit girls suit is intact, but her face and head are melting.  Amala is horrified.  Her skin is turning slightly red.
 3. Sheila is screaming as her soon and muscle are being dissolved.  Parts of her arm and shoulder are down to the bone.
 4. Barbarian girl is dead.  Her flesh is stripped from half of her skeleton, and her insides are visible.  One of her eyes is bursting.
 5. Another girl (unrecognizable) is also dead.  Her body is being broken down into smaller pieces as it dissolves.

Page7 Tame
Fullpage: All of the worms curled up.  The one that ate Catsuit girl and Amala is sitting up the now empty catsuit.  Inside of it, Catsuit girl and Amala are both naked.
The other worms are squeezed into a big pile.  Most of the girl's are unconscious inside their worms, and some of them are totally naked.
(Another Version where slime and bits of clothing are covering their privates and nipples).

Page7 Brutal
 Fullpage: 3 of the worms are throwing up bloody bones and slime into a big pile.  There are bits of the girl's clothes in the pile.  The worm that ate Shara is strolled curled up in the corner.  She is just beginning to be digested, as her skin is slightly red.  Everyone else is dead and dissolved into bones.  A couple of worms are digesting girls that have been broken down into bloody chunks.

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