Inks? Ivy and Taki page 2 (Patreon)

The saga of frustration continues.  Instead of making the changes I asked for on page 1, the artist decided to do page 2 and appears to have already inked it.  

There are numerous issues I have with this page.  The overall appearance is great, but a few things I asked for got missed entirely

1. On the last page, I asked for the girls to have bigger lips, hips, and booty.   This applies here as well.

2. The spider should shoot silk out of its chest, not it's face.

3.  The silk should cover her eyes, nose, and part of her hair, much like the delicious shot in the Platamatina series.

4.  In the final panel, a wide sheet of silk should be spraying onto her back to prepare her for some serious cocooning.

I am growing increasingly frustrated with this artist, as he keeps delaying the project, and now can't seem to meet my requests.  Don't get too attached, as if he can't make the requested changes, I will cancel for good.  I know over a dozen artists who can deliver beautiful work without making me wait 3 months for a single finished page. 

I want to apologize again for the slow period, I am bugging the artists to hurry things along.