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For those of you who've read the story you know that the scene I'm working on is the one that sets up the first sexual encounter between Olivia and the MC. This is a question about the language used in the scene.

In the story she doesn't actually SAY that when you come back tonight "we're going to fuck", but it's implied. I'm wondering if it SHOULD be explicit, since that would be sexier to some. Let me know!

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Mike the3DGuy

Dammit. Can't edit the poll questions after posting. Anyway: there's no reason "SAY" is capitalized in one option but not the other. just an error that I can't change. 😕

Elek Szerep

Third option would fit her so well imo