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Gargoyle Pinup WIP 2 (Patreon)

Published:
2018-07-28 22:03:08
Imported:
2026-06
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Getting some good work done my friends! Hope you like it so far~

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DM_5

Why is her left breast pushed up so far? It looks odd, since her other breast is hanging normally.

mhfap
>>14200052

I like to draw them jiggling and such. Like she just shifted her body to the right and the left one bounced upwards in response, but maybe I'm not very good at it. Ah well. Gotta learn somehow heh

DM_5
>>14200052

It's not a bad idea, but her breast wouldn't bounce up that far. I'd lower it so that her left nipple is equal to the top of her right breast.

mhfap
>>14200052

Problem is it's way too late to fix that, as I'm almost done with the coloring. rip Best I can do is add some motion lines to distort it a bit and try to cover the mistake slightly. Motion lines will make it look more exaggerated and intentional.

DM_5
>>14200052

That should work; the motion lines will definitely help. :)

mhfap
>>14200052

I do want to thank you for consistently giving your opinion when things don't look right! When you get to be even a mid tier bigger artist on me you find less and less people who are willing or able to give constructive criticism. Your input is always appreciated haha.

DM_5
>>14200052

Happy to help! Just a warning: my artistic skills are limited to stick men. Take any and all criticism I give with a large grain of salt. =P

mhfap
>>14200052

Well look at it this way, if I didn't see any merit in what you brought up I wouldn't feel compelled to fix it! Pretty much everything you've commented on has been spot on thus far and I typically agree.