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Please give some feedback. I’m doing a lot of work right now and could use more discussion to motivate me.

I especially need to know how you people are reacting to Evisse. Her problems are very, very odd as you should know by now and I stress about walking the line with her to the point where she becomes unsympathetic. I know we won’t fully know how she turns out until shes in actual prose, but because she’s so strange I actively worry about how people will receive her. Never had to worry about that with any of the others, so it’s concerning.

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ThisClown

Overall very interesting. Her masturbating the whole time while they had an orgy had me laughing. Overall I like her character it makes her unique. Plus you do feel sad for her, so I think that’s coming across nicely. I also like how slow her relationship is being taken compared to the others makes total sense and feels more fitting

Eroyla Drago

I agree she’s coming along nicely! What I really wanna know is what’s gonna happen with Fleetfoot that destiny revelation threw me for a loop

Marksm4n89

About those chapters 241-244, did u slip them in during other posts and not title them chapter such and such? Because I took another look and before 245 all I could find are the updates, alot of the art, and the healer arc outlines

mhfap

If you want spoilery details you can message me, because anything happening with Fleetfoot is still fairly far off. Not this arc or the next, probably after that.

Marksm4n89

I'm technologically challenged xD

Marksm4n89

Ahh. Because they don't show up on the patreon app which is where I view all this stuff

mhfap

Yeah someone else had that problem I think

Marksm4n89

Ok im all caught up ithink. Just read 246. I dont want to read the outline because I don't want to spoil the plot so far. But if its anything like what you've written so far im sure to love it

mhfap

Something else must be wrong because since you're giving me $50 a month you should have access to chapters 247 through 256 lol

mhfap

Ok I checked, you're still set at the Giga Fapmaster tier. When I made the Cosmic tier, it didn't automatically upgrade you so you can only see the 10 chapters. Look into changing it but be careful that it doesn't charge your card or w/e a second time this month. If possible you might have to pay 20 again to read more right now, cancel it at the end of the month, and then next month resub with 50 and click the right tier. Patreon really, really sucks at this... I wish I could manually change your tier myself but I can't. I also don't want to have to send you an external link for every chapter that comes out from now till the end of the month cause that would get really annoying lmao

Marksm4n89

Understandable lol I can just search now that I know thatd an option

mhfap

Looks like it worked?