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This story happens after Shani finishes finding all of the ingredients for Calista medicine and back home.😘

I was so excited about the idea of the vibrating broom that I decided to post this extra chapter right away instead of waiting three months to post it 😆 (according to the progression of the original story, at least chapter 21 Shani has returned ~ equivalent about three more months)

Please download part 1 in the attachment to enjoy!😍😍

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Drayga 13

Hopefully Shani realizes eventually that it's just got a supporting role and is not going to replace her. 😅

Vilkat

Ooo a vibrating broomstick yes. But poor Shani. Just get on the broomstick with your master and you will understand. 😘 2nd panel change (finding) to (looking for) 9th panel you don't need the word up. 12th panel change (the) to (my) and (I fly) to (flying).

siablancaGL

Yeah, Shani will realize that in the next parts of this chapter, and it will be a lot of fun when they play with the broom.😆😆

siablancaGL

hehe, it's going to be a lot of fun with them when Shani gets on that broom😆. Thank you very much for your comments and for pointing out mistakes in the dialogs. I fixed it.😘😘