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A new character appears, this girl will be an important person who can change the direction of the story, hehe😆😆

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Mythwarrior20

Ohh, I can't wait to see what happens!! 😘😘

Vilkat

What a great chapter. 😨I didn't know sweets could be so dangerous and having them thrown at the enemy. What an amazing concept 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Good work Calista 👏 2nd panel add the word (be) to the sentence (she will be surprised) 8th panel you really don't need the word (but) 11th panel move the word (so) (the house I've worked so hard to build) 12 panel use the word (this) (she's flying this way) 16th panel (why is it so freaking itchy?!) (It's) means (it is) I am really interested in the new archer hotty ooooo🥰🥰🥰 may I have her contact info PLEASE 🙏 🤣🤣🤣🤣

siablancaGL

Hehe, I'm so glad you like this new character😍😍. Thank you very much for taking the time to point out the mistakes in the dialogue. I fixed it and upload the new version of this chapter. You are so kind and enthusiastic!😘😘