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Yaaaaaaaayy! I finally finished the ending for part two, I hope you guys like it! Just a reminder that I uploaded the whole comic into a separate Ragebait collection here on Patreon💕

The plot turned out pretty brutal, I’m a little shocked by it myself. I’m really looking forward to your comments!

Here’s a short comment from me as the author, but only read it after page 69, because it’s a small spoiler:

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On page 69, Shrimpo doesn’t remember that Finn originally took the noodles not for himself, but for little Toodles, because she’s still a kid and clearly suffering from hunger more than the others. In Shrimpo’s calculating worldview, it just doesn’t fit that Finn would consciously take a risk for someone else, the shrimp rarely puts anything above his own goals and desires. Even when he does something good, he does it because it benefits him in some way.

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Zanator

Love how you don't shy away from showing harsh stuff! Great job, Rbox! Poor Dandy! I'm sure this isnt the takeaway you intended but even little dictators need love xP Poor everyone, really! They got created with adult minds, bodies and feelings, but without the years of experience or education to learn how to handle them. Then they immediately received a ton of responsibility, and when they couldnt live up to it they got abandoned to devour each other in the emotional chaos of a failure they were set up for.

R_rBox

I’m trying to find a balance between heavy themes and something more or less soothing. I like showing characters as multifaceted so the reader stays engaged in watching them evolve or stagnate :D In my comic every character grew up from a young age, but yeah, I guess no one ever taught toons psychology. So in either case, whether they grew up or appeared as adults, they’re living in their own isolated toon environment and learning through their own mistakes

Zanator

Oh right! Now I remember, you did show them as smol beans a few times. I'm curious, since they did get to be kids and grow up, to what extent did they get treated like products in your AU, compared to how they're treated in official lore?