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SUPERSIZED Pages 11 & 12 (Patreon)

Published:
2017-09-05 16:00:03
Imported:
2026-06
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Snares was a tubby little kid spotting an 80s mullet. He's still tubby in a powerlifter way, with the added boon of a rocker's mohawk. SUPERSIZED has been different as compared to previous MEATIER SHOWERS titles in that the story was specifically for the 16-18 year old version of myself, when I first discovered the fandom and was exploring what it had to offer. It is my personal hopes that, SUPERSIZED will reach out to the next generation of younger furs, and continue to inspire long-time readers.

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Drakita

oh mi gawsh so kewt! )o3o(

Justyeen

This tubby lil hero made my day!

Tredain

aggghhh too precious <3

Urulai

That is both adorable and poignant, though I feel the text is missing just a little more oomph.

Urulai

I freely admit I am not 100% sure, it feels a tad sanitary, your discussing something rather painful and traumatic but the darkness is hinted not in the text but the imagery. My gut tells me to up the notch of the text just a tad by adding one or two words or changing one or two into darker versions of themselves. Throw a "destruction" in there. Draw on your own pain to write that (write what you know doesn't mean just write what you have experience but if you have to write something you don't know about compare it to something you do know about). And on an unrelated note some small edits to improve ease of reading, page 2 panel 1 should start with "In" and page 2 panel 3 should have "It's in facing-"

Urulai

May I also add a great source for writing advice/help which doesn't take alot of time to consume?

Woynich the Sphinx

I think that'd be good to do Urulai. I'm thinking "We've all met them at one point in our lives. They intimidate us. They frighten us. They seek to control us with our own fear. Yet, it is from that very same fear that we find the strength to oppose them. For courage is not the absence of fear... Courage is facing adversity head-on in spite of it all." or something like that might work well for the text here.

Woynich the Sphinx

I also think it might do to play around with where the word balloons are because at the moment, you've got words about fear drawing out the potential/strength of someone over Snares' body sort of shrinking and curling up, demonstrating submission.