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A Semblance of Emotion 089

"Oh hoh hoh hoh," Nora grinned, eyes darting between them. "Ohohohoh~!" "Nora," Weiss sighed. "Give it a rest." "But this is so cute!" Nora clapped her hands, her expression rapturous. "She's coming to us to ask our permission! Isn't it cute? It's super cute!" "If you keep going, she's goin...

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Manuel Copado

eeeEee decimos todos Viva el romance viva el amor

Green One

The newest member of the Pole Sisters

Cody

Well now Pyrrha joins the harem and the girls are all super welcoming and super jealous that Jaune's back ran out of space for her Tattoo and it ended up on his chest over his heart. I love the symbolism there to canon. Also unless I was mistaken this chapter potentially hints at Velvet and Penny joining the harem with Ruby and I am okay with that. They both deserve love and happiness too and I am way too curious on how their semblances will evolve and how well intimacy would even work with Penny considering she is a robot. Still wondering what Pyrrha's semblance will turn into as well and I look forward to finding out.

ASHNRider

Peak again, thank you

Eggroll 08

One of us! One of us!

udk spi

Naahhh, Ruby joining the gang is ok because she is already part of the group and they have good chemistry because of their friendship, but Velvet would feel forced, Jane doesn't interact with her all really. Jaune put your foot down and tell Nora you are not interested. She is always the one making up these ideas. I vote against velvet and anyone else tbh. Also from a practical standpoint, you as the author only have so much time to spare to flesh out all the relationships between Jaune and the girls, if you keep adding characters, everything becomes sorta meaningless and bloated. It's better to build up the relationships that are already there instead of adding new ones. Also suck it every-girl-not-Pyrrha, she got the best spot for her tattoo. Excited to see what her tattoo will look like in the end.

Michael Anthony Padilla

To respond to UDK, he's had a bit of interaction with Velvet at Mountain Glenn and Penny was featured with Yang during the Raven investigation. Also erised wanted to put Penny in The Temptation so now he can. With the Vytal festival coming up I think there's enough space to give them some proper TLC for the story along with finishing up Pyrrha (especially with the whole maiden thing being her character arc) and Ruby and Jaune having pretty similar likes and enjoying time at the festival grounds. I can definitely see Ruby as being more innocent as she's 15/16 at this time rather than 18 in Temptation and with a lot less trauma behind her.

udk spi

I totally understand your point, but I don't really like talking about " finishing up X character " like it's a one and done thing " and now onto the next thing thing" etc. kind of cheapens the relationship a bit.

DrknssRules1

I'm with Nora. I also want to see him take the bunny.

Michael Anthony Padilla

Welcome to storytelling. These aren't real people and we don't have a lifetime to see them and the whole point of a story is to tell the most interesting part of their lives. Edit: Just an add on as I was sounding a bit too harsh than what I intended. Its a matter of time vs benefit. You have only so many chapters and so you need to allocate them based on what you want, he ran out hence why Penny and Winter weren't featured in Temptation like he planned.

Jamieoeyes

So, if Velvet and Penny are really joining then the only place besides the one that Pyrrha and later Ruby will occupied is Jaune's shoulders, though I'm immensely interested in how you're going to get Penny's filled out, because I'm sure her father didn't design her with the necessary "parts" that most girls have. If she was a synthazoid then it would make some sense but she's an Android so I'm curious to how this is going to be worked around, if she was made human in canon then that would be even better, but I doubt that this story is going to be that long so I guess will just have to wait and see. Though I still will like a omake later in the future where Jaune bags Peach if not a story revolved around her.