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Circle of Heirs, finally, another important group in this universe has been introduced. A bunch of demigods solving impossible issues with their power.

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Paws4Me

Ooh. Canopy 8 looks fancy as heck. And that's a fair question from Benjay, how did Sonny know it was him who took out Silvermoon? I can't wait to find out about that, and this Circle of Heirs. Great story so far.

Paws4Me

Just one minor grammar mistake I noticed is in the sentence where Sonny Kong is explaining what the Circle is. He says: "We solve problems that security patrol can have never done." I think it'd make more sense if you removed the word "can" from the sentence. Again, just an idea. You don't have to take it seriously.

macko-okcam

I wonder if Sonny has any idea what he's getting himself into.

benj24

thanks, just fixed that.

benj24

hehe but there's a fun fact. Actually Benjay sees him as a role model, at least he doesn't plan to tickle him. :P

macko-okcam

Of course, but I'm assuming Sonny will be involving the entire household, somehow, since the others were also invited. I can only imagine that it's inevitable.

Flyynt

This might sound a little strange but imagine sonny tickling benjay's belly under the table with his monkey handy feet. While at the restaurant. Hehe. That would be interesting.

benj24

That's an interesting idea. >XD But Sonny is not into tickling sadly.

Cheshirebear

Wait....Hawaian shirts are not exactly elegant...I thought he had to dress elegant. Oh well, Circle of heirs is a good name for a group of demigods also Canopy 8 looks fancy! Great job.

benj24

heh, well it doesn't have to be elegant but a decent dress is enough, just not to show topless like he did. ¬u¬