He Writes Rewrites On the Sea Shore (Patreon)

Heeyyyy.

Couple of quick notes.

1. I did a rewrite of some troublesome book 9 scenes and added in a bit more stuff about the takeover. Not loads, and mostly not in Max's POV because he's in denial somewhat. But if you want to do a tiny re-read, start with the Merry Kisimas chapter. It's only a couple of changes but they show that there's loads of extraneous stuff going on that is getting under Max's skin.

That leads to the Pascal chapter (small changes) which leads to They Think It's All Over (big changes). The entire second half of that is a new POV and should be a smoother ride.

Then the epilogue has a rewritten Brooke scene because some of you read the tired giggly flirting as BIG LOVE TRIANGLE. I have clarified that scene to show no, it's just exultant silliness.

Hope you like these new versions better!

2. Friday's chapter is looking good but will be shorter than you like. Annoyingly, this is entirely to accommodate a terrible pun which I want to use as the title of chapter 2. But that just means you get a longer Monday chapter so it should be all right.

3. Support? Thanks!