Developing Mother Tongue (Patreon)

Some doodles I did while swirling the story around in my brain. I'm working on a new opening so that it kicks off the story better... It's not good enough for me to really love it yet, and that's the fuel I need to keep this going, y'know? Also, Batman will have operated on Krypton for a bit - enough to know the world pretty well, and there are a lot of other aliens on the planet. It's probably going to open with Zod cutting Bruce's tongue out 😨