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Apparently, Ana's expression joined with her hesitation gave her answer away—because Natalie's face morphed into incredulity.

"Really," Natalie said. "You've got no problem at all with fucking yourself. With sticking my cock into your pussy. That's not something you have the least bit of feelings about?"

"That's not true," Ana calmly defended herself. "I have plenty of thoughts on the possibility. Primarily, that I'm looking forward to it."

Natalie stared at her.

Perhaps that had been too blunt.

"And not for the rewards," Ana clarified. "This is an opportunity we might only get once. Thus, I'm more than willing to discover what it's like."

She wouldn't consider herself a thrill-seeker, always looking for new experiences, but growing a cock, and getting to play around with her own body? Ana would admit interest—and the practical benefits granted by the dungeon just made it better.

Because of how little it bothered her, Ana could tell that this was a challenge focused more on Natalie than Ana herself. As fitting, seeing how it was Natalie's class influencing the dungeon.

"And that it's with you makes it even better," Ana tacked on.

That part, she wasn't sure whether she should include, but she did anyway. Ana couldn't decide whether approaching this from a personal or impersonal perspective was smarter, so she would just be honest. That was probably for the best anyway.

Natalie flushed, some of the heat taken from her posture. "Well, I'm glad you can take it all in stride, but seriously? Having sex with your own body is a bit much, isn't it?"

Ana shrugged.

"I'm allowed to be flustered by the idea, okay?"

"But is it too much?" Ana asked.

"No. It's not too much," Natalie growled, looking away. "I'm fine, and I said I was. If that changes, I'll say something. You don't need to do all of this."

"Yes, I do."

"Why?" Natalie shot back. "Is this some kind of power play? You just have to make sure I embarrass myself as much as humanly possible? Drag as many mortifying statements out of me as you can?"

Ana tilted her head. She studied Natalie. Seeing the woman stand there, blushing, annoyed, and most importantly, vulnerable, something unexpected stirred inside Ana. Something that had reared up earlier, when she'd been playing dominant during their first encounter.

Maybe it hadn't been 'playing'.

Ana's feet carried her forward, not entirely by active intent. She stalked toward the other girl, and at the sudden advance, Natalie's eyes widened. She took an instinctive step away, but her back pressed into the wall, with nowhere to escape to. Ana closed the gap and used her newfound height to tower over Natalie, pushing the shorter girl by her waist and pinning her into the wall.

"Maybe that iswhat I want," Ana murmured, drawing her face close. "Maybe I do like seeing you squirm. Is that so bad?"

"W-What?"

"But even if that wasn't true," Ana said, "I think it's best if you just admit what you want. It'll put both of us at ease."

Natalie stayed frozen, eyes wide, breathing heavily as Ana towered over her. Ana could get used to the height difference—it was unfortunate she wouldn't keep it forever.

"Go ahead," Ana insisted, getting her face even closer. "Tell me the truth. You can be honest with me. It's just us here."

"I …"

The other girl was at a complete loss for words, which satisfied Ana. Her angry confidence from earlier drained so fast Ana would almost think she was always this wide-eyed and blushing.

"Come on, then. Say it." Ana leaned closer. "You want to find out what my cock feels like, don't you? What your cock feels like. Stop dancing around it. Just tell me the truth."

Natalie finally stammered something in response. "Are you—are you serious?"

"Yes or no, Nat? Do you want my cock? I could give it to you here. Get the ceremony out of the way, so the dungeon can't hold it over us." Ana's hands wandered lower down onto her hips, and she tugged the other girl into her. "Would you like that?"

With wide eyes, Natalie panted as she stayed frozen solid. Seeing the expression on her face, Ana couldn't help herself—that same feeling from earlier surged inside her, forcing her body to move. She leaned forward, closing the last of the distance, and captured Natalie's mouth. The other girl reciprocated instantly, opening her mouth and letting Ana's tongue slip inside.

They stayed that way, kissing hungrily, Ana's hands exploring Natalie's body, and the other girl doing the same. It hadn't been the way Ana had intended this conversation to go, but something had overwhelmed her, her body acting of its own volition.

But at how easily Natalie had kissed back, she had received a straightforward answer.

Ana broke away, gasping for air, her eyes dilated with excitement. Natalie was the same, her chest rising and falling like she'd been sprinting.

"I still want an answer," Ana murmured. Obvious as the kiss had been. Though at this point, it might be because she really did want to embarrass Natalie.

Natalie swallowed. Ana let her find her words; the poor girl was obviously overwhelmed, if in a different way than Ana.

"It's just … weird," Natalie mumbled.

"But not bad?"

"Not bad."

"And you're fine with what's happening? What's coming up?"

"Y-Yes."

Ana wasn't satisfied with the one-word response. She pressed back into Natalie, kissing her again. When she pulled away, leaving Natalie panting even louder than before, she nearly growled her next words.

"I want a real answer. Tell me. Do you want me to fuck you? Say it."

"A-Ana—"

Ana shoved Natalie back into the wall, then pressed herself into her. Her cock pulsed against Natalie's stomach, their faces an inch apart. "Say it, Natalie."

Natalie swallowed.

Ana waited intently, staring into the other girl's eyes. She would have her answer, one way or another. And there was something endlessly intoxicating about a vulnerable Natalie, her burning cheeks giving away her thoughts so easily. Maybe because she was so normally confident? And because she was so easy to read, like this—her trembling body giving her away.

Finally, Natalie cracked.

"F-Fine," Natalie mumbled. "Yes. I do. I—I can't wait for it."

"Can't wait for what?"

"For you to fuck me, okay?" Natalie growled back—some of her heat finally showing. "There. Are you happy? I want you inside me. I want you to pin me down and fuck me until until I cant think straight and I'm screaming your name. I want to know what my cock feels like. I want to know what your cock feels like, Ana." She started slowly, but soon the words tumbled from her, like she was trying to get them out before she could stop herself. "That's the truth. All of this is weird as fuck, but I want you inside me, I want myself inside of me, and this dungeon bullshit was giving me an excuse to hide behind—but you couldn't let me have that. So thanks. Are you happy now?"

Ana smiled. She was. She patted Natalie gently on the cheek and pulled away. "Thank you for the honesty."

Natalie watched her, breathing heavily, and visibly dazed at the words that had come from her mouth. They'd been surprisingly easy to get from her.

"Okay. I'm confident I know where we stand, now," Ana said, returning to her professional tone—and this time, not because she was actually calm, but to tease Natalie, because it was just too much fun.

If Ana didn't know a challenge was coming up, and that she would get to indulge then, she would have pinned Natalie against the wall and taken her right there, just as the girl had all but begged for her to do. But, there was combat coming up, and other challenges. So it was best to save all of that for later. And it was best to let Natalie stew. It would make it even better when the time came.

Seeing Natalie panting against the wall, scarlet-faced and unable to form words, Ana just laughed. She grabbed Natalie by the hand, pulled her forward, then spun her around. The forceful manhandling of the other girl did something for Ana—and something for Natalie too, from what she'd seen earlier.

"Go ahead, then. Let's keep going. We've got a dungeon to clear." She smirked, then, another impulse taking her over, she slapped the other girl on the ass to get her going—who jumped and covered herself, spinning to look at her with wide eyes. Ana laughed, then made a shooing motion. "And the sooner we get to the next challenge, the sooner you can find out what your cock feels like. Isn't that a great motivator?"

Comments

Mr Socks

Ana coming out of her shell is a good secret benefit to her trying to force Natalie out from behind her shield. Well done.

Jeanean

@Winter Please read this: I have to say, while I don't mind Natalie being pushed out of her comfort zone, I really don't like how over the last few chapters she has been constantly pushed around, kept on the backfoot, and her confidence and self-control been systematically taken apart. It just leaves a bad taste in my mouth, because it feels like, even if the "challenge" gives them the chance to leave at any time, Natalie wasn't really given the chance at all. What little "downtime" she had, was occupied by combat, and everything else has been pushing her to a single end-result by walking a VERY fine line of self-justification through incredible rewards, keeping her emotionaly unbalanced through the mirror, and this "talk" that was supposed to clear things up basically ended up with Ana pushing Natalie around despite being fully aware that she is in a vulnerable state. Natalie is basically being emotionally manipulated, with the "she could have left at any time" serving as barely concealed plausable deniability. It the kind of situation where she is given a "choice" that isn't really a choice at all because everything is arranged to push her into a single direction. Actually, the fact that she was given a way out only makes it worse, because its exactly the kind of technique manipulative assholes use to push a person to do something, but have them blame themselves afterwards if what they did has bad consequences. Because instead of thinking "hey, did something stupid and that guy manipulated me into it." their thought process will be "hey, I did something stupid but its entirely my own fault because I could have decided against doing it at any time." despite the fact that the other person was making sure that no, you really couldn't have decided against doing it, despite what it might look like. In short, while I have absolutely no problem with Nat being Ana's sub, the way this whole thing went feels just way to fast and forcefull, without giving Nat any chance to gather her thoughts and make a decision she isn't just fine with in that moment, but also in general when her mind is clear. And sure, as readers we can very reasonably assume that everything will end well. But in a remotely more realistic situation, this could become a really big shitfest really fucking fast. (Or slowly, if it takes Jordan a bit longer to realize how much of a grip Ana has got on Natalie. Because this situation basically makes it only easier for Ana to continue manipulating Natalie, should she want to. And honestly, out of everyone from the team, Ana with her "practicality" mindset is by far the most likely one to do it should she be given a reason, and maybe not even think anything about it if she thinks it was the most "practical" thing to do.) Overal, this situation just doesn't seem to fit into the general theme of the story AT ALL, and is incredibly jarring with how suddenly it happens. I can see how this was maybe not how this situation was intended to play out on the authors part, but this is how it looks like to me and it honestly makes me rather uncomfortable. I would strongly suggest rewriting how this particular challenge plays out entirely. And if you don't want to do that, the only way I see to still save it woulod be to change the way the conversation goes, with Ana maybe attempting to do what she did in this version, but basically messing it up and instead making Natallie feel challenged, who then makes it her job to ensure that Ana does NOT come out of this situation completely unbothered, even if that means actively taking on the role of a sub to play into Ana's apparent natural dom tendency. It would would create an endresult that would be very similar to what you seem to be going for, but without leaving a permanently bad aftertaste in Natalies and Ana's relationship. Also, it would fit much better with Ana's supposedly social ineptness. Because despite claiming every single time that she was probably wrong, over the entire POV from Ana's perspective her analysis of Natalies mental state were pretty much scarily perfect, every single time. Which plays part in making this whole thing feel even more manipulative. I really hope you take this into account, because otherwise I'm pretty sure I will drop this otherwise great story.

Wellzie

Please have Nat get some of her confidence back before this arc ends, this is getting hard to enjoy with how the MC character is just getting push around. If she doesn't then it will be hard to believe anything after.

Viime yön änärit

Reeally not feeling this swapped arc, just barely skimming through now

Nathan Schmitz

Y’all who don’t like this are weird as shit, this has been a constant thing with the main character in both stories. They draw out all the veiled feelings and kinks by pushing a bit. It’s all set explicitly with the expectation that someone can say stop at anytime throughout. Now that it’s reversed y’all are complaining? Zoey does this to Rosalie and Maddy in the other story and the whole previous arc in this story was turning Sofia into a fucking pet because of a bet. All that is fine but the reverse of the main character getting pressed a bit is what y’all don’t like. This aint Shakespeare so enjoy the Fuckin story and stop writing essays on why you hate this arc. Winter if you see this, keep up the fantastic work, these stories are everything I could want in a sex story and I love how often you update.

Naturemyth

Also personally really enjoying this whole section. Love all your writing Winter and its such a pleasure seeing how you develop all the girls in both dalliances and divinity.

Sturstryk

For those who are "concerned" about Nat's "confidence" going forward ... it's called being a switch, for God's sake. Having swapped bodies with Ana, and Ana being Ana while in a sexual dungeon challenge, has Nat being all sorts of flustered and thrown off her usual game. The fact that she isn't confident in a situation like this is incredibly believable, in fact far more believable than if she remained the same and dommed Ana. This is giving Nat the opportunity for character growth, development, and discovering the fact that she might actually like being a sub sometimes. Ana is doing absolutely nothing that Nat hasn't done herself to other girls she's been with, and BOTH of them have been incredibly focused on making sure the other is actually okay with, wanting, and enjoying what is going on. And Nat likes topping others far too much for her to actually never attempt that again. Also, there's something called after-care, which Winter has previously shown they understand and has implemented in their stories, that specifically is used to help participants in a scene process what they just did, make sure that they're okay, and bring them back to what they want their day-to-day "normal" to be. And, after the extremely disorienting and fucked-up situation they're in now, I cam almost guarantee that Winter will include some sort of after-care scene because Ana is VERY focused on making sure that Nat is okay and where she wants to be.

Jath

Enjoying the arc, the role reversal is fun, especially with how Ana kinda fell into it without meaning to. Will find it deeply funny if the dungeon doesn't demand they have sex by the end just to fuck with them. Frustrating, but deeply funny.

Rad

I kinda hope that they actually switched sub/dom with body. So when Ana goes back to her body she’s the sub and Nat goes back to being the dom. I think it’d be an interesting thing after their first interactions with each other are like this.

Oatmeal

Man, Winter, you are a genius. Love this arc, and by now I can say with certainty that you're my favorite NSFW author/artist.