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FotN Page 17 (Patreon)

Published:
2022-07-26 23:32:43
Imported:
2026-06
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I need some feedback on this page, do I need to fix anything? I will post two pages at a time from now on, I will finish page 18 tmr and I will add page 33 WIP for Patreon.

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Amber

🤣🤣 he is insane

Jada Taylor

Just a sentence, instead of bakubro saying “isn’t that a language we both understand best”, I think it would flow better by saying “isn’t this the language we both understand best?” To show it’s happening right now. But this is so little it’s not really necessary lol everything is perfect 🤩🥰

Kurishi

I think everything looks fine :o

kati_fry

I agree with Jada I think that would be a great edit. The art is gorgeous as is.