Carol swimsuit sketch fail? (Patreon)

I got part way through this and was like "I think I fucked this up."  I'm very tired and I can't tell for sure how messed up this is. If I can figure out if I can salvage it I may give it a try.  I think in reality Carol would wear a one piece for actual swimming and a bikini for 'not being able to really do anything but cause erections'.