K-Pop Paradise (Patreon)

This is a re-write of my first story as Neoidentity. Which can be found here.

I recently decided to give my earliest stories another read and was shocked at how bad they are! Honestly, back then I just wanted to get back into writing no matter what. So I rushed them out without even proof reading them. With this in mind, I've decided to give some of these old stories a new life! In the case of this story, I just used the original as an outline as I re-wrote and expanded every single sentence. Comment below if there are any other stories of mine that you want to get this treatment!

You can the web-version here, or download the PDF version below. Enjoy!