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Alternate Ending to Chapter 12! (Patreon)

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2018-04-06 20:16:14
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Another patron commission means more free stories for you! This was commissioned last month by Lora. 

This is an alternate ending to Chapter 12 with Lady Lorelei, affectionately titled Chapter 12.5. Many people wanted Sarah to cave to Lorelei, including myself, but it didn't make sense in the larger narrative to do that. Therefore, we have this version. 

Enjoy it, patrons. Let me know what you think of Lady Lorelei or Sandra and her disappearance or if this version is preferable to the route I chose. 

Comments

Alecta

Thank you for sharing this. Your writing is lovely and makes my day when I get to read more of it. My private little headcannon was that when Sandra ran away, she probably ran to Lady Lorelei anyway.

Mystery

Hooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooly crap. Yes. Oh my god. Yes pls.