My Best Friend's Girlfriend Chapter 11 (Patreon)

Chapter 11 had a lot to accomplish in a short amount of time. I needed to show life with Sandra/June/Sarah. I wanted to show this as a little chaotic. Being in control all the time doesn't come natural to Sarah, and honestly, I think anyone would need some adjustment. This is also my chance to poke fun at the harem type stories that flood these genres. Literally, at some point, there are too many people. More people mean more preferences and inter-relational dynamics. It becomes a mess fast. 

I then had to show the moment between Sandra, Reyna, and Sarah. Sarah won the game of goddesses. In this, I had to get Sarah her prize: Maria. A key moment was the loss of Reyna. I wanted to show that Maria was actually happy with Reyna. We may not understand it, but most D/s dynamics or kinks seem bizarre from a distance. Sarah saw pain, but Maria had pleasure. Maria didn't want to be rescued, and Sarah took her away from her goddess. 

Finally, I wanted to give Reyna another chance to bring Sarah into her. This is one of my favorite descriptions of what happens in Reyna's eyes. I love what Sarah sees. I also love the second blackout. We had one in Chapter 2, and now one here. We don't know what happens between them, and as you may tell at this point, I love that. I've carried it over into Poetry & Blood. It's a delightful mechanic for keeping the characters in the know, but the readers out of the loop.