The Undertow Feedback (Patreon)

Hello Darlings, 

I'm still hungry for any and all of The Undertow. I had written the first few chapters, and I was excited to share them with you. However, since then, I haven't got any feedback as to whether or not you all are liking it.  I know I don't write a lot of MF stories, and this one has less of a mind control focus and more of a BDSM focus. It's branching out for me, but as a bi woman, it's hot to me. I'm just checking in if others are loving it as much as I am. I'd love any and all feedback. 

So the question is simple: How do you feel about "The Undertow?" 

Thanks for your help, 

Kisses, 

Trixie