Page 7 Sketch - Crys Comic (Patreon)

After a 2nd attempt at working on this page I finally felt like it started to work. Breaking up the 2nd panel into 3 I think really helped the flow of the page.

Not sure how much I'm liking the last panel. I like it, but what I mean is I'm not sure its really capturing the feel I originally intended. For now I think it works though. Might take another look at it again later. We'll see.