Patreon exclusive: Gemma vs Alma (Patreon)

I hope you're having a very happy sunday! Today we have a commission request straight from Monster Hunter franchise, which I don't know anything about! My patron told me all that i needed to know to draw this commission and the work was pretty simple to do. Gemma and Alma are two recurring characters and if I understood, Gemma is a weapon and armor crafter and she makes them also with monster parts you collect during the game, while Alma is the one who gives you missions and tells you what to do.Now Gemma is testing on Alma some artefacts she made, not just weapons, but very interesting as well :DSpeaking of tests, I made a test too with this reward, I tested a new brush and my lineart here seems more similar to the works i make on my iPad. What's your feedback about it?