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This is a commissioned work that I wrote for an honorable and respectful individual with a structured vision. This is a new work flow for me, one that I found highly difficult and failed at when I attempted it a decade ago. While it took me a lot of time to "figure it out," I eventually did and I feel I was able to succeed at my commissioned tasks.Chapters 1 and 2 are fully edited and beautified. However, because my client and I are both human, there may be grammatical or spelling errors, and the things written in the chapter are subject to change later on. We haven't had the time to review this work in heavy detail, so we might change certain events and such later on. I'm posting this perhaps slightly ahead of schedule realizing that everyone here has endured quite a long wait for new material during my transition to a commissioned workflow.I was struck with my own unique inspiration for Chapter 3, and decided to deviate from my client's structured plan to create a chapter named "Dinosaur." My client wisely agreed to let my creative inspiration flow and Chapter 3 maybe came out better than intended. I think people will find it to be a blatantly exciting chapter, I hope. It features a very pure form of size related content, the type of content my readers would enjoy.I will be working hard to release "Dinosaur" before Friday at 5pm Eastern time USA so that you can all have a hopefully highly enjoyable weekend. It is mostly all written and completed, but needs editing and beautification, my final stewy sweep.Chapter 4 will be a return to the structured plan. After finishing Chapter 3, my focuses will all be towards Chapter 4 of Ranko. Any time I spend not working on Chapter 4 will be going towards the next Chapter of The Survey if I have time.

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steveBasic

Aha wow what a great start! First off- always excited to see a new story by one of my favorite authors. And second - so glad you found a patron and hats off to him: great decision, obviously, to work with Stewy on this project. It’s coming out fantastic. The characters are already rich, and the perfect shades of gray; neither is lily-white or a dark villain (at least yet). Each has quirks that make them human, Chad with his hilarious ego and Ranko with her ultra-Alpha personality. You did such an amazing job getting her to dominate the situation just through sheer force of person, and her physicality is obvious with the details you built in throughout. Also great attention to setting and atmosphere- really top notch stuff. So excited for you, your patron, and all us lucky readers who will hopefully be getting Chapter Three soon :)

bustyshrink

Aaaaargh already such a great start! I can't wait to see where this is going. I love the idea of this protagonist so cocky and committed to his egotistical dream of being an R&D head he's willing to empower a dangerous woman who thinks men are to big haha. I'm hoping we get to see her shrink and humiliate other men and making the protagonist watch! It would be a very interesting twist on the trope to have him be in a kind of sidecar "Igor" role to her going power-mad giantess with shrinking technology. I love your writing style so much Stewy. Its so unique to you. I love your habit of announcing a scene with a description of a sound first. I've never read another writer that does setting work that specific way and its one of many ways your stuff is so much more immersive.