Digital Prison (B-sides) (Patreon)

This is a work called "Digital Prison" AKA "Bloomers" and it's a B-sides work. I didn't like the main character and I was planning on re-writing him, but I'm not sure. Maybe you can tell me what you think?The work is super unfinished and unedited, but it is some of the only material I have available to post. I'm sharing this to tide things over until I can produce new creative works quite soon here in the nearby future. As a B-sides work, it is merely an incomplete expression or shell of an idea that I had.In the future, a digital prison is created by a Japanese genius, and it is run by only Japanese female guards between the ages of 18 and 22 that are all wearing bloomers, the typical gym uniform that Japan was running through the 1980's. I was thinking of naming this story "Bloomers," but I left it as Digital Prison for now. I hope it is somewhat enjoyable to read.Thank you guys. Love you all so much.stewy