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Sunder 5.6 (Patreon)

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2018-04-08 22:19:30
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2026-06
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The full version. Would've been out sooner, but my editor was MIA all of yesterday and in bed sooner than I expected on Friday. 

Not too much to say about this one. Lots of aftermath going on. Some important details interspersed throughout.

Last week turned out to not be as productive as I would've liked, though. The reason why... Well, one of them was that the beginning and lots of interaction in 5.7 wound up hinging on something I wasn't sure would be happening until the very end of 5.6 - namely, whether Amy would be present or not.

With 5.b halfway written, though, I should hopefully have both for you guys next weekend.

Comments

John MacKellar

I need to get my fog horn, because I think I see a ship. My favourite too.

Dr. Mercurious

I name this Dennis / Taylor ship...Adventure Time!!

Peter Christensen-Calvin

There are some stories where every update is both a blessing and a torture. On one hand, more content is delivered! On the other, now there is more to wait for. Your story is one of those... Damn it. Now I must wait a further week to see the conclusion of this day! Edit: So I went over the chapter again after reading some negative criticism on sv, and still have to disagree. In particular, the conversation with Amy was fine. Of course Taylor was dramatic, getting this story out of her is like pulling teeth - the core of her issues is distrust. Honestly, sv is toxic. One shmuck says something negative, and people pile on. If you ever decide to start posting elsewhere, I would absolutely understand, even encourage you. It's disgusting.

Koopa786

At the Bank when Lisa was in danger of being captured, the geas kept tugging at Taylor's chest. The qeas only stopped tugging at Taylor's chest when Lisa escaped.

Koopa786

At the Bank when Lisa was in danger of being captured, the geas kept tugging at Taylor's chest. The qeas only stopped tugging at Taylor's chest when Lisa escaped. In 5.a, Lisa is being chased and shot at by mercenary's, So the geas should be tugging at Taylor's chest. So Taylor would not invite Amy to dinner and Amy would not be present in (5.7).

Aria Raney

The Geas was tugging at Taylor's chest because she was aware that Lisa needed help. If she's not aware, it wouldn't trigger, at least as far I know.