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I'm not married to this title, not the least because we might not make it to the moment it's referencing, but it works fine for now. 

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EDIT: We didn't make it that far. Changed the name to reflect that.

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Gifted-Monster

Errr...shouldn't this be CiP? Nearly shit a brick and thought you gave us a full chapter as a gift XD

UsernameMK

I really enjoyed this chapter. On a largely unrelated note not really directed at this chapter in particular, but I felt like I should probably say it: it is very refreshing to see someone actually write Taylor in a way that *feels* like Taylor's voice in a crossover despite all the things that have changed. She's already more than familiar with a ton of things Canon Taylor wouldn't be and treats them as obvious background knowledge and yet it still feels like her. You were one of my favorite writers back when I first got into Fanfic as a pre-teen, but as I grew I found the style of the prose started to grate on me (I couldn't think of a kinder way to phrase that, but, well, I'm a little ashamed of most of the fics I enjoyed at that age). Like fifteen years later and this might be the best FGO fic that isn't a doujinshi on the merits of its writing alone. It's kind of awesome to have been around lurking and watching someone grow from "Naruto with Hyorinmaru and a harem" all the way to this

James_D_Fawkes

It's kind of incredible to *think* about how far I've come, too. I get people asking me for tips on writing sometimes, and the only real answer I can give them that doesn't involve planning a whole course on Coursera or Skillshare is "practice. Lots and lots of time and practice." Some of it is just a matter of growing up and getting more mature, because I wasn't much more than a teenager myself back when I was writing some of those stories. But I'm glad I can entertain you now, hopefully better than I did back then.