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Alright, it is time to close the small story poll. Remember that this month, given the emphasis on Making Waves (off now to the second of three beta readers LOL) and Horse for the Force, I will probably only be able to get one of these small stories done this month – February is short, and made shorter thanks to my work on Making Waves up to the Super Bowl. I doubt I’ll even be able to get the one small story beta read by Michael before posting. Hiryo, maybe LOL, he and I will see about that. I posted my most recent small story ideas as recompense for this. If you haven’t checked them out yet please do so. The HP ones in particular are kind of important thanks to another post I will be making later today. Kind of amused that I’ve only gotten ‘I like this story over this other one’ kind of comments instead of more detailed responses LOL.

Before talking about the poll results though, I would also like to thank all of you who posted your ideas on the opinion questions. Though I haven’t responded to many I have read them all and taken your opinions on board. 

1. The question about character deaths, which everyone who has read MW15 should have seen the importance of, was the most helpful in many ways. Essentially most people agreed with my own view here: that it should happen if it makes sense in the story, and is realistic, but shouldn’t be forced just because I may dislike the character in question. I should be wary of killing off someone’s waifu (Owen Gray, that made me laugh quite loudly), because it could also change the total feel of the story, and while realistic is good, I shouldn’t go for hyper-dark realism. 

a. But many people brought up a point I had overlooked: that the deaths should have an impact on the survivors. An example of this would be Dooku’s death in Magic of the Force. But for some reason I had neglected to think that even if the characters in question themselves weren’t important, that their deaths would have possibly life-changing impacts on other characters.  So I would like to thank Braeden1002, Justlovereadin’, Tomon and Thomas Edwards in particular for pointing that out quite eloquently.

b. Oh, and Hiryo, I don’t do everybody dies fics. Ever. I think Evangelion sucked ball sack, and I think the ending of nearly every Gundam series came close to that level of suckitude, along with Aura Battler Dunbine and several others. 

c. Ian Cooper: liked your comparison between Suspension of Disbelief and realism. Makes a lot of sense.

2. First let me apologize. I mentioned timeskips here, again, yes I know I’ve had questions about them before, because of Making Waves. In canon Fairy Tail there are two large timeskips, and one of them in particular looms very large because it was seven years long and effected the entire world but not the main characters. UGGGGGGGH. I think it was one of the worst examples of how to use timeskips I have ever seen, and I am still wondering if I should include something smaller or similar. UghX4.

a. On the other hand, people were very split on the idea of seeing scenes of ‘while MC was doing this, X was doing that’ type of scenes. I will here, go with the idea of showing them, but only, if they are better or in some fashion different than it would be in canon. Hence I will show what Tigre is up to in SB&H, continue to give villain POV in both SW stories because it helps show the overall picture (Thanks Tomon), but won’t show what Anakin and Mace have been up to in Magic while Harry and Aayla have been running around creating their third faction.

3. This one acted more like a popularity question about Anything Goes Game Changer. I’ve decided to keep the current format, but keep AGGC in the poll every month until it is finished, then replacing it with Semblance after that, putting my own votes down on AGGC every time. 

4. Again here the two patron story concept was more a popularity question than anything else. Once more, I think I will keep the current format, with a minor addition to be decided in the next post I will be creating today.

5. Here I made a mistake. I should have split this question in two. On the one hand, I was wondering how many people enjoyed the ecchiness become lemony goodness, and if they wanted to see more such scenes even if they didn’t impact the relationships just because lemons are a natural extension of those relationships. The general consensus was only if it’s important, and doesn’t take up a large segment of the chapter. 

a. However, the other aspect of the question was about the furry kink I had introduced in the lime in chapter 11 of FILFy. Less people commented on this aspect, however the consensus was go for it if it has an impact on the story. Considering that Harry needs to let loose his were-side more, it does. I would like to thank Zagan and Tomon for being the first two to comment on that aspect and bring it to everyone’s attention.

b. BIG NOTE: I will continue to label my lime/lemon scenes, and in the future will just add a Furry warning. That way, if people don’t like, they can’t bloody complain. 

And now, without further ado, here are the results of the small story poll!!

Yet again in last place was Semblance of Hope, with 424, 113 of which came from over on fanfic. Seriously, why isn’t it more popular? It can’t just be because I have split up Pyrrha and Jaune, can it? Or is it because RWBY went to crap after the second season? Hmm… 

Sword Bow and Horse brought in 473 and came in second to last. Pretty respectable considering it isn’t over on fanfic, and Vanadis is such a small fandom, though I still maintain that is rather sad and this story could become one of my personal favorites because of the characters and the room for world building. Hopefully at this point this opinion doesn’t come as a shock to anyone LOL.

In third place was Gods, Devils and Wild Horses, Oh My, bringing in 485, 224 coming from fanfic. I think this is rather because more people like FILFy than GDWHOM since FILFy has had lemons and Harry is more popular than Ranma. So it’s placement is understandable, unlike Semblance. 

In second place, in a big upset, was FILFy Teacher!! It brought in a total of 1210 votes, with 437 votes coming in from fanfic. The perverts are strong for this one, hrhrhm. Still, given how much trouble I have with controlling the chapter sizes of this fic, I can’t say it’s a bad thing.

But in first place was Anything Goes Game Changer, pulling ahead by a near whisker with 1283!  That despite bringing in only 140 from fanfic.  Woot!! So we get to see everyone’s reactions to the fight between the Wild Horse and the Bloody Crow. 

Again, Anything Goes Game Changer will be the updated story this month. IFFFF I a have time, I will work on FILFy but don’t hold your breath.

And in ATP news: I was so drained on combat scenes after writing up MW16 that I haven’t even looked at the outline. Ugh. Hopefully this won’t make me push work on ATP back another month, but I am dealing with some serious combat scene drain at the moment. I also want to ask for help: if any of you have been in the military and been trained in or fought in winter conditions, please contact me. That is an area I have little understanding of or history in describing outside of Wild Wolf and a few scattered instances here and there, none of which were with modern weapons or tactics.

Comments

Ranma Sean Dasanteki Monroe

Thank you!!! ..... umm... what the update on Lion of Light? Or The Effects of A Horse and A Dragon? Went back to reading those and was reminded of how awesome you were making those? Keep up the good work man!! Me and the Family are looking forward to more!!

Blitz

Could try reading up any battle recounts that have happened in Russia I know cold conflicts (hah puns) have had an impact on battle. Also for me liking one story over another usually falls into the universe your working with. Havent read the actual ranma universe and therefore it has less appeal to me. Cant say for others but it's kinda an obvious reason.

Questara

Its because RWBY went to crap after the second season, Ioved the first two seasons, but hate everything that happened afterwards. In my opinion, the wroters6 that took over after monty's passing didn't really understand most of the characters or their dynamics.

vimesenthusiast

Vis Lion of Light and EoAHaAD, they are on hold. Lion of Light is on hold until at least Semblance and Anything are done, and then I have to see where I want to take the story in the long term, or even if I want to have the story contain a long term, because I hate where Gold Digger canon went after the tournament section. As for the other, um... just need to get back into Mass Effect and finish up at least one of my SW stories, because at this point my Sci-Fi muse is fully invested by those stories.

vimesenthusiast

in terms of Russia try like, EVERY battle. And understandable on the whole not reading Ranma thing.

Brent Johnson

the problem may be the writers but you have to remember Monty had an outline for up to vol 8/9 so some of the deaths especially in vol 3 were going to happen no matter the case. Even if I stoped watching 1/2 way through vol 3 and 3 eps of 4. still love the world just wish more fic's would go non-canon more. The more off the rails it goes the better most stories in this setting are.

Questara

My favorite rwby story is one called "The Games We Play" by ryuugi that looks at canon and laughed in its face.

Slider

Damn FILFY missed it by so little...Yeah I am way behind with RWBY solely because I refuse to acknowledge that Pyrrha dies and if I refuse to finish watching season 3 than Pyrrha never dies lol! As to the final question, I am currently in the Reserves and have previously been Active Duty military though I am/was Navy so I wasn't really doing anything in the winter environments. Not really sure how much help I'd be beyond basic terminology.

link01742

Horse for the Force of course of course

Hiryo

1. b) Thought as much, but it’s my general opinion here. 2. It depends if the story depends on such time skips like ‘Back to the Future’ or similar reasons, like magic transport to point bla of time. In those reasons and if good explained, written (as you do) it’s OK. 5. a) As for furry. I like up to the ‘Fred Perry [More Furry]’ at most with furry, that means that the characters still have human faces/hands. See [More Furry] at this Furry Chart/Scale. In a way, I’m most comfortable with [Neko] with fur. Anything else comes more over as a ‘pet’. <a href="https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/855/796/94f.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/855/796/94f.jpg</a> b) Nice about Furry warning. Wondering if you add from above ‘which kind of furry’ warning you give. XD

BrawlingBard

You mention Semblance of hope as least popular, and while I don't know other people reasons for it I do know mine. (No it isn't Jaune, cuz fuck that guy) I personally don't enjoy the fact that you split Male/Female Ranma into separate characters. That kind of killed it for me.

Taco

I like Semblance of hope, just think it needs to pick up the pace a bit.

vimesenthusiast

Huh. Okay, that is a perspective I have seen before, and maybe even from you over in Semblance's reviews. But does that mean even if i, say changed the curse Ranma gets, you still wouldn't be interested? Or was it specifically Beni who turned you off Semblance?

vimesenthusiast

Would ya believe I haven't either? LOL. She was such a good character, and they never really delved into her enough. Thank you for your service, then and now. Don't think enough people really just thank vets or want to help them. I might ask you some questions in the future when I get into space battles - hells, for both SW fics and for ATP, but you're right, that wouldn't help me much for the next chapter of ATP. Luckily Kilderon has also offered his aid and already sent me some really good information.

vimesenthusiast

After the next two chapters it will be. Then Ranma will be going on the offensive in a lot of ways while also getting to know his chosen lady better.

vimesenthusiast

I would say pretty furry on that scale then LOL. Great find that.

Slider

Haha I'm glad to know I'm not the only one! I agree she was such a fantastic character. You don't see conflicted and insecure Ace characters in mainstream media often and she was breath of fresh air. Thanks! Honestly it surprises me sometimes just how much people do express their appreciation these days. I agree it's probably not as much as it should be considering the danger involved in most of the main jobs of some of the vets but it is nice to see some people responding anyway :). Just let me know if you need anything from my end and I'm glad that Kilderon has helped you out so far!

Adam Ouellette

For me I like the story but personally I like Ranma with the girl curse and without it it just doesn't feel right, I mean you can do a very good job without it, just look at wild wold or your hsotd crossover, but yeah I prefer Ranma to have the drowned girl curse, might be because I personally would like to know how it feels to be a girl, I mean I am a heterosexual guy who is not part of any lbgtqia, though I support them, and am sure of my gender preference, but I have often thought about how it would be to be a girl, not changing anything about me preference-wise or personality-wise, so I would instead be a homosexual girl and Ranma let's me have that outlet I guess. Not sure if that makes any sense after rereading and rewriting this comment like 4 times, but yeah if you need me to expand on that I could.