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Okay, since I was unable to get a fourth story published I thought I would give you all a bit of a gift to you all. One Idea that I have had people continually bringing up to me via pm over on fanfic or here and review over there, is that people have wanted me to do a DC comics crossover. Now, for the most part I have been against this because I have major issues wit ha lot of the principle powers of that world. But those issues could be overcome or ignored if I felt my muse driving me as it did with A Third Path. So here we go. Mind you, most people ask me to do a HP/DC crossover ‘in the veins of megamatt09’s works’. Narrow eyed stare…

So to give the person who said that and then left a review stating that I could learn a thing or two about writing from megamatt09, I decided to write up a Ranma/DC crossover concept first. 

A Journey Gone Astray (obviously name subject to change)

Instead of just letting Ranma and Genma go after the older Saotome stole his yattai, Ukyo’s father both goes after them and informs the police, forcing Genma to run even faster than he would have otherwise and in a different direction, making for the shores of Hokkaido with the police in hot pursuit. During this time, Ranma realizes his father had stolen from his friend and leaves in a huff, only to run right into storm which forces him back to his father just as he is about to put to sea. While the two of them are trying to get to Honshu., the storm capsizes their boat, and the stormy sea whisks Ranma away from his father.  The next thing he knows, he’s waking up on a beach somewhere with a few older women poking him with spears and swords.  What follows is an adventure of his young life, the second friend he’s ever made, and then his leaving the island of the Amazons the same way he came, and this time with a bit of godly aid – Hera tells the Amazons the youngster has a fated future ahead of him he must fulfill.

Fast Forward, a Ranma who has taken his training far more seriously even then in canon and Akane are having a heart to heart. Akane has finally admitted she can’t handle his curse, and that finally frees Ranma from the honor obligation.  After that, he has to pay for his father one last time, a bill to be paid to the government of Japan who bought up many of his debts. With that, they can call on Ranma to do five tasks for them, short of murder and kidnapping. Three of them are easy, dealing with Japanese borne super villains/ The fourth sees him heading into the Amazon rain forest to help a series of archaeologists on an expedition. The second takes him to America to protect a business mogul meeting his opposite number in an American city, Gotham city to be precise…  

Things this Fic would include:

1. Timeskips: Yes, in this fic it would be a necessary evil. Kids can be fun for a bit, but not as main characters. And there are reasons to start merging the world at that young an age. Specifically at that age, boys and girls aren’t all that different, especially if they are all being trained in martial arts. But let’s face it, 18 year-olds have more fun LOL.

2. Inadvertent Genma bashing: Ranma will actually get along with his father okay so long as Genma no longer tries to make decisions for him. Other people though… well, when you say your childhood memories are shot to hell because of the number of concussions you’ve had and then mention about how your father trained you to a literal inhuman degree, people will start to jump to conclusions.

3. Seriously trained Ranma! Ranma will have trained to a degree that the Amazons are actually afraid of teaching him most of their techniques, and he will have picked up most of them on the fly. Ranma will also not be adverse to weapons as I’ve had him be in a few of my stories.

4. Pairings: Ranma/Kara (Supergirl)/Cassie Sandsmark (Wonder Girl) /Koirandr/possibly Diana (Wonder Woman)

a. Kara and Ranma will meet up soon after his adventure in Gotham. The two of them will hit it off due to the weird circumstances they meet for – “Are you telling me you sneezed and nearly beaned me with that tractor!?” 

b. Cassie – Cassie will be an old friend met once more. The two of them will get along with Cassie determined to make Ranma her friend again. She and Kara will have already met via Diana and will be best friends but also have a sort of rivalry going on. It will take them a while to realize their affection for one another is a bit deeper than they think, and matches what both start to feel toward Ranma.

c. Diana and Ranma will be…complicated. Made worse by miscommunications, lack of memory and of course the fact he’s gotten used to equating Amazon with kiss of death giving psychos and old women who like to treat his life like the best daytime drama. Whether or not she will become a big figure/motherly figure or a love interest is unknown

d. Kori and Ranma – this just makes a lot of sense because of the sheer amount of fun they would have palling around, seeing the sights and getting into fights. 

5. Snarky Ranma when it comes to heroes. Ranma will have issues with Heroes ranging from small complaints about all that spandex and just why 

a. Batman bashing - “Wait, so he’s killed how many dozens of people, and you think because he’s insane he deserves to just be locked away in an asylum that is more like a turnstile than an actual prison” – Batman in turn will not like Ranma at all for a number of reasons, including the fact the fact Ranma kills the Joker when he attacks the meeting between the business people he was protecting.

b. Ranma will in contrast actually get to know and like Superman, even though he will poke fun at him for a lot – why do you wear your underwear on the outside anyway being one of the first things Ranma says to the man of steel.

c. Ranma and the Justice League will be a mixed bag.

6. An ickle bit of mythology, specifically, the Greek and Japanese type. Ranma will go searching for a sword, and will be friends with the Amazons whether they like it or not, and will have severe issues with Ares. 

7. New Rivals. Does this come as a surprise? Orion – New Gods guy, Robin, Area, Superboy, and more. Ranma will be, well, Ranma and will rub guys and girls the wrong way at times.

8. Shazanma!!! – Ranma will have found the medallion or whatever it is that gives the power of Shazam. Mind you, he won’t actually like to use it all that often, or see the need most of the time. But when he wants it, it will provide a clear power up that will allow him to hang with the powerhouses of the Dc universe.

9. Justice Juniors – both the original comics version of the Teen Titans and the fact that I would be concentrating on the younger characters from DC. 

10. Screwed up timeline: I will mix and match events, when characters were introduced, when, well, anything and everything really. 

11. Focus on a few: While I will use numerous enemies and plots I wish to focus on just a few main characters, and FREAKING KEEP IT THAT WAY!!!!

12. Best Buds Beast Boy. Other than Robin, who he will both get along and fight with, Ranma and Beast Boy will be good friends perhaps the first actual guy-type friend Ranma has that doesn’t come with a rivalry attached.

13. Space faring Ranma. Ranma and the team around him will eventually be heading into space to deal with enemies there.

14. Forced to think – Ranma is, even as Shazam, not strong enough to just plow through enemies. He will have to eventually think up strategies tactics not just for himself but for those around him.

15. Emphasis on comedy rather than world building. While world building will happen I mean to keep the emphasis small and on Ranma and those around him. In this manner it will be a comedy and action oriented rather than like in ATP.

16.  Merged worlds: While the superpwered people would know about Nerima and its environs, and vice versa, since none of the JL make their home in Japan, it doesn't really register.  Ryoga and Cologne as well as Happy are known though, and Ranma made an impression on more than a few when he fought Saffron.

17.  Darksied's Dire Directives.  Darkseid is going to be the big time enemy of this piece and will be sending troops, pawns and disturbed individuals to Earth rather like clockwork for Ranma and co. to deal with.

18.  Population control:  Ranma, and eventually those with him, will realize that killing their opponents should be on the table if in the defense of other's lives.  This will mean the various villains out there will be culled.

19.  Shenanigans.  This Ranma will not be nearly as at home with the idea of being open about his curse, and will also be willing to use it as he did occasionally in canon - distraction, disguise, excuse anything and everything.  The only ones who will know Ranma has one is those he trusts or those who find out by chance.  Odd how the second one there can lead to the first at times.

Anyway, there you go guys and girls.  Hope some of you liked this thought exercise.  If I get enough interest, I may come up with an HP one.  So long as that daft asshole of a guest doesn't leave me another insulting review LOL. 

Be aware, I would not even think of taking this up until ATP is done.  I just don’t think I could juggle two comic-type fics at the same time.  

Comments

Bryan Hayden

Sounds promising, I hope to see it developed further in the future

Azrael Winter

Sounds pretty good, I would love a HP one but a ranma one would be good too, you haven't led us wrong yet :D

Milandaanza

It sounds interesting, I'm not sure I like the angle of how he meets Kara though (Albeit I'm a supercorp fan). Personally I adore the idea of it being Ranma/Koriand'r and then that turning into Kori bringing in Kara as a childhood friend, and maybe Raven as well (IE building Ranma a harem / team against his will). I'd also state his jusenkyo curse being a 'blessing from Hera' so he can grow peacefully with the amazons (and then giving him control when his training is complete) would be interesting, and show us a Ranma who grew up with his female side as well and doesn't particularly care about his gender. Beyond that it's a fun thought exercise and I like a lot of the aspects of it, thanks for the amusing thoughts!

Konan2020

Sounds Awesome, more Ranma is Always better

Huninn

Story sounds awesome but ya that guest comment is baffling.

Nobody

Definitely sounds fun. Feels like teasing though, knowing how hard it is to keep up with just your current work load. Might be nice to see after AGGC gets done.

Michael Grover

I despise megamatt09’s fics. Sorry but never been able to get into them. In my book you are the better writer.

Kariston Draconis

I like it. I like it alot. I like it so much I think you should not even bother with a HP version, I mean you already have a HP/Marvel crossover, give Ranma the DC one.

Michael Grover

On a side note. I will say if there was a new fic idea from you I would love to see you toss around. Is a Ranma and Harry Potter cross over with a third setting. Just to see how you would play them off each other. Not a slash fic if anyone was thinking i was implying that.

Lavick Vell

I would definitely vote for this in the polls if you put it up. Kenchi618's 'Less Than Zero' is the only really good DC story I've found and it always just leaves me craving more from that series every time he updates.

Blitz

Never heard of megamatt or if I have I dont remember his fics, as it is I compare you to kat and a few other authors that write fics that could be sold as actual books. Speaking of kat I was gonna laugh this off as saying youd probably update it faster than she has her own crossover and just leave it at that...but this fic idea does actually sound pretty interesting in the sense that itd be a stark contrast to ATP in both your choice of character and the type of build, probably would become like making waves (in fact I'd dare say they're the same type of ranma minus their thoughts on the curse) with just as much potential of a world to explore and cool powers (shazam power up was totally not a selling point, nope no siree). Sadly if you added it now then I'd have even more of an indecisive fight on what to vote for. Maybe keep letting it stew in your head and then when one of the fics beyond AGC are knocked out it can truly bloom, as it is it sounds exciting and erotic (in Diana's case anyways).

Cereburn

It looks like it'd be fun story, although I'm not seeing how he got cursed as Jusenkyo if they left China that early - didn't Jusenkyo happen when he became a teenager? Timelines for that in the wiki's are pretty fuzzy(speaking kindly) so you've no lack of wiggle room but it was definitely towards the end of the canon trip, likely 13-15 years of age. His meeting with Ukyo however was well before him becoming a teenager; again, I'm not sure of the exact age but I imagine not long after starting the training trip - maybe 4 or 5? And depending on if you're going by the anime or manga, his cat-tastrophy was between 6 and 10 years. tl'dr - please don't make the mistake of some other Authors who change up the timeline without connecting the dots in a plausible fasion. Not sure why I'm worried about it, I don't recall you committing that sin at all. tl;dr2 I'm a picky bastard who nitpicks over free stuff - ignore me.

FateBurn

really would like to see this as an actual story at some point it sound really promising.

AlexisVA

People read Megamatt for any type of plot and not just to satify their smut craving? Like what the juice?

Vanestus

Sounds like an interesting story.

Readm

it sound fun but 4 things 1 does he need to be cursed for this fic i mean if hes been more untrusting of genma since he was 5 plus whatever he leans from the amazons couldnt he have been smart enough to not jump into jusenkyo before he listened to the guide. 2 i dont think DC is a realistic setting for a harem fic you could maby get away with 2 girls if 1 was starfire but thats it in my opinion especially with amazons when they do pick men they are super territorial. 3 in you bulllet 14 you mentioned ranma as SHAZAM was that a mistype or do you plan on ranma taking billys place couse id be cool with that. 4 Do you really think ranma would get along with Robin/nightwing i feel like they would clash a lot

Dark

If ranma is not cursed than its not ranma! most fun is with his curse!

Dark

Its will be a very good crossovers, and maybe only one of a few interesting!

Readm

ive read a few fics where he isnt cursed or he gets a cure and they arnt bad i mean ranma identifies as male anyway him not being cursed just gets rid of some joke opportunities and makes relationships easier it dosent change his personality pls one of the main reasons he was cursed to turn into a girl was his issue with woman in this fic he wouldnt have that mental bias

Nicolous Ramirez

There are so few Dc crossovers and even fewer that are readable. Is it going to be in the polls cuz I’ll put all my votes on that one.

Treebeard Joshua

Other then possibly having 2 amazon gfs which i don't see happening Its one or the other not both, and him being SHAZAM which i guess is ok if he doesn't use it often. I would love to see this.

Razgriz0x

The fact that this came about in retaliation to an Guest saying you need to write more like Megamatt09 is hilarious. From what I've read of his works (quite a few but most just don't appeal to me) his approach is mainly 'Make a pairing, write the smut for said pairing, find a way to fit into the story to be written later, develop very little plot/story (rehash book/tv/movie series), always have Kara Zor-El or other iteration there-of shipped with main character, and last but not least, main protagonist is OP and Mary-Sue in all situations but especially at smut.' Where as you outline a story, make character development something we read about instead of having to assume, make believable relationships happen (both good and bad), and entertain with comedy, romance, a little tragedy and a good amount of world-building that doesn't completely bog down the story. By far you are an Author, whereas Megamatt09 is a Smut-Writer. So I'm looking forward to this, but also would love to read an outline of HP/DC xover, even if it doesn't go forward.

Aaron Hardin

Megamatt is a smut writer, you are a writer who includes Lemons when they are relevant to the plot, as such you write different Genres even if both are fan fiction. Advice to write like someone in a different genre should always be taken with a grain of salt unless there is a writing technique that is being pointed at.

TendouSouji13

I love reading your stories, and the world that you build around the characters. You make believable scenarios that could exist in the universe your characters inhabit. Megamatt is a writer that creates smut and slaps some story around it. Nowhere near your level at all. I am looking forward to this new Ranma/DC story.

Gune

Go nuts, love the sound of it

Hiryo

With Genma, the Chauvinist, talking all this time this to Ranma, it sadly still fit Ranma's worldview. Because if someone always hears his father talking like that about woman, one has to experience the opposite and take some lesson to unlearn those chauvinistic tendencies.

Hiryo

I love this whole scenario and look forward for when this one comes out. One thing that comes to mind is the heart-to-heart talk about their relationship. I for one would change it this time, since Akane has a different reason this time. Akane would be in this story a lesbian, (thus this would explain Akane’s bipolar tendencies and why she acts differently around Ranma [as a girl]). Ranma not wanting to stay female or staying locked in his curse wants out. Akane not wanting a male Ranma is OK with this.

zagan

While it sound like a fun story, I would prefer if finish one or two other fic first, ATP mostly. We already got a new story we Bhallspawn, this one can wait I think.

1000Sunny

sounds awesome :)

Tomon

At first I was afraid that you would make Ranma strong enough to physically fight the enemies of justice league. And yes, there is a batman but being combat genius is different than being genius in planning. The Shazam is excellent route as he can stay himself most of the time and is forced to get better than ever before. But got available logical power up when needed. Excellent. I really love this story premise and the way you connected these two words. Amazon meeting amazons would be fun. Also how old would Diana be when Ranma washed on their island? And I would continue but maybe when I'm not writing on my phone on this damn website :-D

Friendly Neighborhood Eldritch Horror

As much as I like the idea of Ranma in DC, I have some issues with some of the ideas you list here. One is killing villains (Joker specifically). There are real reasons why this isn't actually a good idea in DC, including some Batman would easily know, and Ranma probably should. Death isn't exactly a reliably permanent thing, and bad guys who get killed before their time, if they are bad enough, actually tend to come back worse, thanks to demons, ghost transformations, and the like, and Batman was trained partly by the League of Shadows, so should be familiar with resurrection being a thing even before he starts his heroic career, plus Gotham being filled with magic junk. Additionally, some interpretations of the joker have it be that there are actually multiple jokers, some living, some dead, most of them copycats of the original, with them having different tendencies (a way people explain differences due to different writers and artists). Joker going to Arkham isn't so much Batman's decision, as that of the courts, and it isn't like prisons in DC are that much more secure than the asylums, but both might be more secure than Hell, and be less likely to give power ups to bad guys. That isn't to say killing should never be done, but that it isn't actually the best way to defend the innocent, especially if you aren't a high level magic user who can proper seal away high level demons and banish ghosts and the like. DC heroes will still kill under certain circumstances, especially against enemies they don't casually overpower, just look at some of Wonder Woman's stories, for instance. Admittedly, the source material can be inconsistent there, but I'd try to avoid character bashing over it, and assume that with the intelligence of the heroes involved, and the possible reasons that do exist in-setting, that they have good reasons. Ranma has encountered enough ghosts and beings with questionable means of long lifespans or whatnot, and as a high level martial artist, should be aware enough of rumors of the League of Shadows and it's leadership, to know that death isn't a solid solution to all enemies, perhaps especially the crazier ones who tend to be more likely to linger as powerful ghosts and curse-grudges and the like. On the other hand, you could make it possible for such to be killed if you have one of Ranma's training aspects being some kind of shamanism sufficient for dealing with most ghosts and curses and most demons that can be physically beaten if you spiritually reinforce the body to weaken them to make banishing/sealing possible, and perhaps have the Justice League recruit Ranma on occasion to deal with enemies they had to kill which are likely to come back, or have come back, because their magic users aren't specialized at that sort of thing, and Ranma is way more trustworthy and less trouble-bringing than the likes of Constantine. This could set up the criticism of the Justice League being more their relatively incomplete magic user specialty roster, and likely the political reasons they can't recruit the needed sort more permanently (certain religious groups from major countries would flip out given some of the types of stuff involved, and many with the higher end skills of the right sort are too busy with their own shit do join the League even if they could more openly show such skills to UN bodies who approve of Justice League areas of allowed operation and such). This would actually play nicely into an overarching plot of Darkseid, with his infiltrators messing with politics and religion to make things hard on the Justice League's becoming properly effective at their jobs. G.Gordon Godfrey possibly effectively brainwashing weaker willed portions of the population exposed to his propaganda while having an inherent divine talent that prevents his work from being recognized for what it is and keeps him from being identified, with mystic entities on the level of Darksied being normally the only ones with defenses sufficient to resist the effect, and Wonder Woman fully awakened to her Truth divine aspect being likely the only sort of lower level entity that could detect things properly without higher power levels and counteract the effect on the population afterwards.

Hiryo

Have had to add the 3 girls already chosen are totally awesome and yummytastic too!!!

Doraemax

Interesting interesting concept. Though, if you haven't done so, might I suggest you read Ozzalos's Ranma/DC crossover stories/ ideas? At the very least it can help generate ideas. Though I have a mixed feeling with having young Ranma separated from his father and ended up in Themyscira. On one hand, awesome... learning opportunities with the original Amazons! Surely their technique is no less devastating than the chinese Amazons. On the other hand, young Ranma meaning pre-cursed Ranma. Meaning there is a male living in Themyscira before Diana came back with the JL. Meaning when Diana finally returned bringing help from the JL, she shouldn't have gotten so much flack over it, because the law must've changed to let young Ranma there. Anyway, I personally really really prefer post-Saffron Ranma joining the DC adventures, as opposed to young Ranma. Because I bet post-Saffron Ranma will be something new to the heroes/ villains of DC. Especially if he pulled some advance Happosai/ Amazon techniques in their encounters.

Woolleymammoth

I would love to see a HP/DC crossover. I would love to see where your unique story thoughts take it. Is Harry a meta human? Is he a homi magi? Apprentice of Doctor Fate or John Constantine? Would you make him have alien ancestry such as krypton or draxamite? Would you have him trained by the league or would go a different route of magic technology? How would Harry deal with villains? Who would you pair him with? I have always been amazed at your unique crossover blending and hope to see a HP/DC one it the future. As always, thank you very much for sharing your amazing stories with the world.

Readm

isnt that what him learning his faher is a thief early to break the trust he has in genma and than the time he spends with the amazons for i mean after spending time on themescara no way is he gonna call all woman weak

Jacob Pruitt

Sounds really good & I like the pairings.

vimesenthusiast

Since I don’t watch supergirl I had to look supercorp up, which was enlightening lol. It is interesting, but the idea of there being a good Luther is a bit odd to me, not certain if I could use it. Kori was thinking as the one to push the whole ‘love is equal and shareable’ concept. As for the idea of his curse being a blessing, no, or perhaps that could lead into an entirely different concept that could take a few ideas here and run with them. But this Ranma would be a six year old boy when he washes up on the amazon’s islands. And he wouldn’t stay there overlong.

vimesenthusiast

I wouldn’t even try to go into DC until after ATP is done. So in a way you’re right, since that won’t be for another 8 chapters at a minimum.

vimesenthusiast

Ironically, since it was a demand for an hp/dc cross (and my own umbrage at the wording of said) that began this, I agree. DC is far more a fisticuffs kind of world than marvel, and if I can keep the world building to a minimum Ranma fits better in it than Harry and magic.

vimesenthusiast

I’ve talked about this idea before, but having two main leads is insanely hard made worse when they are so different in style and character.

vimesenthusiast

World building would be a bit like Making Waves, yes - based on traveling, but less of the governmental stuff and no Ranger - no authority but still Ranma will have his code and will stick his nose in along with those of his friends. As for when I’d pick it up, only after ATP is finished.

vimesenthusiast

Ranma was lost going from one island of japan to another. Genma went by sea to escape the police chasing him. So he was five years old when he is lost overboard, and will return in half a year or so. The Ranma timeline will be connected and somewhat fleshed out, the dc verses, no. Rather stick my hand in a shredder than even try to match up all the different, oft times warring timelines there.

vimesenthusiast

That’s what I said only with more ****#$&$&#. And I wouldn’t even read them for the smut.

vimesenthusiast

A five year old won’t really be able to bare a grudge for that long but Genma will have to bribe Ranma with more and more training and techniques to get him to go along. although for Jusenkyou, he can also use rumors about Amazons -which Ranma will remember- as a bribe too. As for listening to the guide, yeah, he would but he could still be curse despite that. Hmmm... on the Amazons. Will think about that aspect, but I nearly fell in love with kassie sandsmark because of one comic where she went through a whole battle dressed in jeans and a t-shirt. Any hero willing to do that is just awesome in my book. Yes I meant Harry would replace Billy. Ranma and Robin would indeed clash a lot, but would be able to work together and even get along so long as they don’t try to talk shop. But eventually their interactions would cause a rift in the younger set.

JustDK

All my votes would go for this. Need a good DC story, not enough of them. Here's to hoping this happens sooner rather then later.

vimesenthusiast

As for the curse...who is to say that this Ranma won’t be able to find a cure, or someone who could help him. There are a lot of magic users and items in DC after all. Would be a lot of fun too.

vimesenthusiast

Yes, I went back and made a point to mention I wouldn’t even consider this fic until ATP is done. Possibly even AGGC and Semblance.

vimesenthusiast

I know your pain lol. Most of my responses up to this point we’re done on my phone. I would say Ranma would wash up on the island four or more years before Diana leaves the island

vimesenthusiast

A very young child. I doubt the amazons would kill a five year old boy who wouldn’t be able to understand what he did wrong. Kicking him out once they are sure he can survive it, maybe. Erasing his memory, again maybe. But meeting earlier like that would start the process of changing Ranma.

vimesenthusiast

Unfortunately beyond a teaser chapter I won’t be picking this up until ATP is done. Or possibly AGGC since there seems to be so much interest.

Readm

who says he has to fall into the spring of drowned girl i mean there is a spring of drowned Dragon and Drowned Asura and who knows what else as well

Brody Meech

it sounds really good i'd definitely vote for this one.

Lance Garvey

FUCK YES, never seen this kind of crossover come remotely close to finishing. You get a few good chapters and then it falls apart. Seriously looking forward to this, also have no problem about Timelines, because obviously DC comics doesn't have a timeline and never did.

Tomon

Okay, you had my respect and awe for how much you can "write" each month. But that's nothing compared to what I feel about the fact you're replying there via your phone! (but you are quite probably mad... :-D ) Okay, at first my idea was that Ranma would in fact meet similarly old Diana to his age, and even the Amazon queen would loose to the puppy eyed stare of "Let me finally have a friend of my own!" :-D So he wouldn't fall in the younger Teen Justice (or Teen Titans) age category. I honestly wouldn't mind for once dealing with the original Justice League at their start compared to them already being established :-) Still even my first idea would require you to play with the Diana origin story, since she was by earth years already quite "old" when leaving her island. At least as far as I know the established canon goes.

Gappler

its sounds wildly ambitious in scope and likely length, but i like those sort of things. Though if Ranma were trained on with the amazons would he still really have issues with the curse? he will know women can be just as strong as men, and would likely have had any influence from Genma about that driven out of him. Secondly, if Ranma were trained by them and doesnt mind weapons, i would see him willing to use any "tool" available to fight when needed, thus the shazaam powers would not be something he is adverse to when needed. Maybe to make Ranma a little more hesitant about the use of such a power, and create some more comedy potential with other leading ladies, Ranma gets the powers of shazam while as a girl. that or maybe whatever form ranma is in when he transforms, he becomes empowered as such.

vimesenthusiast

I probably should have been clearer - Ranma won't spend even a year on the island before being forced to leave, and he'll be a barely six year old boy, so Genma will still have a lot of time to put his mark on the boy. That is correct on the Shazam, but he would still prefer to use his own learned skills rather than a instant power up. As for Ranma's curse, uncertain how that is going to play out, since in this fic I would actually like him to find a curse or someone who can give him some control at the very least.

link01742

Love it so far :]

Unknownreader

I like it but I have been getting kinda tired of the multiple romantic interests. So can you keep it as close to one at a time? If not it's ok it'll just be another one like that.

Titan7

I really like the idea. I hope you make this story.

Steven Stirling

Good concept, will need some revision however. Shazam doesn't have an item, just a magic word. Black Adam did in the beginning however and there are more than a few power up items in the DCU. With 3rd Path coming up on 2 million words I admit I'm surprised your Marvel muse hasn't been reduced to ashes by now. A DC story may be what you need for your newer readers to refresh their pallet while trying to get through that monster.

UrpsychoEX

I also find this entertaining. Something along the lines of Make a Wish or Terminal Velocity rather than ATP. As a final note though Vim, anyone that thinks MegaMatt09 has anything useful to teach you or any writer is obviously concussed and needs to see a doctor.