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As mentioned in my announcement posted tonight, this is a rewrite of my DC/Ranma crossover concept. While the basic premise remains the same, I have elaborated further on it and have taken into account a lot of the comments people left about it. Thank you all for showing such interest in an idea I had that honestly started more as a giant finger to an ignorant lout of a guest over on fanfic.  Changes will be in underline form so as to point them out more easily.  Although looking at the amount of changes and additions, that seems kind of superfluous LOL.

First and biggest difference is this: I should have mentioned it right away, but for now this is just a story concept. I will in no way dream of picking this story up until ATP or Semblance and AGGC are done. 

A Journey Gone Astray (obviously name subject to change)

Instead of just letting Ranma and Genma go after the older Saotome stole his yattai, Ukyo’s father both goes after them and informs the police, forcing Genma to run even faster than he would have otherwise and in a different direction, making for the shores of Hokkaido with the police in hot pursuit. During this time, Ranma realizes his father had stolen from his friend and leaves in a huff, only to run right into storm which forces him back to his father just as he is about to put to sea in an attempt to travel to to Honshu (the main island of Japan) from Hokkaido (northernmost large Island) in such a way that the police and Ukyo’s father can’t follow.  

The storm capsizes their boat, and the stormy sea whisks Ranma away from his father. The next thing he knows, he’s waking up on a beach somewhere with a few older women poking him with spears and swords. Ranma has arrived on Themiscryia, and though he is a man-child, the emphasis there is on child. No child so young has ever washed up on their shores before, and the Amazons are very clearly torn. This changes when one of them attempts to hook his shirt and lift him up like a fish on the end of a spear only for him to hop up and nearly take her head off with a kick, then running off, leading them on a chase and climbing like a monkey all over the island.

Eventually corralled, Ranma has made an impression enough to be taken to their queen and princess for judgement. As an innocent The queen deems him no threat, but will have to be returned to the sea as son as it can be contrived without endangering his life – since doing so would be the same as killing him. She calls upon Hera to help them do so, but Hera orders them to wait, she wants to see the future of this boy and his mettle – “After all, to survive in Poseidon’s realm for so long is no mean feat.”

So Ranma spends time on the island, training with the Amazons and getting stronger every day at a rate that astonishes most of the Amazons, having seen the like only rarely. There he gets to know the girls near his own age, including Cassie, and the older teenager Diana, who has just celebrated her 18th birthday.   He and Cassie become best friends, even though she forces him to realize that she’s a girl, something Ukyo never did, which makes things awkward when he gives voice to a Genma word of wisdom… Needless to say after Cassie and Diana both toss him around – he’s faster and more agile, but they are FAR stronger and more skilled at this point – the idea of women being the weaker sex goes out the door.

A little under a year after his arrival however, Hera decides it is time to send the boy home . He does indeed have a future ahead of him he must fulfill. After much argument -after all Ranma doesn’t want to leave the best training he’s ever gotten and his friends, and his friend Cassie doesn’t want him to leave either - Ranma is forced to realize he can’t stay on the island because he’s a guy. That cuts deep, but he is sent on his way in a small, specially made sailboat, and after learning how to use it for a time sets off away from the island, where Poseidon’s waters take him back to Japan. 

This new and somewhat improved Ranma finds his father and makes him a deal. He trains Ranma seriously and no more of this thieving nonsense, and Ranma will go along with his schemes for a while.  But this doesn’t mean that Ranma won’t keep his eyes open...

Fast Forward, a changed Ranma who has taken his training far more seriously even then in canon and has cared even less for conformity sits down with Akane to have a heart to heart. Akane has finally admitted she can’t handle his curse, and that finally frees Ranma from the honor obligation. After that, he has to pay for his father one last time, a bill to be paid to the government of Japan who bought up many of his debts. With that, they can call on Ranma to do five tasks for them, short of murder and kidnapping. Three of them are easy, dealing with Japanese borne supervillains/ The fourth sees him heading into the Amazon rain forest to help a series of archeologists on an expedition. The second takes him to America to protect a business mogul meeting his opposite number in an American city, Gotham city to be precise… 

Things this Fic will contain:

1. Timeskips: Yes, in this fic it would be a necessary evil. Kids can be fun for a bit, but not as main characters and let’s face it, 18 year-olds have more fun LOL. This is not going to be one small training/living montage followed by a large timeskip, no, this will be a series of time-skips to show important moments in the character’s lives. This will include:

a) Ranma’s training under Genma, and Genma realizing he needs to find other masters to help him

b) Ranma and Genma at Jusenkyou, and dealing with the amazons. Ranma: “Damn, that’s disappointing as all heck.Where’s the smashing trees, the fighting Cow guys, the flying?Maaaan, China’s got gipped when it comes to Amazons.”Cologne: “Er… I’m sorry, what?”

c) Ranma showing up at the Tendos, and responding very differently to the whole fiancé thing

d)  Ranma Vs Ryoga _Ryoga will be more like a nuisance than a real rival for a while.

e) A few other Ranma centric moments to emphasize how he reacts differently to things now.

f) Diana’s entrance into Man’s World, Cassie’s attempt to sneak after her only to be stopped, and Cassie pining for her young friend and vice versa

2. Inadvertent Genma bashing: Ranma will actually get along with his father okay so long as Genma no longer tries to make decisions for him. Other people though… well, when you say your childhood memories are shot to hell and you can’t remember the names of some of your little friends on a magical island because of the number of concussions you’ve had from your own father and then mention about how he trained you to a literal inhuman degree, people will start to jump to conclusions. Diana: “Who’s up for a panda rug girls!?”

3. Seriously trained Ranma! Ranma will have trained with a lot of other martial arts masters and though young, will be better than literally any other martial artist in the world in terms of sheer skill and the number of styles he can use. Despite his father dragging him away everytime it lookse like Ranma’s getting too comfortable with any one style (and thus making Genma persona-non grata to many masters) Ranma will have become at sixteen as good as he was when the wedding occurred in the original.  He will have his original skill set and a bit more thanks to reverse engineering some of the techniques he saw on the island

a) Cologne will have trained him seriously, in return for learning about these other Amazons, going so far as to cancel the kiss of marriage at Ranma’s request in return for being taught about them

b) O-sensei (this is a DC character Justlovereadin’ mentioned to me that I had never heard of, although ironically I had heard of his real life counterpart, the man who developed Aikido) will have trained him to an incredible degree and helped him to become a true master of the Neko-ken.

c) Power Fist will have trained his body’s ki and durability – Ryoga eat your heart out.

d) He will know some of Diana’s techniques to deal with archers/gunmen, and has even begun to work on flight, but can’t quite get it.

e) However not all his former trainers will have the best relationship with the Black and Wild Horses that are Genma and Ranma…

f) Ranma will also not be adverse to weapons as I’ve had him be in a few of my stories. 

4. A differently cursed Ranma!!! Ranma will remember the fact that he was thrown out of Themiscriya because he was a guy. Because of this, as his father is taunting him to fight in among the pools of Juesnkryou, he finds the spring of Drowned girl and perches over it, daring Jusenkyou to do its worst, figuring if it happens, then at least he can use his new form to get into the Amazon island again and see his friends again. And no, Ranma will not have made any friends since, and will still be extremely dense when it comes to he differences between guys and girls. If anything, he will assume there are fewer differences since it’s obvious from his memories that girls can be just as strong as guys. 

a) Inside his head though, Ranma still identifies himself as a guy.

b) This means that the downsides of being a girl will hit him even harder and will in fact cause an argument with the Amazons once he meets them again.Amazons don’t get periods while on the island after all...

c) This also means that Ranma will see no real reason not to use his female body to his advantage - distraction, disguise, excuse anything and everything

d) BUT!!! Ranma will not retain his female form throughout the fic.After all, there are a lot of magic users out there which can help him dispel his curse.This will have repercussions, big ones!!! 

5. Shazanma!!! – Ranma will have discovered that his blood is not exactly pure Japanese and will, in fact, have found out he is a descendent of Merlin, whose own back story is not nearly as straightforward as legends tell. Mind you, he won’t actually like to use it all that often, or see the need most of the time. But when he wants it, it will provide a clear power-up that will allow him to hang with the powerhouses of the Dc universe.

a) Forced to think – Ranma is, even as Shazam, not strong enough to just plow through enemies.He will have to eventually think up strategies tactics not just for himself but for those around him.

b) Ranma will be forced to deal with a lot of magical type opponents because of his connections to Merlin via Shazam – this includes Morgan Le Fey, Mordred, and others

6. An ickle bit of mythology, specifically, the Greek and Japanese type. Ranma will go searching for a sword, and will be friends with the Amazons whether they like it or not, and will have severe issues with Ares.  In fact, many of the threats Ranma will have to face will come from different mythologies that are prevalent in the DC universe. He would also spend time, both in his female form and alter as a man once it’s been dispelled on the Amazon Island

7. New Rivals. Does this come as a surprise? Ranma will be, well, Ranma and will rub guys and girls the wrong way at times.

a) Orion – New Gods guy – he’s a bit of an asshole who looks down on anyone weaker than him

b) Robin/Batman – Robin will not get along with Ranma a lot of times, angry that he basically shows him up without even trying and bitter that Ranma steps into the leadership role he thought would be his.Batman in turn will be very worried about Ranma, and concerned about how good a martial artist he is and the magic Ranma seems all too comfortable with.Ranma in turn will think the Batass is a paranoid dick and Robin a little too sure of himself (LOL) 

c) Others will show up occasionally.Including a Ryoga who has been operated on by Cadmus, Power Girl who doesn’t like him one bit because he can beat her in a fist fight, and Superboy…

8. Justice Juniors – both in terms of the original comics version of the Teen Titans and the fact that I would be concentrating on the younger characters from DC. 

a) World travelers. Ranma and Co will be based on a sea-faring ship rather than in a single city. This will let them travel the world and bring them into contact with international rather than simply America based villains.

b) High Tech –Kara – an alien who comes from a high tech society – the group will have access to a lot of technology and a great many devices for training, transportation and simple fun.

c) A slightly different team and organization. Instead of being sponsored mostly by Batman in order to give Robin a chance to lead his fellow heroes, Diana will be the one to help create the team, with Cassie as it’s leader, although eventually Ranma will move into the position of field leader when she proves unable to focus on the whole battlefield at one time. The emphasis will not be on independence but on combat ability 

d) The Team will be Ranma, Kara, Cassie, Kori, Raven, Beastboy, Robin and eventually Barbara Gordon – never understood why she wasn’t invited to join the team, so AUTHOR POWERS ACTIVATE.Others will join for short amounts of time and then leave in various ways, and this original roster will also change too beyond the core four.

e) Best Buds Beast Boy.Ranma and Beast Boy will be good friends perhaps the first actual guy-type friend Ranma has that doesn’t come with a rivalry attached. He and Robin can get along so long as they aren’t in action or training, or talking about training or… well, they can get along about forty percent of the time.

9. Snarky Ranma when it comes to heroes. Ranma will have issues with Heroes ranging from small complaints about all that spandex and just why 

a) A certain level of Batman bashing - “Wait, so he’s killed how many dozens of people, and you think because he’s insane he deserves to just be locked away in an asylum that is more like a turnstile than an actual prison”

b) Ranma will in contrast actually get to know and like Superman, even though he will poke fun at him for a lot – why do you wear your underwear on the outside anyway being one of the first things Ranma says to the man of steel.

c) Ranma and the Justice League will be a mixed bag. More because the Justice League and who I have in it will be a mixed back than anything else.

10. Focus on a few: While I will use numerous enemies and plots I wish to focus on just a few main characters, and FREAKING KEEP IT THAT WAY!!!! 

a) This means I will in no way introduce the whole DC universe, and will be picking and choosing who to introduce, how and for how long.For instance, I will introduce only one Green Lantern, and not the corps, and have decided against taking this story into space.The DC universe is just too big and too disorganized and disjoined and just GRAAH, much like the marvel universe.I’ve gone through that pain once, I do not want to subject myself to it a second time. 

b) Emphasis on comedy rather than world building.While world building will happen despite the above point to a certain degree I mean to keep the emphasis small and on Ranma and those around him.In this manner it will be a comedy and action oriented rather than having the emphasis on world building and fixing things like in ATP.

c) Screwed up timeline: I will mix and match events, when characters were introduced, when, well, anything and everything really in my attempt ot keep the character list small. 

11. Merged worlds: While the superpwered people would know about Nerima and its environs, and vice versa, since none of the JL make their home in Japan, it doesn't really register.  Ryoga and Happy are known though, and Ranma made an impression on more than a few when he fought Saffron.

a) Cologne – thanks to her part in training Ranma, she and the lesser amazons of China will get some training in return from Ranma, but not much.They will in turn not become main characters in Nerima but may interact with Ranma afterward in the larger DC universe

b) Monsters such as the monster park and Yamato No Orochi are not known. 

c) Juesnkyou is a much bigger deal than in the world of Ranma. 

d) Many of the magical items Ranma will have dealt with will have made their way around the world, and also a few from the DC universe will make their way to Nerima too.

12. Major Enemies and Minor toolbags. Ranma and company will deal with both minor villains and major ones, including one of his own making almost. 

a) Darkseid.  Due to wanting the last female pureblood Kryptonian under his control Darkseid is going to be sending troops, pawns and disturbed individuals to Earth rather like clockwork for Ranma and co. to deal with.

b) Ares.Thanks to his connection to the Amazons and his being a man for at least half the time, Ares will have a particular hatred towards Ranma, and Ranma sure as hell won’t get along with him either.

c) Raz Al Gul – Ranma will have received training while younger from him, and his father will have grabbed him before too long, but only after Ranma has absorbed everything the League could teach him.This, needless to say, infuriates Raz, although not nearly as muc has the fact that Ranma did in fact surpass all his teachings in such a short amount of time.

d) Cadmus – Ranma’s disdain and disregard for government, laws, and the rules of physics as well as his sheer openness about his abilities will infuriate the government and Cadmus will try to capture him or corral/control him in various ways with various pawns.

e) Villains minor – along with the aforementioned magical threats, Ranma will deal with many of the enemies that Aquaman or the Flash would and a few of the international Villians that Batman has dealt with like Deathstroke and others.

f) Evil and sentient Jusenkyou – the cursed springs are the playfield of a Chaos demon who loves watching the chaos the curses cause in the lives of those who are foolish enough to go there .Furious at the idea that Ranma not only deliberately became cursed but with the right curse and then was able to find someone who could dissipate it, the Demon will act to punish Ranma and all those around him. This will come in the form of sentient beasts from the various springs, and attempts to get him cursed again in various ways.Since he would just go and get them dispelled at need, this will be something of a continual event… 

13. Population control:  Ranma, and eventually those with him, will realize that killing their opponents should be on the table if in the defense of other's lives.  This will mean the various villains out there will be culled. (Yes, Friendly Neighborhood Eldritch Horror I am keeping this idea despite your cogent, seemingly well thought out argument to the contrary. In my own readings of the comics years ago I did not see any evidence to believe that the fear of a villain coming back to life more powerful is enough to stop from putting him ten feet under in the first place. If you can find a comic that states that’s why the Batman doesn’t kill the Joker or Scarecrow or Bane then I will revisit the idea, but not before that)

14. Pairings: Ranma/Kara (Supergirl)/Cassie Sandsmark (Wonder Girl) /Koriandr(Starfire)

a) Kara and Ranma will meet up soon after his adventure in Gotham as Ranma is traveling through Kansas just in an effort to see the world. The two of them will hit it off due to the weird circumstances they meet for – “Are you telling me you sneezed and nearly beaned me with that tractor!?”  

i.  Kara’s time frame will be she has just moved in with the Kents after her arrival and awakening on Earth.Before this she will have spent time with her cousin and with the Amazons.She will be best friends already with Cassie and will be delighted to make another friend, especially one like Ranma who encourages her to get out, live and think for herself.

ii. While the female curse is around, Kara will be at first shocked, then a bit intrigued by it, never having heard of such magic before, and honestly feeling a little more comfortable around Ranma because of it – after all, he would be the first boy her own age that she will have ever spent time around.

iii. He and Kara will bond over movies, wanting to see more of the world, and astonishingly enough about technology – not that Ranma will understand it, but he will encourage her to keep her Kryptonian heritage and not make a secret about it – to try to use her advanced knowledge more freely to help people not just her super powers.He will see that as part of her and she shouldn’t try to deny it

b) Cassie and Ranma will meet soon after he and Kara do.She will be apprenticing under Wonder Woman in (whatever the city she was situated in). They will get along with Cassie determined to make Ranma her friend again and vice versa. 

i. However, Cassie and Kara will have already become deep friends.Indeed, their affection towards one another is such that Ranma honestly thinks the two of them are a couple, and the two of them will eventually come to realize their affection for one another is a bit deeper than they think with his help.

ii. Like Kara, Cassie will have no issue with Ranma’s female form, although she will take umbrage with why he willingly went to Jusenkyou and got this specific Curse.Cassie: “GAHHH!!! You, you messed with random ass chaos magic and even allowed yourself to be cursed all because, because you wanted to come back to Themiscriya? Are you crazy!?Ranma: “Well, I really wanted to see you again, and I figured it would get me around that no man allowed thing.”Cassie: *Blush* “You, you did that just to meet me?”

iii. Like Kara, Kori and Ranma, Cassie will have a severe case of the wanderlust, and will bond with Ranma over that and over a mutual love of sailing.

iv. Later on, they will both realize that they also love Ranma, regardless of his form

c) Because Tomon mentioned her age and a few people mentioned that Amazons would be unwilling to share with another Amazon once they chose a lover, I have removed the idea of Ranma and Diana getting together. I also feel three is the max in this world and that is pushing it.Diana, who I will pair with Clark (let’s face it, Lois is a blah character in many ways at least in the original comics) will instead slip into an elder sister, trainer role with Ranma as she has for Cassie.

d) Kori and Ranma – this just makes a lot of sense because of the sheer amount of fun they would have palling around, seeing the sights and getting into fights. They are both also just fun loving characters who prefer not to take life too seriously and wear their emotions on their sleeves.Ranma would enjoy teaching Kori about the world, and Kori would love being around someone who’s emotions are so easily discernable

i. The two of them would meet during Kori’s initial landing on Earth, Ranma, Diana, Superman, Kara and Cassie would help Kori fight off her pursuers and then help destroy their ship.

ii. Kori would be the first girl to leap from affection and friendship towards Ranma to wanting to be with him in a relationship.I would want this relationship to be sweet, lots of cuddling, lots of fun dates and teenagish things along with the more Ranma style dates

iii. She would also be the one to jumpstart the physical side of things, giving Ranma an outlet for his heretofore repressed and ignored hormones… They would get it on like bunnies for a while in other words.

iv. Eventually it would be Kori, thanks to her latent empathy, that would become aware of the emotions of Cassie and Kara, and then the two girls feelings towards Ranma and vice versa.She would be the catalyst for the two couples to become a single unit.

I hope you all liked this new and improved version gents and that the color came through! 

Comments

Henry Sangmaster

random thought what if at a random time during the story the chaos demons of the springs is able to bind ranma in female form till he can get the curse dispelled say a few weeks due to bad luck

Bryan Hayden

Definitely an improvement, can't wait for this to develop further. One thing I'd recommend/like to see is some interaction between Ranma and Lady Shiva at some point, since according to the Wiki, she's considered to be the world's greatest martial artist. Especially because of this quote by Barbara Gordan "Her hobby is hunting down the best fighters in the world and beating them to death with her bare hands", It would be amusing to see her as both an antagonist/rival but as well as a spiritual replacement for Shampoo, with Lady Shiva eventually desiring Ranma's offspring (Could also bring in Shiva's Girl, Cassandra Cain as a plot Idea). I'd also say its fairly likely that one of Ra's girls will also likely be either ordered/intrigued by the idea of having Ranma's kids, like with Bruce and Talia having Damian.

Treebeard Joshua

I loved nearly everything with the exception that there is no Cyborg as a Titan

Van Eska

Love the idea of this story, but am disappointed in the fact you removed wonder woman from the pairing, since amazons come from a different time period than most of the modern heroes i argue that it actually makes more sense for wonder woman to be willing to share a relationship with Ranma compared to Kara who comes from an advanced scientific culture who prioritises reason over passion I would find Diana to be more open to a polygamous relationship, and isn't it also true that the creator of wonder woman himself was also in a polygamous relationship with 2 women so it makes sense that Diana who has many aspects that pander to William Marstons Bondage fetish would be a better choice of pairing in a harem than almost any other heroine i could think of in the DC Verse.

Mark Runk

I like the concept. I would really like to read this story. I’m so sorry that I have to wait for your others to be completed before hand. Though I understand why.

Jim Murphy

I really like the concept. Why not have Cadmus try and catch ryoga and fail 50% of time and while they capture him they lose him Motrin while moving him into a box from the container to it's up to the detention level.

Dark

Its good concept, but i think ranma without half (his female conterpart) s not a ranma only genious martial fighter like some others.

Blitz

Wow polishing and changes came about quickly. Looks cool and I guess a few more changes might come about before you put it out on the vote poll.

Gavin Medbery

An important argument for why the League does not Kill, is that they are not Judges, Juries, nor Executioners. What happens to villians after the heroes stop them is not the heroes' call to make. It is society's as a whole to decide, and society has chosen for villains to have a revolving door system.

Razgriz0x

Ergo, since Society has decided to give up its responsibility to properly punish the guilty, Ranma sees no reason not to do the job the right way, ie. put the bad guys that deserve it 6ft under.

Razgriz0x

As I said before would love to read this. Though I do believe it would definitely be better if you finished Semblance and AGGC first. ATP doesn't seem to have an end in sight quite yet, that monster has taken a life if its own.

Kariston Draconis

Damn, this just makes me want it even more, though I do understand wanting to clear your plate a bit before attempting something like this.

Tomon

How are you handling the Power Girl & Supergirl shenanigans? Are we getting both? You mentioned Power Girl don't like him because he can beat her in fist fight but also Supergirl being involved as one of the main character? So both of them being here with Kara Zor-L being a rival and Kara Zor-El being friend (and more)? I fully admit that the madness of new DC 52 and the whole Crisis on Infinite Earths are little beyond me. Having them both could be really fun. But then Darkseid would have two female pureblood Kryptonian to choose from. Still going to save Power Girl would be also pretty funny :-D "Aargh, why it have to be you who saved me!?!" :-D If that's the case you need to fix Darkseid description regarding the 'last kryptonion female' and it also kinda takes them to space :-P Honestly everything about this seems totally awesome. I especially really like the Evil and sentient Jusenkyou going after Ranma for hurting his evil feelings/schemes :-D And also the idea of Kara and Cassie pairing (or in process of becoming one) wanting and successfully including Ranma and Starfire. Even now it seems believable to me which is a big plus. There is a lot others things worth mentioning and the whole story intrigues me greatly. To say the truth... I would be glad if you started with this story before even finishing the others. And it's me saying that. That one anoying guy trying to stop new stories from starting so we can get updates to the already existing ones :-D

Tomon

Sounds really good to me! :-)

Tomon

I guess he will just be a part of Justice League instead of the younger team 'baby sitter' :-D

Tomon

Kinda agree but I think the issue is with the fact that she would be included in the younger crowd so to speak... Ranma would either have to be part of Justice League and on par with the original team or at least of similar age and starting to be active around the same time. Since this story includes and maybe even focuses on the younger generation it doesn'T work so well for Diana

Tomon

Well, he would still have it and it would influence his life a lot. Just in this story it could actually be cured which is something new :-) Add the fact that he can be cursed AGAIN and probably will be and it's whole new funny aspect. "Again?!? Ah, at least the female variant only, guess no need to make haste on the dispelling this time" :-D

Wrandral

An interesting concept to be sure, though i'd like more focus on the existing stories that have fallen to the wayside.

Dark

Then it will be more interesting!

MacArther

Sounds interesting!

Tellemicus Sundance

Sounds interesting, but I think you need to expand the cast of Ranma's team a little. Get some more dudes in there for a little more equality among sexes, and more guys who think they're macho enough to usurp Ranma as leader (like Robin).

Van Eska

But doesn't every Japanese harem include at least one "big sister" figure, and considering Ranma was one of the original harem stories, I think it makes sense to at least include Diana in the harem, and just because the focus is on the younger generation doesn't mean the harem has to include only young girls considering every team needs its den mother and i find the concept of the may-september romance kind of nice but in the end its all up to Vimes to decide what he wants to write, and I'm just offering my opinion.

Nobody

Nice expansion on the original idea. Would be quite happy to read this when the time comes.

Mike

I honestly wasn't sure I'd ever see this again, but I would be really excited to see how you flesh this out. Your work has, after all, consistently been above and beyond. DC always seems like a world that could use some outside perspective on its problems, that's why I think a lot of people enjoy doing crossovers with it. Ranma, as a character, is uniquely suited to this world. He is capable of becoming strong enough to be effective against more than just the humanly possible characters. His skillset, as outlined by you, is diverse enough to allow him to confront many problems and even large armed groups. That said, he isn't so OP (although this is DC we're are talking about here) that it feels like he could steam roll most of his problems. He is also grounded enough to be capable of making the hard choices that would be necessary to fix DC. Even so, he isn't cruel about it and knows where to draw the line. I have just one request if this story ever comes into existence. DC has several unrepentantly amoral/immoral villains... and Jusenkyo has a Spring of Drowned Pious Man. This bears thinking about, yes? As I've seen in several of your stories, the punishment should fit the crime. Given the number of mind control scenarios they've used, this seems appropriate Some villains you could play it straight - Lex Luthor, Ras, etc. Others you could play for laughs. I'm having a hard time deciding which would be funnier, Ranma repeatedly trying to hit the Joker with said Spring and failing because he pissed off the demon in charge, or the Joker freaking out over being thus cursed. Harley and Batman's reactions would be particularly good, and Robin might bond a little bit over this with Ranma and thus begin to grow as a person by being forced to admit to himself that he was wrong, similar to what you did for Cyclops in ATP. Okay, so I'm liking the idea of Pious Man Joker more than I thought I would. XD Anyway, can't wait!

vimesenthusiast

Okay I really like this idea. But any kids would be weeeell it to the future. On the other hand having the trio of girls he likes reacting to this would be comic gold

vimesenthusiast

Exactly yes. Diana will be the one controlling them as their go between and will demand the watch over themselves.

vimesenthusiast

I do intend to concentrate on the younger set, as for Diana no. To her I think Harry will always be the sweet monkey boy who loved to climb fight and eat messily in that order. It’s awful hard to see someone like her interested in a boy she first met as a six year old. Further I like the idea of her and Clark getting together.

vimesenthusiast

Exactly. Yes. The curse will be part of him for awhile and getting rid of. It will be a wrench then he will be cursed after that with new curses occasionally much to his chagrin.

vimesenthusiast

Eight or nine more chapters. I am not going to have Harry solve everything or create a perfect utopia where all the villains have died or whatever.

Readm

So first of all do you really need to go with an 18 year old Diana. especially if she’s not gonna be a love interest. I really think that that affects her interaction with other characters. In most instances she’s 200 years old. Really the only thing I’ve ever seen where she was only 18 was the new Wonder Woman movie. So with the promise that Genma makes to train Ranma more seriously does that mean that ranma is gonna know the sealed techniques from a young age. Where did rahnema see a minute or they don’t roam around there is the Themascrya. Also you are aware that not all amazon’s can fly right. That’s not one of their magical abilities that’s actually caused by the equipment that Diana and Cassie wear, It allows them to fly. Interesting fact after the Trojan War some of the surviving amazons that fought in it did indeed flee into China so use that how you may if you didn’t know that. I consider myself to be a pretty big DC buff and I have no idea who Power Fist is can you explain that. Diana doesn’t really have a technique to deal with a gunman or archers she can literally see the bullets. So she throws up her magical impervious wrist guards in the way to block them. Also what age is ranma gonna be when arriving at that Tendo’s in your story and when is he leaving couse I think he’s 15 or 16 When the Manga starts and I believe it takes place over 2 years. Maybe 3. The reason I’m asking is he really gonna spend that much time with the Tendo’s even with the changes to personality and everything. If you've ever thought of me as a friend Do not call him Shazam. Shazam is the Wizards name he is Captain Marvel. And no there is no medallion or anything like that It’s literally just an inheritance that was passed on by the wizard Shazam Like moving his magic into somebody else’s body there’s no physical item to accompany it. 2 questions one are you nerfing Captain Marvel Because he can do get out with Superman on equal grounds plus he has magic Powerful powerful magic. 2 if you’re not nerfing him what kind of enemies is he facing 3 Is Ranma still able to adequately use his martial arts training one when he turns into Captain Marvel. Because Martial arts is all about body control. Is that him being able to beat up super boy and power girl without powers or in Captain Marvel mode. The reason why Barbara Gordon was never invited to join the Titans was because Robin had a crush on her and she was dating Batman. And then Batman dumps her. And then Robin went out with her and then Robin cheated on her with Starfire And then the Joker shot her which damaged her spine and then she became Oracle which is her Basically being a Superhero traffic control monitor. Also the reason Batman doesn’t kill is because he doesn’t believe that he has the right to make that decision and it’s just some moral choice that he will never step over Nothing about being afraid of people coming back to life or anything like that. He’s aware of how horrible People like the joker are and about the fact that those lot the lives they take rest partially on him But he feels like if he ever does make the decision to Kill on his own with That'll be the first step of him becoming something like the justice Lord A monster who will to go to any links To enforce his vision of peace on the world. Never actually a lot of arguments even within the Justice League about killing certain villain Especially from off world members And John Stewart As well. really the big 3 that are against killing in the Justice League are Superman flash and Batman in with Martian manhunter really not making a vote And Diana just siding with Superman as she’s new to man’s world You understand why the rule got passed. Also wonder woman’s area of activity is DC she is Themyscira’s official ambassador to America she has an office and everything. You mention at one point a plan to have rahnema get himself a sword I think he should get it from the orochi in the monster park In the original legend susano got the Totsuka-no-Tsurugi from the slain body of orochi why not have run the imitate that the feat. I know this is gonna sound weird but when would Rama have encountered RAS Al Gul he doesn’t actually operate much in Asia Too many powerful clans already in the area He mostly operates out of the Middle East and South America I like the idea of an evil in and sentient jusenkyou but I feel like if they were as powerful as you’re talking about doctor fate and some of the other gods of order would have already gotten involved by this point I mean if the curse is localized I can see them overlooking it But Gods of order flip shit in DC whenever chaos does stuff like this. On that note it should be doctor fate to break his curse He works for the league he is readily available Eddie would be happy to do something to correct chaos. About your pairing I love the characters I love Cassie I love Kara I love Starfire I could totally see Starfire and Kara ending up sharing ranma I still cannot see an Amazon doing it I don’t know how your gonna write it but it’s gotta be amazing to sell that. Also you’ve mentioned a lot how run the has had a lot more masters and he’s much much stronger than he was at the same age In Canon. Cassandra Cain The most Talented martial artist in DC Current timeline At the age of 14 she could beat Batman and at the age of 16 was ranked in the top 3 most powerful martial artists on the planet without ki how does ranma stack up to that.

Hiryo

well into the future would be OK. Now, for Ranma it would be the hardest to call only one 'Cassy'! XD

Hiryo

Finally, having really time to sit over this idea and go over it bit by bit. For finding Genma again, best would be that they had agreed to a ‘fallback location/village/etc…’ and they would meet there. Alternately, Ranma goes back to Nodoka, this largely depends on you if you want Nodoka having a bit part of the new Ranma and still be in contact with him. It really will be interesting, what else the Japanese government will hold over Ranma’s head for him to do in the future. And is that Lara as an archeologist? The ‘quipped Chinese Amazons’ is so fun to read!!! Hmm prologue, time skips with most important changes and showing of key moments, which defines this Ranma before they go, really let one get into this story fast! Damn Cassie description is already is diabetic inducing cute!!! Now adding those waffy/lime/lemon scenes with Kori will be awesome and quite a different attitude compared to your other stories. I’m loving this! I’m on two sides about the Neko-ken. Yeah there is the Anime/Manga going again which interferes with that. Ukyo, he met with 6 years. In the Manga with 10 years he learned the Neko-ken, in Anime at 6 years. However, the Neko-ken for both happened after Ukyo. Usually we go by the manga for references, since those are better. Now why I’m two-sided, it’s because the Neko-ken happened after Ukyo and explains why Ranma didn’t have much memory of his childhood. Most often we take the ages of the anime for Cologne and Happy 300+ years, whereby in the manga it’s 100+ years. Same for the Neko-ken happens we usually use the 6 year old one. (6year old fits better with the 10 year trip with Genma and Ranma. Directly after trapping Happi in the cave and fearing he might get out and fresh in mind about the Neko-ken, instead of usually forgotten after long years [out of sight = out of mind]. On top of that is the most used one of yours.) Ehem, long prelude to explain all that, the Neko-ken after all that could only happen before the Themiscryia Amazons, else I believe Ranma would be too strong and leave Genma behind. That would affect quite a bit of your story. The only other way would be due seriously training (and reading the page) that Ranma still went through the hell, by his decision?! Gah, now don’t know which of the 3 choices would be better. XD Heheh Power Girl as Rival, his girls will be happy and a short time confused is he not into ‘Big Tits’? XD In that matter, you write next to all from Ranma’s view? I’d really be interested to have a story from you entirely from Ranma’s view or alternately whichever scene Ranma is in. Of course, some enemies foreshadowing cannot be left out. ;) Jusenkyo in DC/Marvel universe really are given credit. ^^ Along with the sentient meme in Ranma fanfiction. ^^ Jusenkyo, for punishing Ranma and those around him, I like that if Jusenkyo would use the ‘Jusenkyo Guides’ similar to the episode where the Jusenkyo Guide Kinnii ‘punishes those cursed for misusing their curses’. https://ranma.fandom.com/wiki/Kinnii Would be interesting to combine that in your story and expand upon this. I.e. Jusenkyo is the founder of the Guides, funny that. Well some say that Jusenkyo guide is cursed to become a guide. Yeah about Joker, though I would like you to do a homage to Joker with the most famous quotes ‘Are you serious’ and the hiding the pen trick. XD I always wondered if later on Supergirl renames herself to Superwoman, even if it’s longer or a different name? Same with Wondergirl? You could blame Ranma’s influence on that. XD (Though in a way some fans will be quite load, if you use different signature names compared to canon. I for one would like to know which kind of Supergirl picture you take for your story: 1) https://qph.fs.quoracdn.net/main-qimg-c07d984ded3ff4818488e97b7cb843cb-c 2) https://img.cinemablend.com/filter:scale/cb/f/b/2/2/c/3/fb22c39a6084d9624bdfc446fcc4388e9524c1a7889a73facd8641adad4f3f93.jpg?mw=600 3) https://ultimatecomics.com/wp-content/uploads/2015/12/12-28-2015-10.jpg 4) Or a different version of Supergirl? Wondergirl: Which version of this site: https://comicvine.gamespot.com/wonder-girl/4005-10885/ Or a different version? Even more interesting, which version of Starfire are you aiming for? 1-4) https://i.ytimg.com/vi/1ev67bxitV0/maxresdefault.jpg 5) https://www.syfy.com/sites/syfy/files/styles/1200x680/public/2018/09/starfire.jpg 6) https://fsmedia.imgix.net/78/81/25/75/66c9/4b62/af2d/a8609b62e0a4/starfiredpng.png?rect=4%2C0%2C3952%2C1976&auto=format%2Ccompress&dpr=2&w=650 7) https://i.ytimg.com/vi/P45y0YUQjak/maxresdefault.jpg 8) Or a different version of Starfire? I would like to see your choice you aim for of all the pics for all of Ranma’s harem girls. As well that Kara uses the techs for herself as well as advantage. Ranma: Batman’s is at least good in that regard. xD Please make Kara and Starfire not that far apart in meeting, and thus have the Saeko effect as you have in GDWHOM! with the harem!

Bryan Hayden

Yeah I figured the kids would be well into the future, which I totally agree with. Another interaction that I recommend is between Ranma and Cheetah both before and after he's recovered the Neko-ken. His connection with Diana and the Amazon's would be a point of contention with Cheetah. If you're going with the same sort of concept as his mastery of Neko-ken from Horse of the Dead, his reactions to her both before and after could be even more hilarious. Further, since you're seeming to place such emphasis on the amazons, It would be amusing to see Circe's reaction to the Jusenkyo curses, as well as a potential interaction between Ryouga and her if he has his canon curse. Could lead to some interesting team ups between them as they're both antagonistic to the Amazons by that point as well as Ranma.

Treant Balewood

Still... actually, even more interested in this one. Please and thank you!

Aaron Hardin

I never knew I needed this. I wish there were other authors willing to tackle Ranma/Kori as a pairing, it just makes too much sense given their personalities, plus Kori would likely not be offended from Ranma’s foot in mouth disease.

vimesenthusiast

... Did you just quote Kim Possible or was that just for emphasis?

vimesenthusiast

I so wasn’t going to try to answer your post on my phone LOL. So here we go: Yes, I think I would make Diana’s age older, thinking about it – have Ranma think she’s just an older teenager but have her, like most of the other Amazons above a certain age, being much older than that – for the younger set, well, time moves differently in Themisryia Yes to the sealed techniques, although I would have Genma teach him them after Genma drags him away from O-Sensei as what amounts to a bribe And I see you too used a phone to post this – kudos on how long it is and with so few mistakes caused by auto correct LOL. – As for the Minotaur, there actually is an area of the islands dominated by monsters left over from the last time Ares tried to conquer it – or I think there were in some of the very oldest Wonder Woman comics. They were shown in flashbacks I think. Training against them would be seen as a kind of right of passage I am aware of that yes. But Ranma would not be. Heh. – this would of course lead to comedy moments as Diana attempts to let him down on that lightly, and him being furious about all the time he tried to figure it out. Yes, there would be a sort of reconciliation between the Amazons – both have a lot to teach one another after all – one has kept the ancient ways, the strength, speed and faith based powers, the others have used ki and training to overcome the weaknesses of the body. …Power fist was a mistake – he’s a marvel character. My bad. I will replace him with someone else. The comment on Diana is odd, since I’ve seen her take more damage than a bullet could deal out – punches from Doomsday for one. But yeah, the seeing the bullets thing is cool too and could be really useful for Ranma before he learns how to harden his body enough to just take the shots. NO. Cannot say this strongly enough. He would not stay with the Tendos for more than a year. He would not be willing to put up with Akane’s tsundere tendencies or Nabiki’s would-be yakuza crap. Heck, even Genma would have issues with the family as it is – though he would look at it like he does in AAGGC – from the perspective of his old friend getting soft, and the fear that this means that he doesn’t have anything more to teach the boy. Ironically this would force him to search for Happosai LOL. And no, I wasn’t thinking of calling Ranma’s magically shifted form Shazam – just more remember the name of the wizard than Captain Marvel. And let’s face it, Captain Marvel calls on the Marvel universe to me. Hmmm… will have to check the origins more. I thought it was indeed a medallion. Or is the medallion something that jumpstarts the inheritance genes? – like the medallion starts the process, after that it’s all internal. As for Ranma’s hero name ,he’s not going to have one. “I’m Ranma, take it or leave it.” I mentioned the kind of enemies Ranma will be facing. No I am not going to nerf CM, but nor will Ranma whip it out every time he’s faced with an enemy. He will need to train in that form to get used to the changes with it, and will not be able to get that training until he hooks up with the Amazons and the others – after all, there’s only so much just katas and personal training can give you without a sparring partner. Ranma will be able to beat Power Girl and Superboy the first time around as himself. Suberboy will get a power up that forces Ranma to call on his own powerup. … So Bruce dated a girl half his age and practically a minor? Hmm… that’s all kinds of wrong. (and no, Harry/Rias or Harry/Jean are not the same, Harry in one is 25 to Rias’s 18, and in the other, Harry is 22 to Jean’s 19.) I might have Ranma pointing this out to all and sundry frankly. I reeaaalllly don’t like the Batman – his moral stance is utterly repugnant to me. Any policeman or solider has the right to kill in the defense of others, and there are just some scum who need killing – in fact, why didn’t John Stewart push harder for it, he was a soldier right? You need to be willing to take a life occasionally to save others – not saying it should be easy or should be used all the time as an option, but it needs to be an option. To say no I’m not going down that rode whatever happens is to become an enabler. And no, the whole Barbara being shot thing, not going to happen. It would be awfully hard for it to happen after all since by that point Joker will be very dead – as in Ranma ripping out his throat and spine. Noted on Diana in DC. Yes, Susano is one sword, though I was thinking of having Ranma go on a quest for it. Huh, I though Ras was actually based in India. India’s got a lot of martial arts. If he’s based in South America… well there’s Capoeira Interesting on Doctor Fate, but I thought Fate was really old by the time the Teen Titans was around? I don’t mean for the finding of a cure to be that easy LOL. And I did say I would be making a lot of changes and not including the whole of DC. I literally cannot go through with another story like ATP. It takes far too much time, too much effort and research and planning and just mental fortitude. … As for Jusenkyou – he is a sort of coach potato demon – watching the lives of all of those cursed. He only really becomes sentient, -willing to act and think – when someone breaks one of his curses. Even then it would take far more to rouse him – such as soemoen trying to use one of his curses for good and succeeding, or deliberately using the cursed pools to punish evil. Cassie will be the slowest to realize she has feelings towards both Kara and Ranma, and will be the one to object to sharing all of them. As for Ranma’s skill – he will be around Cassandra’s level. Without ki. With ki, he could outlast her although not beat her in basic learning ability. Although again I don’t know if I will bring her into the fic again I want to keep the main characters small in number and then send them on adventures.

vimesenthusiast

For finding Genma again, best would be that they had agreed to a ‘fallback location/village/etc…’ and they would meet there. Alternately, Ranma goes back to Nodoka, this largely depends on you if you want Nodoka having a bit part of the new Ranma and still be in contact with him. Okay, yeah, a meeting point would be a good idea. Nodoka… I have no idea. I don’t think I want her in Ranma’s life for a while. Maybe she’ll hear his name on the TV after one of his adventures and then try to come after him. I’m not going to tell ya what else, but the adventures he does for the Japanese Government will be a warm-up for future DC stuff. Lara maybe, or perhaps someone more minor, we’ll see. Yes. I would get the background done in a single chapter - a large one obviously but still one chapter. So I could then head into a few Ranma centric adventures and then have him be in Gotham near the end of chapter two. Yeah, I don’t think Ranma’s done normal teenage dating scene in any of my works. It’s mostly been comparable to college dating scenes most of the time LOL. Ah, so the Amazons wouldn’t’ know about the Neko-ken. But using trying to find a cure for the Neko-ken to introduce O-sensei make sense which is what I mentioned. Oh, he’ll like them large – Cassie is kind of big, as is Starfire, if not to Lara’s level, but not when put on a bitch who wants to snap his spine for being better than her. Yes, the first three chapters would be focused on Ranma. After the third chapter, the characters around him would have their own POV. But the story would still be centered around Ranma and his friends. Only a few of the big bad will be shown as enemy foreshadowing. Huh… Sentient evil Jusenkyou’s been done before? I mean a demon Jusenkyou willing to act on its own rather than through pawns? - Yes, I remember that episode. Meh. Not my favorite. Ranma will make fun of a lot of names, and yes, Supergirl and Wonder Girl will take a lot of flack until they change their names. Kori would be introduced about a week after Ranma meets with Kara and during his reunion with the Amazons – Diana and Cassie I mean. That way they will all be basically getting the same amount of time with teenage Ranma, with Cassie having the childhood friend angle, Kara the first girl he flirted with (inadvertently) angle, and Kori the girl he clicks with most right off the bat. Cassie – personal profile image is the one I fell in love with. The first image for Kara, and third for Kori.

Hiryo

I think it would be best (since Nodoka met Ranma during the 1 year stay), that Nodoka hears from him that he want to go onto a journey to find Cassy from the Amazons again and thus Nodoka has the impression that he wants to date the whole Amazons, later on staying in contact with her is OK, but not staying with her over, there with the government pressure, Genma and now on top baby hungry Nodoka would be a hindrance for your story. What I can imagine though, is that Ranma later meets Nodoka here and there with his harem, to introduce them to her as well showing her that he accomplished finding and ‘catching’ Cassy. Lol episode about Nodoka wanting to teach the girls to be more Yamato Nadeshiko (ideal houswoman => More Kasumish). Yeah I think, Ranma is the cook in the household. XD Cologne DID identify the Neko-ken, both in manga and anime, when she fought against Ranma. The DC Amazons, not knowing and introducing O-sensei is good from my side, since the Amazons in their long years in China could have learned the Martial Arts all around China locally to compensate for the loss of artifacts and training grounds, etc... I know, and Ranma likes them large too in your stories, and would be my preference too. What I wanted to imply by that is that their breast are not as large as Power Girl’s and thus came the very Ranmaish misunderstanding moment, that since he didn’t react to the larger breast of Power Girl’s that his girls misunderstood of him liking them ‘small’(er) or even smaller than theirs until that is cleared up. XD Sentient Evil Jusenkyo - well kind of, but not as you say ‘directly’ coming to NWC, there were a few, where Jusenkyo took over a body of someone, but that would be it, what I can remember of reading non Ranma and Akane pairing fanfics. Jusenkyo Demon existing and going around would be unique. Thanks for giving me the images of the girls, I think some readers would like that as well when each girl become Ranma’s actual girlfriend.

Brody Meech

this sounds even more interesting than the first one cant wait

Readm

So what i i said about Diana not having a trachnique to deal.with arrows and bullets disnt mean she isnt tough couse shes super tough but she didnt train in a toughnes teachnique her toughness is from enchantment all amazons recieve pluss the blessing from the greek gods she received plus her magic armor. As for Dr fate being old thats just in the young justice cartoon not in the comics. And as far as the medallion thing i have no idea i dont remember there ever being a medallion. Also i didnt want to inclise cassandra i was just curious how ranma compared

Friendly Neighborhood Eldritch Horror

JLA: Classified #3, by Grant Morrison and Ed McGuinness is where the topic of killing villains comes up in the comics at least one of the times it does. Superman says at one point towards the end "Don't you realize that death is NO OBJECT to most of the enemies we deal with? Quite frankly, as an alternative to some of the super-punishments we've had to devise over the years --- execution's a walk in the park. These 'no-nonsense' solutions of your just don't hold water in a complex world of jet-powered apes and time travel." Outside of comics, there is also the ending scene of Superman vs. the Elite, where he pretends to have killed publicly in response to the Elite doing so and shifting public opinion about it and shows people that it freaks them out when Super Heroes kill (at least if done in a dramatic fashion), and then reveals it was all a trick to make a point against the Elite. Although admittedly, both of those cases have some serious caveats and situational aspects. Part of the ideals against killing also don't work for how you are planning to portray Ranma, even if I can't think of a specific example where it is brought up, since it involves super-heroes not stepping into and replacing the role of the justice system, because they don't think the system is broken, just that it needs help, but you want to portray Ranma as more of a type who doesn't care for government or have any faith in them. In DC, lack of faith in a democratic government might even be the rational choice, due to the existence of wide-scale nigh-undetectable mind-influencing effects going around that can warp elections and weaker willed elected officials, to the point you perhaps need for those without certain levels and types of mental defenses to not be participating in government if you don't want to end up with things screwed up, ESPECIALLY if the big bad is Darkseid. Not to mention the stuff the UK government gets up to in Constantine's story-lines...

Tom smith

Love the idea. Can’t wait. Why not have Circe change the curse to be a shape shifting ability swapping between the two when ever he wants so he will never get uncuraed. Either from helping her out or her getting one over on Diana.

Titan7

Love the rewritten Ranma and DC concept story. I really hope you write this story.

LeRoy C Smith

Love the Idea and it makes sense Harry has Marvel Why not let Ranma deal with the DC. PS no matter the contiuity the Jokers body count is in the thousands.

Steven Stirling

Better. I'm still against the giving Ranma the same powers/replacing Shazam idea for reasons I stated before, with Billy being chosen by the wizard and not using an item. This isn't to say that you can't easily create something similar. After all the Egyptian and Greek/Roman gods are getting interest due to Shazam and Black Adam, and it wouldn't be too much of a stretch for other gods to want in on the deal. So why not choose that amusing human that smacked down the firebird in China? Also it seems like it's been a while since you've read DC. I only really stopped a few years ago, but I remember a lot when I was doing research for my old BtVS/DC cross. If you want to work out ideas for the merged world, I would be happy to volunteer.

Hiryo

With Batmans' 'code' of not killing the enemies, you could add that he does not want to be held accountable by the law (fear?) for killing and thus landing in prison because of that?! XD Just joking but is doable. XD

Hiryo

IMHO, there are next to no one, which does this for the good guys (time travel and jet-powered monkeys). Maybe in a larger scale, but the good will mostly be killed/turned (to the bad side) and not resurrected in most cases and the bad ones will kill innocents left and right, but will be just put into prison, which usually either break out etc... Mostly if those villains die in COMIC, they cannot be the main anthologist anymore.

Razgriz0x

Oh sweet. 40 chapter goal huh? Well, I'm looking forward to that. The Shadows, Thanos, The Kree and other E.T. threats... all"taken care of" in a way that would be realistic (for a comic universe) is something I'm sure we'd all love. Still, maybe start this once ATP is over, that way the muses don't get confuse on which comic universe to inspire.

Evermore

Love the idea, I would love to see the interactions between Batman and Ranma especially the fact that Ranma got got so powerful through training alone. I agree with the other comments about Shazanma however.

Brody Meech

It sounds amazing i can't wait for you to write it I'm counting the days.

Tom smith

Just read this after commenting on chapter 2. I’m all for the pairing :D plus the putting villains down when needed thing is more realistic in my opinion