Pop Culture Reference - 93 & 94 (Redo with alternate text) (Patreon)

Hey everyone, a rare peek behind the curtain here.

But I was not satisfied with using Winny's 'prison meat' line in page 93 so I've decided to present an alternative going forward.My reasoning being that I was deliberating over what to put there in the text for a good while, and I wanted something unhinged, tempting but also showing a dominative angle to Winny. Though there hasn't been any backlash here, I make this change since I didn't want to associate Winny with non-consensual tendencies and felt she should represent more positive aspects of sexual relations and especially not bully someone into a new sexual identity. This new line I feel better reflects the mood and atmosphere of the scene to come, promising a passionate evening but doesn't feel so captive in tone.

This is what I plan to keep going forward, though let me know how you feel, your feedback is always greatly appreciated and I may be overthinking this..