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Dominoclaw's Demise

Question. Are they asking "IS she afraid of him?" Or "is she afraid of him?" I read it initially as they felt sad that Trout was afraid of her dad but re-reading makes me feel like they doubt that Trout is afraid of Threasher and actually might like her dad

IndiDreamer

Fear or not, no kid wants to see someone die in front of them. Much less their father. Even if Trout hated him, I still think it's perfectly reasonable that she'd panic and call for help just to stop the fighting. And Trout still shouted for Petrel to run so not like she was trying to get Petrel hurt. It almost feels like this is gonna lead into a self-fulfilling prophecy on Petrel's part. I mean, Trout was always kinda indifferent to daisies. But she did like Petrel, and wanted to help them. But Petrel is reading too much into things I think, and we know already eventually they'll try to kill Trout, which definitely damaged Trout's mental health to some extent... But this is just my interpretation of the situation. Am excited to see more revealed!

Arual

emphasize on the 'is'! petrel is doubting if trout/hake fear thresher at all

Dominoclaw's Demise

I love how you develop the build up of their eventual betrayal

Tomcat

oh that last speech bubble of sturgeons is so painful when we know what happens in the present

Collie

yes give egg the ideas YEASSS

giggleshitter

I got the same vibe! Trout really is just a kid here and Petrel is blaming her already