Page 18 script (requested by metal mulisha) (Patreon)

Page 18

Panel 1

The male recruit is standing over Veronica with a knife while the other male recruit who is restraining her is yelling at him to stab Veronica. Veronica is screaming in fear. The female recruit is washing her eyes out in the sink behind them.

Male recruit holding Veronica down- FINISH HER OFF!




Panel 2

Show Veronica up close in this panel. She has her hand in front of her face and she's scared. ***Veronica now has 6 arms but I'd like you to keep the other arms hidden as best as you can for this panel. FYI- Her top 2 arms are still restrained but her other arms are free.

Veronica thoughts- I felt the stab but but there is no blood on my hand..



Panel 3

This panel needs to be an up close of Veronica's face. She's in a state of shock now.

Veronica- Wait a minute!? MY HANDS ARE TIED UP!"



Panel 4


Veronica is still in shock and has all 6 arms now. Her bottom arms are holding back the recruit who had the knife from stabbing her.

Veronica- Oh......my ......GOD!



Panel 5


Veronica's middle left arm punches the recruit who was holding the knife in the chin and knocks him out. He has now dropped the knife.

No dialogue



Panel 6

***Use a mini panel to show Veronica picking up the knife***

Veronica stabs the female recruit in the head. Show her falling over with the knife stuck in her head.

No dialogue