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I've got a 4 page script ready to go. Here's my test for the star of the short comic. Trying to find a balance between regal and revealing for her outfit. Hard to do. Suggestions and ideas welcome.

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ThePurpleNinja

Not too familiar with Dune, but I'm always willing to help write out stories and/or dialogue. I am a part time writer after all.

KiasyonSFM

I'm a sucker for women in formal dress but still being tits out

Skyllz Millz

bottom left so we can see some shit ripped off her

MagneticEntanglement

I think the skin tight stockings look amazing, be cool if her eyes change color when doing the deed or any eye color effect!

IRN

Knowing bene gesserit, it’s roughly a parody, rather a 100% lord accurate

Sar

I think a latex suit with skin showing at certain areas and a body veil a bit less opaque would go a long way. But your the expert

Sar

A mix of the top left and bottom left would also look good the full body veil is not work with me but that face veil at the bottom left is doing wonders

Skyllz Millz

not to be the most impositive person in the chat, but I was hoping to see some of the ones you have yet to finish see their happy endings... there are many previous short stories/comics that I've been waiting patiently to see get further along if not finished... I feel like now they will all be scrapped or moved passed and I hope that's not case with majority of the promising series.... such as dumbellas, Brady parody, the coxvilles wives, etc... I hope they will see a great year to come as will you too pit

Fuegos300

Is beautiful...🥹❤️

Animeplayer

It's indeed a challenge but not impossible to be regal and lewd. I am sure you can pull it off. Also, a Dune parody, that's very rare to find.

KaiserKock667

Beautiful character! That veiled look with the regal nipple covers would be a fire look to go with imo. Happy new year!!

Maple

Beautiful character! :D I like her outfit! :D I'm excited to see more! 😄

Scrying

I feel like one is a ceremonial outfit and one is for when you're alone with a lord

Andros Vasco

maybe it should focus on the mid section/ torso but hide everything else

MeinFischerArt

The body length veil with cutouts for the good bits is so hot. Is she gonna test the Kwisatz Haderach?

The Hunter

Pit doing a Bimbo Gesserit? Yes! I like the big one on the right, but with the half-cup bra like on the lower left. Plus she needs some tall stripper like boots.

LeHarvek

damn you're blessing us with two rgeat work for this first 2025 day

John C

Some huge Sardaukar cocks...

HammerTyme

The passion takes the weak. This is my passion. My patreon. My NUDE. - Baron Pit circa 10,191 A.G.

HammerTyme

The Baddie Gesserit :)

HammerTyme

The Baddie Gesserit :O

HammerTyme

Interesting idea about the eye color. Maybe Pit can go with green, since in Dune the eyes become blue from Arrakis atmosphere/spice.

HammerTyme

Interesting idea! There's lots to play with. Right now I'm thinking of the quotes and how to lewdify them. Maybe something like "Hate is the lust-killer" or something? It can be a parable about not giving in to hate, because to "kill lust" is to diminish creativity. I've actually been cogitating on some meta and philosophical themes to incorporate into an adult story.

Pagan of The4Whore’sMen

Love. All. This Great ideas, 🔨🕰️ …another thought: a story where your Baddie Gesserits use The Voice To compel attacking Sadukar / Fremmen warriors to obey their sexual commands, turning the tables on them & making them there sXXX slaves. 😈

Tom

Bring some more big tiddies my boy!