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The first half of the next part of my Prequel fan comic. No vore, but some post-vore funnies and plot. Pages 1 and 2, out of 4. Of page 2, there are two versions because I can't decide which third panel I like better. Maybe you can help me decide??

Also, a bonus pic of Katia in the new outfit she looted from her prey (again). But like the lady says, don't get used to it... She'll be looking for a less-revealing set of clothes at her earliest convenience.

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Lurker45

I like version B better. In that one it looks like it's her butt which is keeping her from pulling the pants on, while in version A it more looks like it's her hips which are doing it. Since the previous page is about her being excited to have a big butt it's funny if it just causes a problem right away. I also just like the profile shot. I'll also say splitting up a three-letter word like "fat" on either side of something doesn't look good because it's unbalanced. If only fat had four letters. Comparisons aside, this is great stuff so far.

RagDoll4T9

I prefer the B version myself, something about that side view of her cheeks squishing up from the tight jeans just appeals to me more. :)

Platypus124

The profile shot in B does a better job of showcasing how her body has changed in my opinion, and not just only from her most recent meal but perhaps past ones as well. I also think it emphasizes the movement and effort she is putting into pulling up those pants better. Looks really good so far. The Prelude series is fantastic!

AeonRonin

I personally prefer B version, myself

Yungahboi

Can't wait to see her disposal scene

Michael Becker

I think B is more attractive to look at but A is more humorous. having that extra facial expression helps sell it as a comedic bit. the side view emphasizes the changes to her body more.

Keaton

I prefer version B. While both are great, I just love the side view pants-pull up.

Arcs&Tales

I agree with the comments, version B just looks best to show her gut and struggle