Dangerous Men - Parts 1-3 (Patreon)

New chapter!  This one was short, only around 3k, but I'm for some reason very happy with the dialogue and the way the interactions are going in this short story. 

I feel like I'm finally hitting a stride with writing, where I don't cringe as much reading my own stuff. Please tell me what you thought, I am still an amateur writer and feedback is helpful regardless where you're at.

Or just voyeuristically geek out over these two being in the same room together, Idunno. I've been doing that.