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English process (Patreon)

Published:
2021-04-26 13:41:46
Edited:
2021-04-26 14:32:59
Imported:
2026-06

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Please tell me if this sounds good 🙏

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The Dragonslayer

You can take out the “there is” to “nothin’ better than to heal your wounds then this”. It is more in line with Goku’s county form of speaking

ONROK

All good, the only thing would be the "there's nothing better" instead of "there is nothing better"... To make it sound more casual! :)

SparkingSaiyan

Or to make it more country form of speaking "Nothin' better to heal the wounds"

ONROK

Goku's a pumpkin! XD

Ochaco1

"There is" is another example of two words that can be contracted in English to "There's". The English itself is otherwise great, but we tend to use contractions where possibly- almost habitually - so I hope that helps

The Dragonslayer

Change to “alright I accept your challenge”

Karina

Caulifla should say “We’ve come to challenge you to a rematch”

The Dragonslayer

And change her question to you down? It is a form of slang

ONROK

Im down with Dragonslayers comments

Punisher

Personally I would change "You dare?" to "You down?", "I accept the combat" to "OK, challenge accepted!" and "There is nothing better to heal wounds!" to "Nothin' better to heal your wounds!"

Sir_Loin_Stake_Cakes

I'd tweak Goku's line from, "I accept the combat!" to something less formal, like "I accept!", or "Sure, sounds fun!"