Edits to chapter 3! (Patreon)
Published:
2021-02-04 04:14:50
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2026-06
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I updated a couple of scenes in chapter 3! These ones didn't have problems so much as... there were a couple of details pertaining to Felix's backstory/status within Wychwood that I didn't feel had been adequately conveyed. So in this round of revisions I tried to make those things a bit clearer!
The new pages are already live on the site (you can check them out here and here), but I also wanted to share my preliminary layout planning thumbnails too just for fun! As you can see, the dialogue changed a bit from the initial plotting stage to the final. XD
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