(Full) Victim box 4A : Inmunologic problems (Patreon)

Final version of the previous work i posted some weeks ago please let me know your thoughts about it.

 thanks so much for the patience 

If you want a little context:

In middle of the research to travel to the lungs seems like pneumococcus found a little appetizer , a red blood cell, this particular bacterium does like to make its food get smooth before eat it, aparently by a pretty usefull technicque, sadly for him the prey he got screams a lot so it should be few seconds before any lymphocyte arrives to help this blood cell.